.:OvaDose.:vs:.Keyst yle:.

[Bank™]

10 bars

House rules... yall know whats up..

[Bank™]

10 bars

House rules... yall know whats up..

[OvaDose]

Check
5 days to drop after check all good for you key?

[OvaDose]

Check
5 days to drop after check all good for you key?

[Alacran]

yeah..lol im on a four day week3nd so no probs check!

[Alacran]

yeah..lol im on a four day week3nd so no probs check!

[OvaDose]

This will do.. Just awaiting your drop now key



Look man you aint being legit*1, here come my punches im laying down a swinging spit
I asked you straight up in a PM if you wanted beef, you said “no”, to bad im bringing this shit

*1= Being legit about his age.

I had something to tell you man, I didn’t know if you could handle the truth but its better you knew
You should have stayed away from rap, you aint got shit on me and in rap im better then you

With every letter it’s true, Get this guy a woman, he’s deprived, please he’s squealing for sex
So tell me what’s next? The only way you could be anything like me is by stealing my text*2

*2= On MSN he wanted to know what font I used so he could use it and 2nd meaning is like stealing what I wrote.

You couldn’t touch a 2 inch ceiling erect, this aint beef man this shits thicker
You can lie all day about your age, but I can guarantee that my dick’s bigger

Im chipping at ya heart, accepting my battle had you slipping from the start
Please tell my key, how does it feel, knowing a 15 year olds ripping you apart

So what, you made my signature, it’s just as shit as you, I’ll slit your throat key
This is too easy, the only way you could ever win is by asking K.A.L “please Vote 4 me”*3

*3= Meaning couldn’t win without crew votes

Fucking faggot, please quit I can’t believe he came back, im killing this princess
Keys shit, this guy loves getting his hands on balls it say’s in his interests*4

*4= says he likes basketball in his interests

This guy changed his name from freestyle to keystyle because he spends hours writing a day
Bitch just can’t think of shit fast enough, fucking retard, please stop fighting, you’re gay!

* Time to get down to business *

Guess what, when you left I had no idea, because basically I wasn’t concerned you’d gone
Desperate little boy, May as well call you a TV cause even little kids turn you on

* Finisher *

You Admit defeat to solo and cullision, fuck beef with you, I just chewed through this meat
It’s best you admire it, fucking bitch retire quick and add me to that list of cat’s you can’t beat

[OvaDose]

This will do.. Just awaiting your drop now key



Look man you aint being legit*1, here come my punches im laying down a swinging spit
I asked you straight up in a PM if you wanted beef, you said “no”, to bad im bringing this shit

*1= Being legit about his age.

I had something to tell you man, I didn’t know if you could handle the truth but its better you knew
You should have stayed away from rap, you aint got shit on me and in rap im better then you

With every letter it’s true, Get this guy a woman, he’s deprived, please he’s squealing for sex
So tell me what’s next? The only way you could be anything like me is by stealing my text*2

*2= On MSN he wanted to know what font I used so he could use it and 2nd meaning is like stealing what I wrote.

You couldn’t touch a 2 inch ceiling erect, this aint beef man this shits thicker
You can lie all day about your age, but I can guarantee that my dick’s bigger

Im chipping at ya heart, accepting my battle had you slipping from the start
Please tell my key, how does it feel, knowing a 15 year olds ripping you apart

So what, you made my signature, it’s just as shit as you, I’ll slit your throat key
This is too easy, the only way you could ever win is by asking K.A.L “please Vote 4 me”*3

*3= Meaning couldn’t win without crew votes

Fucking faggot, please quit I can’t believe he came back, im killing this princess
Keys shit, this guy loves getting his hands on balls it say’s in his interests*4

*4= says he likes basketball in his interests

This guy changed his name from freestyle to keystyle because he spends hours writing a day
Bitch just can’t think of shit fast enough, fucking retard, please stop fighting, you’re gay!

* Time to get down to business *

Guess what, when you left I had no idea, because basically I wasn’t concerned you’d gone
Desperate little boy, May as well call you a TV cause even little kids turn you on

* Finisher *

You Admit defeat to solo and cullision, fuck beef with you, I just chewed through this meat
It’s best you admire it, fucking bitch retire quick and add me to that list of cat’s you can’t beat

[Alacran]

Go from raggin-to-rich ill bust a mag-on-this-bitch
give him something u cant funkin heal with a stitch

lyricly murder this Ovadose kid you know his flows shit
if u planned on winnin this shit u shoulda upped ya Dosage

