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inner rhyming and multies @ 02-15-2007, 03:10 PM
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lets get this sorted once and for all everyone seems to be confused about this, so what do you all think inner rhyming and multies are?? give your definition
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Re: inner rhyming and multies @ 02-15-2007, 04:25 PM
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Inner rhyming is when you rhyme in the middle of a line/bar, as in:
There's five ways to say I'm gay
My mates rhymes stay hi Jade
The bolded rhymes are inner rhyming and the rhymes at the end of the line are just....the rhyme scheme.
Multies = multi syllable rhymes and that's rhyming more than one syllable, which could be just one word, with more than one syllable, or it could be rhyming more than one word, likeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee:
Pancake/damn straight/fan base
Pancake = one word, but more than one syllable, and you can rhyme more than one word with it.
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Re: inner rhyming and multies @ 02-15-2007, 05:49 PM
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wow i'm amazed at jades knowledge on rap
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Re: inner rhyming and multies @ 02-15-2007, 07:57 PM
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that coulda been ben knowledge..if hes still there im behind lol
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Re: inner rhyming and multies @ 02-15-2007, 11:46 PM
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agreed with what jade/Ben said..
btw i think jade use to rap
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Re: inner rhyming and multies @ 02-16-2007, 04:14 AM
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you people are retarded lol that had Ben's name all over it.
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Re: inner rhyming and multies @ 02-16-2007, 08:31 AM
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i was being sarcastic for fuck sake....
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Re: inner rhyming and multies @ 02-16-2007, 11:46 AM
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lol, yes. That was obviously Ben. He didn't bother to say it was him, though. And no I didn't use to rap, I just wrote stupid little so-called rhymes. You know how it is...
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Crush the glass from my bare hands and swallow it
Then spit it back in the faces of you racists
and hypocrites who think the same shit but don't say shit
You Liberace's, Versace's, and you nazis
Watch me, cause you thinkin you got me in this hot seat
You motherfuckers wanna JUDGE me cause you're NOT me
You'll never STOP me, I'm TOP speed as you POP me
I came to save these new generations of babies
from parents who failed to raise 'em cause they're lazy
to grow to praise me I'm makin 'em go crazy
That's how I got this whole nation to embrace me
And you fugazi if you think I'ma admit wrong
I cripple any hypocritic critic I'm sic'd on
And this song is for any kid who gets picked on
A sick song to retaliate to, and it's called..
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Re: inner rhyming and multies @ 02-16-2007, 03:46 PM
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lol^^
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Re: inner rhyming and multies @ 03-02-2007, 05:59 AM
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What jade said is right, but it goes a lot further than this, you can have another rhyme scheme in the middle of a rhyme..
Ex.
I'll put the inner rhyme in bold...
Acura on chrome, passin me dome
Next minute, shit I'm finished, she'll be flaggin it home
Or to take it even further...
Pack margarine, black laundry, CASE OF SHELLS
Never DAVE CHAPELLE
Half bakin', half fakin', I was cash-chasin' at the AGE OF TWELVE..
See what I'm sayin??
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Re: inner rhyming and multies @ 03-02-2007, 10:37 AM
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well multie'z v
dun know why you do thiz it'z stupid az fuck
fuckin crushin ur rhymne'z i'll crush you usin a truck
Inner'z v
i stab you in the back and it'z a tragedy
people are sad callin me bad and people are mad at me
I think inner'z are just rhymne'z in the middle of the line that rhymne wid the word'z in the middle of the next line
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Re: inner rhyming and multies @ 03-03-2007, 06:53 AM
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bullshit man how do using and stupid rhyme??..wtf
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Re: inner rhyming and multies @ 03-03-2007, 04:49 PM
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^^
lol what?
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Re: inner rhyming and multies @ 03-03-2007, 06:56 PM
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using a truck
stupid as fuck
=not a multie
because using and stupid don't rhyme
get it now??
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Re: inner rhyming and multies @ 03-04-2007, 08:44 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Eleven 24
using a truck
stupid as fuck
=not a multie
because using and stupid don't rhyme
get it now??
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^^ i seen a lot of people say stuff like that...it doesnt have to be a perfect rhyme like cat bat fat...if youre rapping its enough if the syllables sound the same
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