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Old a battle verse... @ 03-13-2004, 02:04 AM
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-vs- Aero



this hoes a gelding and Im homophobic so watch as I smoke n melt him
Was gunna do a “U lost to someone” line but all the options were overwhelming
promotes himself quick like “Im nice b*tch!” …Trick!! You a joke honest
and the way you hide ‘swearing’^^ its no wonder you don’t show ‘promise’!!!*
You don’t want it with me son ya season’s over - ya demandin service
bland with curses cuz ya lyrics hold less mass than abandoned churches!!!
Ya stagnant, worthless, if you had a purpose it’s to stand under me
Chump must be pro cigarette corporations cuz he likes fags company!!!
Lad’s up to me? Nah, he’s whack and only recognition's from talking a lot
Appalling with drops cuz judging tennis the only time he was calling the shots
straightness: all that ya not, closets open - he’s a fag and insisted on telling
Cuz he plays ‘on the utha side’ n I don’t mean when he listens to Nelly!!**
Im above you! Like CFCs im fuckin air up, tear guts when I envoke spills
Could be good wit TV controllers but you wouldn’t have remote skill!
ya no thrill my flows ill so when a track's dope its usually when im on it
truthfully and honest kid you've seen more 'boos' than alcoholics (booze)
I'll bruise you wit the phonics and rip and serve ya fickle verbs
shouldn’t expect big terms from him cuz aero’s a man of 'little' words
u christened a herb...skills? You the nadir - put simply you under me dunny
cuz selling me chicken pens the only way I get a 'run' for my money!!!!!
ya done, & its funny, left punctured and bloody Im holdin the weapon
foldin ya efforts cuz ya drive only gets a thumbs up from hitch hikers goin to heaven
boldest expressions, I flow with aggression demented wit killa verbals
victorious? forming a crew with me the only way u enter the Winner's circle
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Old 03-13-2004, 03:27 AM
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cool..I like it..u got nice m.o..
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Old 03-13-2004, 11:57 PM
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thanks...

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Old 03-14-2004, 01:32 AM
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The word play is a bit stressed in some parts but the first 4 lines were really nice. The flow is ok, the multies are good though. Good luck on your battle.

Hey, could you vote on my verse in rapworlds against Con~Vict it's probably on the second page by now. I thought that place was good for batteling...
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Old 03-14-2004, 02:42 PM
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^ You need to get into the Vet Arena...if you want some good votes atleast...
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n'even wit Viagra, yur rhymes don't 'stand-up' to mine/
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Old 03-14-2004, 03:40 PM
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Don't know how though.
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Old 03-14-2004, 11:36 PM
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Apply in the Vet Battle Arena...u need 25 wins...or beat a Vet on the list...
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n'even wit Viagra, yur rhymes don't 'stand-up' to mine/
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Old 03-15-2004, 01:12 AM
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here's a crazy idea.....how about you use the thread i made to comment on the drop within it? wouldnt that be cool?
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Old 03-15-2004, 01:53 PM
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Sorry
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Old 03-15-2004, 11:29 PM
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its ok, its a joke........laugh
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