Grab ya bitch-from-her-house i put my dick-in-her-mouth
i sucked in the battle with cullision but "LOOK @ Me now"

your new-to-the-game-kid but ull still never be famous
all around people arlready know what my name is

im here to rekindle-my-flame bitch rise-back-into-fame
im back-in-the-game no one is packin-the-same

why would u want 15 bars kid u cant even handle-this-10
Ovadose is a chick he just acts like a man-on-the-net

cmon like uve ever seen a pill in ur life kid
talken bout me erect? cover up cus u like dick

claimin you from queens this bitch is probly from "Texas"
say im squeelin for it? this kid dont even know what sex is

you changed ur name form *OvAdOsE* to Ovadose prick
you lost the star "see the connection" no fame bitch

+FINISHER+
i kick but-every-week i fuck-sluts-when-they-weak
Ovadose a squirl the way he puts nuts-in-cheeks (oh)


O.K let the voting begin!!!

[Alacran]

Go from raggin-to-rich ill bust a mag-on-this-bitch
give him something u cant funkin heal with a stitch

lyricly murder this Ovadose kid you know his flows shit
if u planned on winnin this shit u shoulda upped ya Dosage

Grab ya bitch-from-her-house i put my dick-in-her-mouth
i sucked in the battle with cullision but "LOOK @ Me now"

your new-to-the-game-kid but ull still never be famous
all around people arlready know what my name is

im here to rekindle-my-flame bitch rise-back-into-fame
im back-in-the-game no one is packin-the-same

why would u want 15 bars kid u cant even handle-this-10
Ovadose is a chick he just acts like a man-on-the-net

cmon like uve ever seen a pill in ur life kid
talken bout me erect? cover up cus u like dick

claimin you from queens this bitch is probly from "Texas"
say im squeelin for it? this kid dont even know what sex is

you changed ur name form *OvAdOsE* to Ovadose prick
you lost the star "see the connection" no fame bitch

+FINISHER+
i kick but-every-week i fuck-sluts-when-they-weak
Ovadose a squirl the way he puts nuts-in-cheeks (oh)


O.K let the voting begin!!!

[DeA†h]

OvaDose
Look man you aint being legit, here come my punches im laying down a swinging spit
I asked you straight up in a PM if you wanted beef, you said “no”, to bad im bringing this shit
Nope. Not A Punch...Didn't Utilize The Personal Well. Not The Best Bar To Start A Verse With.

I had something to tell you man, I didn’t know if you could handle the truth but its better you knew
You should have stayed away from rap, you aint got shit on me and in rap im better then you
There's No Punch, No Multie...Nothing.

With every letter it’s true, Get this guy a woman, he’s deprived, please he’s squealing for sex
So tell me what’s next? The only way you could be anything like me is by stealing my text
Majorly Played Punch.

You couldn’t touch a 2 inch ceiling erect, this aint beef man this shits thicker
You can lie all day about your age, but I can guarantee that my dick’s bigger
LOL...Wtf? No, Dude.

I'm chipping at ya heart, accepting my battle had you slipping from the start
Please tell my key, how does it feel, knowing a 15 year olds ripping you apart?
LOL, He's 14 Or Something And You're 15. It Isn't Much Of A Difference.

So what, you made my signature, it’s just as shit as you, I’ll slit your throat key
This is too easy, the only way you could ever win is by asking K.A.L “please Vote 4 me”
Veeerry Weak Punch.

Fucking faggot, please quit I can’t believe he came back, im killing this princess
Keys shit, this guy loves getting his hands on balls it say’s in his interests
Could've Made The Personal Sound More Better. Could've Used Wordplay. But I Guess It's An O.K Line

This guy changed his name from freestyle to keystyle because he spends hours writing a day
Bitch just can’t think of shit fast enough, fucking retard, please stop fighting, you’re gay!
That Is A Wack Bar. Didn't Cause Any Damage AT ALL.

Guess what, when you left I had no idea, because basically I wasn’t concerned you’d gone
Desperate little boy, May as well call you a TV cause even little kids turn you on
Untrue Personal. But The Metaphor Was Funny.

You Admit defeat to solo and cullision, fuck beef with you, I just chewed through this meat
It’s best you admire it, fucking bitch retire quick and add me to that list of cat’s you can’t beat
Not A Strong Bar To End The Verse. Remember, The 1st Bar And The Last Bars Of A Verse SHOULD Have A Punch.

-----x-----

Keystyle
Go from raggin-to-rich ill bust a mag-on-this-bitch
give him something u cant funkin heal with a stitch
No. Not A Good Opener.

lyricly murder this Ovadose kid you know his flows shit
if u planned on winnin this shit u shoulda upped ya Dosage
A Bit Weak But Good Enough.

