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Old CANS.ER.US vs. Flawless @ 03-11-2009, 04:31 PM
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So 10 bars due whenever.
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Old Re: CANS.ER.US vs. Flawless @ 03-11-2009, 04:37 PM
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I'll rip you in half and won't even get an answer bitch/
My bars are radiation, spit em in your face to leave you cancerous/1
When it comes to beef you know I'll keep my gats ready/
I'll leave you lookin like your sig, kuz I'm just that deadly/2
Don't even try spittin to me man you know your wrong and im sick/
Your minds constantly half up your ass like the thong in your pic/3
King kong to this bitch, smoke this snitch like a bong or a spliff/
Having to jestify your a guy in a thread whats wrong with this pic/4
As confused as we are, I bet he had to check under his skirt/
Eminem's favorite Stan, Time to be under the dirt/


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lol yeah ima dude, and propz for the welcome everyone will do
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Old Re: CANS.ER.US vs. Flawless @ 03-12-2009, 02:53 AM
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just saw this check, i'll drop something tomorrow
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Old Re: CANS.ER.US vs. Flawless @ 03-12-2009, 01:08 PM
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So 10 bars due whenever.


10 bars?..
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Old Re: CANS.ER.US vs. Flawless @ 03-12-2009, 04:49 PM
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10 bars is 10 lines. Screw text bars.
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Old Re: CANS.ER.US vs. Flawless @ 03-13-2009, 04:21 AM
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lol you'll only win personals


I'ma spread flaw's guts on the wall.. to show how his lower parts be stuck at
intestines bleeding is child play to me ya.. I'll just DUMP the Remains of this rugrat
dad use to beat my backside as punishment, for any kid it's said to be average
while you got it on the backside because your face was heavily damaged
pussy can't hold on to his chick right, just watch me play with her thighs
because your girl treats me like kid cudi best believe we do it DAY N' NIGHT
flaw's in the deepest of shits now...everyone knows the dude's a big clown
I've left an impact on this bitch, that's getting me confused for Chris Brown
I know you got a problem, but take ya booze from that place you'll stay out of
because your such a trend killer that your detox is what's holding back Dre's album



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1: metas should get it
2: you should get the diss, really think about it
3: ha kid cudi has a song day n night
4: ya know what happen, need me to expo lol
5: booze is alcohol i'm dissing him in this whole bar, just think about it detox/alcohol yea lol
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Old Re: CANS.ER.US vs. Flawless @ 03-13-2009, 02:46 PM
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Opener:
Punches:
Flow:
Structure:
Wordplay:
Meta's/Similes:
Multi's:
Closer:
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Old Re: CANS.ER.US vs. Flawless @ 03-13-2009, 03:18 PM
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Opener:flawless
Punches:flawless
Flow: flawless
Structure:canserus
Wordplay: canserus
Meta's/Similes:canserus
Multi's: flawless
Closer: canserus


I'll rip you in half and won't even get an answer bitch/
My bars are radiation, spit em in your face to leave you cancerous/

6/10- nice concept.. could've been a harder hittin punch


When it comes to beef you know I'll keep my gats ready/
I'll leave you lookin like your sig, kuz I'm just that deadly/

6/10 - decent bar but gunplay is annoying..

Don't even try spittin to me man you know your wrong and im sick/
Your minds constantly half up your ass like the thong in your pic/

8/10 - dope little punch there but the setup could be better

King kong to this bitch, smoke this snitch like a bong or a spliff/
Having to jestify your a guy in a thread whats wrong with this pic/

7/10 - lol funny..


As confused as we are, I bet he had to check under his skirt/
Eminem's favorite Stan, Time to be under the dirt/

5/10 - wasn't feeling this one.. the last punch should be the hardest..


32/50



I'ma spread flaw's guts on the wall.. to show how his lower parts be stuck at
intestines bleeding is child play to me ya.. I'll just DUMP the Remains of this rugrat

6/10- decent wordplay.. could be worded better to hit harder..


dad use to beat my backside as punishment, for any kid it's said to be average
while you got it on the backside because your face was heavily damaged

6/10- don't talk about yourself in a battle.. kinda funny punch though lol


pussy can't hold on to his chick right, just watch me play with her thighs
because your girl treats me like kid cudi best believe we do it DAY N' NIGHT

4/10- this didn't flow well or hit hard IMO.. played if you ask me


flaw's in the deepest of shits now...everyone knows the dude's a big clown
I've left an impact on this bitch, that's getting me confused for Chris Brown

5/10 another nice concept.. just needs woded better to hit harder..


I know you got a problem, but take ya booze from that place you'll stay out of
because your such a trend killer that your detox is what's holding back Dre's album

6/10- nice closer.. highlight of your verse..



27/50




Overall: I thin Flawless's verse was written with more expierience.. cancerus seems to know the basics of a text battle but looked to me like he hasn't been in to many.. both of you need to elevate your punchlines but cancerus needs to elevate more than that.. work on your multies and your flow.. try being more creative with your punchlines and think outside the box.. just don't use "over your head" type punches... make them simple and to the point but hard hitting... other than that.. do what you do..


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Don't even try spittin to me man you know your wrong and im sick/
Your minds constantly half up your ass like the thong in your pic/


and..

I know you got a problem, but take ya booze from that place you'll stay out of
because your such a trend killer that your detox is what's holding back Dre's album



this was a close battle but my vote goes to Flawless
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Old Re: CANS.ER.US vs. Flawless @ 03-13-2009, 03:39 PM
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Ha damn thanks for the great feed.

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Old Re: CANS.ER.US vs. Flawless @ 03-13-2009, 04:52 PM
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thought my punches was more harsh, but alright, either way i don't really like multies i focus more on punches and wordplay


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Old Re: CANS.ER.US vs. Flawless @ 03-14-2009, 10:13 PM
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Old Re: CANS.ER.US vs. Flawless @ 03-18-2009, 03:01 AM
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max u were good but needed alittle more...to make ur shit hit harder...cuz this is text theres no vocals(obviously)....so you gota try to make ur words hard as fuk!
but WTF do i know i dont text battle any more..lol
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Old Re: CANS.ER.US vs. Flawless @ 03-18-2009, 10:30 AM
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Lmaooo this is exactly why I don't text battle anymore. Can we get some people who know what there talking about like MCD in here or something?
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Old Re: CANS.ER.US vs. Flawless @ 03-18-2009, 03:36 PM
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well ther gay any ways thats why i dont do um
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Old Re: CANS.ER.US vs. Flawless @ 03-18-2009, 04:07 PM
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Lmaooo this is exactly why I don't text battle anymore. Can we get some people who know what there talking about like MCD in here or something?
lol you really think you won?

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