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Old let tyke step up @ 07-31-2002, 06:06 PM
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heres a a little rhyme i wrote that doesn't really belong in any of my songs so thought i'd let you guys check it out

I feel like a motherfuckin throw away
wish all these problems I caused would just go away
pray to god each day that Ill just disappear
tired of bowing to bulleys cause my hearts so full of fear
pull a tear away from my eye, I would rather die
then let another drop touch the ground, so I sit and cry
a valley of dry pain that no one knows, causeI aint never told
That Im colder than Minnesota in the winter when it begins to snow
so light a match and make sure the shit burnsand turns to flame
these assholes predetermined my fate and didnt learn my name
I feel like everyday I live is a pound on my chest
people think that Im not trying, but I gave my best
still failed the test, and wished that Id fuckin die
so I wouldnt suffer a moment, livin life this vilified
people always forget that we exist as one, and some
would cost a life at once for the reward of fun
music isnt made for anybody but musaicians
so check those lyrics youve written before you start to dissin

hope you don't think it's too whack
i'd appreciate any feedback good or bad
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Old 07-31-2002, 06:18 PM
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i ddint think it was wahck at all it was semi-deep and had a few warm(not hot) lines

vocab could def. be improved but overall nice message keep spittin

do me a fav take a couple mins to read my rhyme and leave your thought

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Old 07-31-2002, 06:24 PM
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Thanks kash, i'll post some of my better shit later
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Sad Old 08-01-2002, 11:06 AM
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Old Re: let tyke step up @ 06-03-2012, 01:33 AM
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Uppin this piece.
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