Grab ya bitch-from-her-house i put my dick-in-her-mouth
i sucked in the battle with cullision but "LOOK @ Me now"
Wtf? No.

your new-to-the-game-kid but ull still never be famous
all around people arlready know what my name is
This Is A Battle, Not A Boasting Competition.

im here to rekindle-my-flame bitch rise-back-into-fame
im back-in-the-game no one is packin-the-same
Weak. And Don't Use The Same Multies Over And Over.

why would u want 15 bars kid u cant even handle-this-10
Ovadose is a chick he just acts like a man-on-the-net
Untrue Personal. You Don't Know Him.

cmon like uve ever seen a pill in ur life kid
talken bout me erect? cover up cus u like dick
Don't Bite From Ovadose. And Paleeese...Those 'You Like Dick' Lines Are All Rusty And Ain't Even Funny Anymore.

claimin you from queens this bitch is probly from "Texas"
say im squeelin for it? this kid dont even know what sex is
Again, Don't Bite. And Wahla, Another Weak Line.

you changed ur name form *OvAdOsE* to Ovadose prick
you lost the star "see the connection" no fame bitch
LOLOL....I'm Laughin Cause The 2nd Line Sounds Stupid.

i kick but-every-week i fuck-sluts-when-they-weak
Ovadose a squirl the way he puts nuts-in-cheeks (oh)
Finally, A Funny Metaphor. Nice Way To End A Bar.

Punches: Draw
Personals: OvaDose
Multies: Keystyle
Metas: Draw
Flow: Keystyle [His Multies Helped The Flow Here.]
Wordplay: ---
Creativity: OvaDose [Even Though He Doesn't Deserve It, I Didn't Like Keystyle Biting From OvaDose. That Wasn't 'Creative'.]
Nameplay: Keystyle [Even Though OvaDose Could've Snatched This Cat.]
Complexity: ---
Consistency: --- [Both Were Consistantly Weak]
Vocab: ---

Overall Vote: Keystyle

My Thoughts: OvaDose And Keystyle Need To Elevate Hella More. This Was Probably 1 Of The Weakest Battle's I've Ever Voted On. You Guys Gotta Be Creative. Think About Every Single Line. Don't Just Cock Scribble Some Shit And Drop It Here Callin It A Battle Verse..Matter Of Fact, That's An Embaressment To You. And You Should Never Boast In A Battle. Every Line Has To Be Confrontational Not Self-Boasting. That Never Earns You Votes Instead It Earns You Severe Criticism. And Use Wordplay And Multies Atleast Twice In Your Lines, OvaDose. Not 1 At The Ends. I'll Just Say That, I'm Disappointed With OvaDose. You Were Decent The Last Time You Battled Bank. Now You Look So Vulnerable. And Keystyle, You Should Technically Be Dis-Qualified For Biting. But I Guess You've Escaped. Bottom Line, You Both Gotta Elevate From Like Right Now. My Advice To You Both Is, Look At The Battles Of People Who Are Vets And Know What They're Spittin. Study Their Lines, Their Punches. Look At The Way They Structure Each Line. Don't Just Stick To Battling On Eminemweb. Join Different Battle Sites And Take On People Who're 5-10 Times Stronger Than You. That's What I Did. It Don't Matter If You Lose, Cause A Loss Is A Stepping Stone For Success. And Don't EVER Flip Out On The People Criticising You. Remember, They're Only Trying To Help. I've Learnt That During My Course.

-1-

[DeA†h]

OvaDose
Look man you aint being legit, here come my punches im laying down a swinging spit
I asked you straight up in a PM if you wanted beef, you said “no”, to bad im bringing this shit
Nope. Not A Punch...Didn't Utilize The Personal Well. Not The Best Bar To Start A Verse With.

I had something to tell you man, I didn’t know if you could handle the truth but its better you knew
You should have stayed away from rap, you aint got shit on me and in rap im better then you
There's No Punch, No Multie...Nothing.

With every letter it’s true, Get this guy a woman, he’s deprived, please he’s squealing for sex
So tell me what’s next? The only way you could be anything like me is by stealing my text
Majorly Played Punch.

You couldn’t touch a 2 inch ceiling erect, this aint beef man this shits thicker
You can lie all day about your age, but I can guarantee that my dick’s bigger
LOL...Wtf? No, Dude.

I'm chipping at ya heart, accepting my battle had you slipping from the start
Please tell my key, how does it feel, knowing a 15 year olds ripping you apart?
LOL, He's 14 Or Something And You're 15. It Isn't Much Of A Difference.

