eminem web left web right
bar right
headlinesbar right footer






Go Back   Eminem Web Board > Emcee Area > Bust a Rhyme

Reply
 
Thread Tools Rate Thread Display Modes
)(*Side.Kick*)(
aka uzi man
 
)(*Side.Kick*)('s Avatar
 
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: LA,CALI
Posts: 560
EW Cash: 0.00
Rep Power: 229
)(*Side.Kick*)( is a splendid one to behold)(*Side.Kick*)( is a splendid one to behold)(*Side.Kick*)( is a splendid one to behold)(*Side.Kick*)( is a splendid one to behold)(*Side.Kick*)( is a splendid one to behold)(*Side.Kick*)( is a splendid one to behold)(*Side.Kick*)( is a splendid one to behold

Send a message via AIM to )(*Side.Kick*)( Send a message via MSN to )(*Side.Kick*)( Send a message via Skype™ to )(*Side.Kick*)(
Old Mad Crazy Guy pt2 @ 07-08-2006, 04:41 PM
#1

So afta i shot him i saw his Brotha from anotha mother
So i shot his brother an then i saw his Father

I was thinkin wat the hell did this guy bring his whole family
So i blew 2 of them away happily

His father was so pisssed off man i had to run
So he chased me till my foot got num

We were both so tired we swong at each otha n missed
i was so drunk i almost pissed

But luckely 1 of my punches hit him in tha jawl
so i stood there drunk n watched 2 of him fall

So i shot him in the leg so he would have to crawl
N it seemed to me he was gettin tall
  )(*Side.Kick*)( is offline   AddThis Social Bookmark Button     Reply With Quote
OvaDose
The Black Rose
 
OvaDose's Avatar
 
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Newlands
Age: 30
Posts: 1,442
EW Cash: 2543.50
Rep Power: 284
OvaDose owns Eminem WebOvaDose owns Eminem WebOvaDose owns Eminem WebOvaDose owns Eminem WebOvaDose owns Eminem WebOvaDose owns Eminem WebOvaDose owns Eminem WebOvaDose owns Eminem WebOvaDose owns Eminem WebOvaDose owns Eminem WebOvaDose owns Eminem Web

Send a message via MSN to OvaDose
Old Re: Mad Crazy Guy pt2 @ 07-09-2006, 10:30 PM
#2

um learn multies and vocab anyone can rhyme 1 syllable words cuz

keep working at it
__________________
Your death is overdue like your rhymeís there played out and chronic/
Im demonic with rhymes that are harmonic, you could say thatís ironic//

The games-mean, the mainstreams just got the same-Theme/
I got the illest multies, something like a big daddy kane-dream//


www.soundclick.com/ovadose

OvaDose - 'Urban Revolution' MixTape...

KSFTBOM Member! (O.G)
  OvaDose is offline   AddThis Social Bookmark Button     Reply With Quote
Eleven
~1124~
 
Eleven's Avatar
 
Join Date: Dec 2005
Age: 33
Posts: 6,974
EW Cash: 45729.00
Rep Power: 381
Eleven owns Eminem WebEleven owns Eminem WebEleven owns Eminem WebEleven owns Eminem WebEleven owns Eminem WebEleven owns Eminem WebEleven owns Eminem WebEleven owns Eminem WebEleven owns Eminem WebEleven owns Eminem WebEleven owns Eminem Web

Send a message via AIM to Eleven Send a message via Yahoo to Eleven
Old Re: Mad Crazy Guy pt2 @ 07-10-2006, 10:01 AM
#3

yeah elevate on almost everything...

multies,wordplay,metaphors,similes,alliteration,flow,and your vocab

keep trying tho
  Eleven is offline   AddThis Social Bookmark Button     Reply With Quote
DeA†h
†MetaL GoD†
 
DeA†h's Avatar
 
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: Deep In The Realms Of Psychosis
Age: 35
Posts: 9,872
EW Cash: 473.00
Rep Power: 381
DeA†h owns Eminem WebDeA†h owns Eminem WebDeA†h owns Eminem WebDeA†h owns Eminem WebDeA†h owns Eminem WebDeA†h owns Eminem WebDeA†h owns Eminem WebDeA†h owns Eminem WebDeA†h owns Eminem WebDeA†h owns Eminem WebDeA†h owns Eminem Web

Old Re: Mad Crazy Guy pt2 @ 07-10-2006, 10:51 AM
#4

Alliteration ain't necessary in text.
__________________

  DeA†h is offline   AddThis Social Bookmark Button     Reply With Quote
Reply


Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
 
Thread Tools
Display Modes Rate This Thread
Rate This Thread:

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is Off
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump

Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
Crazy Emci Eminem 1 03-21-2005 07:58 AM
am i crazy raplove Advice 29 12-26-2003 01:45 AM
going crazy slimfrikinshady General Discussion 11 10-03-2003 02:21 PM
Crazy Renee07112 Mine Fields 0 12-19-2002 02:13 PM


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 11:42 PM.


right_block_header
Richest Members

1. Diatribe
2. Don Messenger
3. Aic713
4. Bankô
5. Crazee
6. Kari
7. Riddler
8. Stanatic
9. Denz
10. MCD
Eminem Web
left_block_header
Latest Discussions

left_block_footer
Designed by Kari & Denz.
Powered by Rap Worlds Technology & vBulletin® Version 3.8.7
Copyright ©2000 - 2022, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.