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Old the messiah @ 12-12-2003, 10:05 AM
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Breath forms metaphore for less than normal optical-illusions
nautical-protrusions rest as death gorges ocean floors for topical-soultions
the awesomeness-of-fluid intrigues me deeply concerning the smoothness-of-flows
ruthless-and-slow we breath uneasy seeing how it dooms-us-you-know
I'll prove-it-and-show you smooth unobtrusive blueness laced-wit-gold
what your fate-may-hold concludes the truest viral flu, not a blatent-cold
graced-wit-bold manners i sneeze out spirts, speak-the-lyric
discretely-fear-it for no scene of redeeming light is seen-to-near-him
my dreams-can-hear-itcoming suddenly thundering as masses-disperse
attackin-wit-verbs his actions-were-blurred as he's smokin blunts and ashing-herbs
tracks-reversed as i'm blasting-nerds. snatch-a-purse then revert back-to-words
a tragic-curse, always slept on until hell forms and shells swarm the sword-and-ink
I'm sworn-to-think available threads are there for scorn-and-stink
i store-the-thick syrupy solution to confuse them and coat-humanity
coax-insanity that the brain is sane, and pain is intent-to-kill
scope spit-death-at-will the real poignet poet as i script-text-wit-quills
respect-the-skill, like thugged out rydaz i'm prone-to-bad-feed
the throne-did-grasp-me as i ushered in hate collapsin-a-dynasty
the magic-inside-of-me rendered all hope, and left scope tragically-deprived-of-greed
the master-confined-in-beats, tempo treble boombastic bass level, textual-architect
intellectual's-are-adept at amassing massive rap attacks, im requesting-you-bar-the-rest
cause the rest-of-you-just-scar-my-chest flesh intact never-penetrated
clever-vented-hatred for low post count players is ever-sent-wit-anguish
never-can-you-vanquish the definition-of-siccness
it's not concrete, an anomoly left in your presence to wreck-the-bitches-that-think-it's
a-test-of-wisdom,-relinquish power from these cowards scope-is-unique
the dopeness-intrigues as phrozen,krhyme, and scope clench the throne-in-defeat
only poet-to-be a SUPREME KING & a NULLIFIER before exploding-DA-ILLETE
who you know-is-descrete never watched as shadows casta path-of-darkness
is rap-lethargic, these puppet prophets pen prose not tracks-of-hardness
i smack-guitar-riffs adaptively redefining my sentence-structure
denz-this-clutter obstructs justice thus i cant commence-to-utter
relentless-studder, tripping like acid over faggots-like-lethal
challenge-"rhyme-people" and expect a text display but only snake-like-actions
fakes-might-have-him on a pedastol reppin crews but this is "erase-life"-rappin
as i chase-tight-factions wit mac clipped, employ tactics & gun-down-rap-kings
as you run-out-gasping,fuck these thugged-out-assmen
scope'll snuff-out-aspen then proceed to blow heat at the rest-of-the-state
questioning-hate? next time scope in ya text rhyme ya testin-ya-fate!
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man...you a real poet.

some REAL sophisticated vocabulary in there man..ya flow was pretty much immaculate..

good use of multiples too..

the awesomeness-of-fluid intrigues me deeply concerning the smoothness-of-flows
ruthless-and-slow we breath uneasy seeing how it dooms-us-you-know

too many quotables to list..but that was pretty awesome..






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Old 12-12-2003, 01:35 PM
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after that rhyme about Carbon Dioxide, i had to check diz', u raw, man, u raw, you ill, keep it up, you gotta mic?
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Old 12-12-2003, 08:28 PM
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this was hot...ill reply on RW ...to lazy now
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Old 12-13-2003, 01:57 AM
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.... Nothing short of..... what's the word.... I don't wanna say brilliant... OK, brilliant. lol, Denz. Man..... Shit... I donno what to.... say..... shit.
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Old 12-13-2003, 05:15 AM
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bro that was ok.
it was good for an english poem assignment.
u sounded more like a poet dena rapper
u just seemed to have grabbed a dictionary and put together all these big words
make something that can conect to the origin of rap. and conect to people.
and when u write a rhyme think why ur writing it.....dont jsut write one that sounds fancy and "dope"
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Old 12-14-2003, 05:04 PM
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well i am a poet...but this is a rap...i agree wit the fact it should connect to people...and it does sort of on rapworlds, cause those are the people i talked about...but on 'connecting to the origns of rap' i severely disaggree, we gotta keep moving forward and progressing past previous boundaries...if everything is 'old school' or ganster rap than what the hell are we doing here....no fucking way could i pass off as a better gangster than dr.dre...but i can almost gaurentee that i could rip him in a text battle...when it comes to multies and punches stuff is getting more and more advanced and clever...metaphores being used are just sic...flow will always be a fundamental structure of rap, but subject matter has nothing to do with skill or credability...MCD has songs that are about the wrold being a gift to all of us...but it's much more 'hip-hop' and 'rap' than anything the local thug spit...do you feel me?
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man...you a real poet.

some REAL sophisticated vocabulary in there man..ya flow was pretty much immaculate..

good use of multiples too..

the awesomeness-of-fluid intrigues me deeply concerning the smoothness-of-flows
ruthless-and-slow we breath uneasy seeing how it dooms-us-you-know

too many quotables to list..but that was pretty awesome..






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Old 12-14-2003, 05:15 PM
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i feel ya, rap is getting really fuckin gay- with all this Excalade and bling bling shit. I like it when it's 'underground' and clever..

we need more Nas- Talib Kweli- Aesop Rock in rap.. na mean?
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