So what, you made my signature, it’s just as shit as you, I’ll slit your throat key
This is too easy, the only way you could ever win is by asking K.A.L “please Vote 4 me”
Veeerry Weak Punch.

Fucking faggot, please quit I can’t believe he came back, im killing this princess
Keys shit, this guy loves getting his hands on balls it say’s in his interests
Could've Made The Personal Sound More Better. Could've Used Wordplay. But I Guess It's An O.K Line

This guy changed his name from freestyle to keystyle because he spends hours writing a day
Bitch just can’t think of shit fast enough, fucking retard, please stop fighting, you’re gay!
That Is A Wack Bar. Didn't Cause Any Damage AT ALL.

Guess what, when you left I had no idea, because basically I wasn’t concerned you’d gone
Desperate little boy, May as well call you a TV cause even little kids turn you on
Untrue Personal. But The Metaphor Was Funny.

You Admit defeat to solo and cullision, fuck beef with you, I just chewed through this meat
It’s best you admire it, fucking bitch retire quick and add me to that list of cat’s you can’t beat
Not A Strong Bar To End The Verse. Remember, The 1st Bar And The Last Bars Of A Verse SHOULD Have A Punch.

-----x-----

Keystyle
Go from raggin-to-rich ill bust a mag-on-this-bitch
give him something u cant funkin heal with a stitch
No. Not A Good Opener.

lyricly murder this Ovadose kid you know his flows shit
if u planned on winnin this shit u shoulda upped ya Dosage
A Bit Weak But Good Enough.

Grab ya bitch-from-her-house i put my dick-in-her-mouth
i sucked in the battle with cullision but "LOOK @ Me now"
Wtf? No.

your new-to-the-game-kid but ull still never be famous
all around people arlready know what my name is
This Is A Battle, Not A Boasting Competition.

im here to rekindle-my-flame bitch rise-back-into-fame
im back-in-the-game no one is packin-the-same
Weak. And Don't Use The Same Multies Over And Over.

why would u want 15 bars kid u cant even handle-this-10
Ovadose is a chick he just acts like a man-on-the-net
Untrue Personal. You Don't Know Him.

cmon like uve ever seen a pill in ur life kid
talken bout me erect? cover up cus u like dick
Don't Bite From Ovadose. And Paleeese...Those 'You Like Dick' Lines Are All Rusty And Ain't Even Funny Anymore.

claimin you from queens this bitch is probly from "Texas"
say im squeelin for it? this kid dont even know what sex is
Again, Don't Bite. And Wahla, Another Weak Line.

you changed ur name form *OvAdOsE* to Ovadose prick
you lost the star "see the connection" no fame bitch
LOLOL....I'm Laughin Cause The 2nd Line Sounds Stupid.

i kick but-every-week i fuck-sluts-when-they-weak
Ovadose a squirl the way he puts nuts-in-cheeks (oh)
Finally, A Funny Metaphor. Nice Way To End A Bar.

Punches: Draw
Personals: OvaDose
Multies: Keystyle
Metas: Draw
Flow: Keystyle [His Multies Helped The Flow Here.]
Wordplay: ---
Creativity: OvaDose [Even Though He Doesn't Deserve It, I Didn't Like Keystyle Biting From OvaDose. That Wasn't 'Creative'.]
Nameplay: Keystyle [Even Though OvaDose Could've Snatched This Cat.]
Complexity: ---
Consistency: --- [Both Were Consistantly Weak]
Vocab: ---

Overall Vote: Keystyle

My Thoughts: OvaDose And Keystyle Need To Elevate Hella More. This Was Probably 1 Of The Weakest Battle's I've Ever Voted On. You Guys Gotta Be Creative. Think About Every Single Line. Don't Just Cock Scribble Some Shit And Drop It Here Callin It A Battle Verse..Matter Of Fact, That's An Embaressment To You. And You Should Never Boast In A Battle. Every Line Has To Be Confrontational Not Self-Boasting. That Never Earns You Votes Instead It Earns You Severe Criticism. And Use Wordplay And Multies Atleast Twice In Your Lines, OvaDose. Not 1 At The Ends. I'll Just Say That, I'm Disappointed With OvaDose. You Were Decent The Last Time You Battled Bank. Now You Look So Vulnerable. And Keystyle, You Should Technically Be Dis-Qualified For Biting. But I Guess You've Escaped. Bottom Line, You Both Gotta Elevate From Like Right Now. My Advice To You Both Is, Look At The Battles Of People Who Are Vets And Know What They're Spittin. Study Their Lines, Their Punches. Look At The Way They Structure Each Line. Don't Just Stick To Battling On Eminemweb. Join Different Battle Sites And Take On People Who're 5-10 Times Stronger Than You. That's What I Did. It Don't Matter If You Lose, Cause A Loss Is A Stepping Stone For Success. And Don't EVER Flip Out On The People Criticising You. Remember, They're Only Trying To Help. I've Learnt That During My Course.

