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Old Mc Torment Vs Jizm @ 12-05-2002, 01:51 PM
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You got heart callin me out, mustve had this one written/
you must be kiddin battlin JIZM, u aint even got rhythm/
last i remember u couldnt rhyme right, did u get lessons?/
U got tired of suckin dick, took this up as a profession?/
Did i mention i got much better, and u couldnt beat me then/
Knock you out with the mic, Damn right JIZM creepin again/
Niggas sleepin again? better call sway and tech and wake up/
Eat JIZM?, you gay fuck, this nut all up in your face like makeup/
Blaze you from the waist up, words like bullets split your torso/
After i finish you,we can battle a second time in morse code/
I torment mc's especially those who challenge their idol/
Bring it pussy but you wont be able to ease pain wit mydol/
i spray words like lysol, disinfecting hiphop of u germs/
Im like d-bo, my gat leaves u smokey i hook off on big worms/
Im hot headed like fresh perms, my wick shorter than midgets/
bitch niggas are full of pooh like tigger, eyore, owl and piglet/
play your little bitch ass like u stole makeup, take cover girl/
Knowin how to rhyme is alien to you, Im from another world/
You cant SCREW wit me, this is a BAD THREAD for you/
Wack fuck, i do away wit bad lines the same way BOTOX do....


we can go round for round if u want......no beef...take these for in battle....1
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Old 12-05-2002, 03:31 PM
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is this board unbiased? i'd rather battle you @ http://www.nlhd.com/forums/ ....

lets battle on both boards, i'll post my rhume here , then i'll post our rhymes on nlhd when its back up ... so we'll have the same battle in 2 different boards ... see who wins both...

first one who reaches 3 votes will win ..... 3-0 is tko

confirm if you aight with that ^^^^ , i wont drop till u tell me what you think of it...
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Old 12-05-2002, 06:06 PM
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cool, whatever
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Old 12-06-2002, 09:56 AM
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okydoky i'll drop tonight
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Old 12-06-2002, 01:09 PM
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Yo I値l perform methaphorical punches like sorcery yours be like honouring me/
I値l take your remainings on tour with me, you cornering me?/
Don稚 worry nobody will be mourning me/
I値l beat you to a critical condition, send you straight to the mortician/
Sign a petition to get Jizm down as a musician/
Now listen to this mission to destroy any opposition with ambition/
My punches are coming hard, start looking for a dental technician/
I知a hit you from an angular position that値l make a new definition of the word lyrical composition/
I知 punching Jizm to a phantom, kicking punches at random to split that phantom to a single atomn/
Selldom you値l see a 堵angsta like Jizm get beaten to helldom/
And if you really selling crack, what the fuck are you doing behind your internet connection?/
I知 teaching you one lesson, stick to your profession/
Stop flashin cuz i値l give you terror like the day planes started crashin/
My style will bute you like a fang, ram you in a can hide the can in a dam/
And i hope there痴 no such thing as reincarnation, cuz then i値l have to do it again/
I値l get your skull slit, trow anthrax in your ass crack and in that head split/
Your style is too simplistic, i値l rip your face of attach it to mine and wear it to the rap olympics/
Ride over you with a stolen van Pass, those remainings to a freshman/
He値l play with it or more likely throw it in a trashcan/
I値l go back and forth till the crack of dawn/
With enough testostaron to beat you till you think you my daughter and we can het the incest on/
As i said i知 throwing antrax in your ass crack that値l get your yeast rash back/
Ever guessed that? You wont last or reply back, you値l be past dead/
Body soaked wet, your front head covered with red/
Now i知 letting the world see you aint gangsta by no means, just a born liar/
Now you crying, getting higher, I allready murdered you and kep the 土ou aint gansta jokes as backfire/
So there you have it Jizm, you have been exposed/
Most overdosed with punches since Lewis turned tyson into toast/
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Old 12-07-2002, 06:11 AM
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uppin' for some votes
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Old 12-07-2002, 09:49 AM
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this battle was ok...wasn't as tight as i thought it was gonna be but still it was worth reading..

Jizm
Again i've seen you spit much iller but there were still some dope punches and lines in there...

Niggas sleepin again? better call sway and tech and wake up/
Eat JIZM?, you gay fuck, this nut all up in your face like makeup/


^^that was purty dope..


Im hot headed like fresh perms, my wick shorter than midgets/
bitch niggas are full of pooh like tigger, eyore, owl and piglet/


^^3 punches in 2 lines...nice shit man..

Weren't many complex rhymes but this meant it flowed well..few multi's - but shit isn't all about multi's...overall this was a pretty good spit..score - 8/10

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hmmmz..i thought some rhymes were dope but there was definitely something lacking...

Don稚 worry nobody will be mourning me/

why would anybody be mourning you? you're supposed to win this battle..not lose it!

Now listen to this mission to destroy any opposition with ambition/
My punches are coming hard, start looking for a dental technician/

The punch in the second line was aight...otherwise it was a bit weak..forced multiples gives the impression of someone trying to sound good, but just throwing random rhyming words into the mix...

I値l get your skull slit, trow anthrax in your ass crack and in that head split/
As i said i知 throwing antrax in your ass crack that値l get your yeast rash back/


sounds like you were running out of ideas or desperate for rhymes here so you had to use anthrax - ass crack twice...

Ride over you with a stolen van Pass, those remainings to a freshman/
He値l play with it or more likely throw it in a trashcan/


freshman and trashcan dont really rhyme too well.....

It was an ok verse but instead of using personals you just rapped mainly about 'what you'd supposedly do to Jizm'..not many directed insults..try using more personals next time..flow was ok..fell off a bit in places...score - 6/10

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Old 12-07-2002, 11:55 AM
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um, MCD....

"Now listen to this mission to destroy any opposition with ambition/
My punches are coming hard, start looking for a dental technician/"

has no multi's. A multi is when multiple words rhyme together. Like, uh... I'm sick wit the flow, soon as my dick hit ya ho ... sick rhymes with dick, wit rhymes with hit, the rhymes with ya, and flow rhymes with ho.

Anyway, aiight battle. JIZM looks to have a better handlling of who he wants to be as an mc. That shit's grimey.

Torment seemed very generic. I've seen millions of emcee's like him. Disses were overplayed and generic. Nothin special

Jizm wins
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Old 12-07-2002, 01:26 PM
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goodlookin on the votes yall, much respect.1
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Old 12-07-2002, 01:57 PM
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ok, jizm sign up over here http://www.nlhd.com/forums/index.php?act=ST&f=17&t=6
and drop your verse oer there, it seems like youre winning so hey, maybe you'll get first place in decembers battle ranks!

mcd, i did go personal, read the last couple of lines, im talking about how he's a fake g and stuff... maybe you dont understaqnd the punhces cuz you dont know our history... but whatever..
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Old 12-07-2002, 03:34 PM
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lol he said im a fake G.....i didnt even realise that was personal....cause u just dont know me......1
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Old gurn at tha front and don't look back @ 12-07-2002, 03:36 PM
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I know no history... but i do know JIZM killed it.

No need for anything further.

PZ>
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Old 12-07-2002, 03:38 PM
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by the way...u came in here lookin for me and got eaten, so im not gonna go and sign up anywhere.....i didnt even think u still tried to rhyme, i forgot about u a long time ago....this is where i rest, u want me ill be here....1 my nigg
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Old 12-07-2002, 03:39 PM
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what up oblivion, aight. 1
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Old 12-08-2002, 12:54 AM
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needless to say jizm won it hands down,.. i think tourment beat him self harder then hardcore masterbaters, inturn he got ate by jizm
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