-1-

[CR/\IG]

keystyle for me i jus liked it beter

sorry ovadose

[CR/\IG]

keystyle for me i jus liked it beter

sorry ovadose

[Cullision]

Opener: none
Flow: key
Multies: key
Vocab: od
Metas: key
Punches: none
Disses: od
Personals: od, easy
Finisher: key

overall: key

overdose: you gotta work on your lines...there stretched like crazy and come up with better punches. The whole "he needs votes from his crew to win" thing got played a long time ago.

key: you gotta work on more personals, and you should never boast in a battle. also try and put more punches in your verses, alotta those lines are fillers that aint true anyway like the "all around people arlready know what my name is" noone knows what your name is lol

[Cullision]

Opener: none
Flow: key
Multies: key
Vocab: od
Metas: key
Punches: none
Disses: od
Personals: od, easy
Finisher: key

overall: key

overdose: you gotta work on your lines...there stretched like crazy and come up with better punches. The whole "he needs votes from his crew to win" thing got played a long time ago.

key: you gotta work on more personals, and you should never boast in a battle. also try and put more punches in your verses, alotta those lines are fillers that aint true anyway like the "all around people arlready know what my name is" noone knows what your name is lol

[Bank™]

keystyle wins...

[Bank™]

keystyle wins...

[Carnage™]

^ WRONG

I'm opening this back up.

Craig is a noooooob, and doesn't rap. Not that his OPINION means any less than anyone else, but that's all it is, opinion. He doesn't know anything factual about rap. He also didn't vote in cats and/or explain his vote. I know Craig probably thinks this is just because I hate him or something, but it honestly isn't. I don't hate anybody, my insults are jokes.


I'll vote - I vote for Ovadose. His verse had better multies, and more direct disses, his lines were stretched and need fixing but still, he had the better overall verse in my opinion. Keystyle is getting better, but he lacks any type of complexity, is played out and indirect.

[Carnage™]

^ WRONG

I'm opening this back up.

Craig is a noooooob, and doesn't rap. Not that his OPINION means any less than anyone else, but that's all it is, opinion. He doesn't know anything factual about rap. He also didn't vote in cats and/or explain his vote. I know Craig probably thinks this is just because I hate him or something, but it honestly isn't. I don't hate anybody, my insults are jokes.


I'll vote - I vote for Ovadose. His verse had better multies, and more direct disses, his lines were stretched and need fixing but still, he had the better overall verse in my opinion. Keystyle is getting better, but he lacks any type of complexity, is played out and indirect.

[Flawless]

i was actually gonnna agree with you in voting for ovadose.


because.

even though his lines are pretty long and shit he actually has personals. and keystyle didnt have any plus he bragged in a battle. and the thing he bragged about isnt true lol


so ya ovadose

[Flawless]

i was actually gonnna agree with you in voting for ovadose.


because.

even though his lines are pretty long and shit he actually has personals. and keystyle didnt have any plus he bragged in a battle. and the thing he bragged about isnt true lol


so ya ovadose

[Bank™]

welll... sorry i closed this... i didn't notice that it was CRAIG who voted... i saw the "2-0 me" and then i saw an explained vote that gave him the win....



sooo... i'll vote now...


i vote for ovadose... like ben said it was a more complexed and more expirienced looking verse... not SICK multies but some were alright.... work on your punches...


keystyle played off of OD's verse which should not be aloud ... and had ALOT of forced multies and in most cases didn't use multies right...


you both need to elevate...

[Bank™]

welll... sorry i closed this... i didn't notice that it was CRAIG who voted... i saw the "2-0 me" and then i saw an explained vote that gave him the win....



sooo... i'll vote now...


i vote for ovadose... like ben said it was a more complexed and more expirienced looking verse... not SICK multies but some were alright.... work on your punches...


keystyle played off of OD's verse which should not be aloud ... and had ALOT of forced multies and in most cases didn't use multies right...


you both need to elevate...

[Bank™]

uppin for votes...

[Bank™]

uppin for votes...

[Alacran]

2-3 now..damnit..lol

[Alacran]

2-3 now..damnit..lol

[Darkness]

Ovadose..If it has to be in cats dont except it but im running low on time..

[Darkness]

Ovadose..If it has to be in cats dont except it but im running low on time..