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Old I forgive @ 02-28-2006, 01:35 AM
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This is from me to you
I believe it's true
Forgiveness may seem inconcievable
but it's what you need to do
You need to let go
before the echo of life is bleedin through
Are you so sinless?
We have to reach within us and seek anew

I forgive my father for hurtin my mother
I forgive children who made life a living Hell
I forgive my ex, I take the words from another
"Before I met her, I was quite the dimming shell"
I know she loved me, I forgive her breaking my heart
And I forgive her for the times she made me feel worthless
I forgive her because that hurt is still playing a part
and all of that anger, makes me know my real purpose
I forgive those who have thrown dirt on my name
and those who left me thrown out in the wind
Sometimes instead of trying to work I complain
I forgive myself for that , I just doubted my kin
I forgive my first love for fucking some guy
even though she said I was her perfect accomplice
I remember I would cry looking up at the sky
remembering moments I thought "it's worth it to stop this"
I forgive God for loving me and giving me heart
I always felt life would be better if it never existed
I realize now tragedy coincides with a victories start
I could never change a life, I would forever have missed it
I forgive the apalling men constantly falling for sin
leading women to never trust a word I express
I forgive my impatience, 'fore it's calling again
and I forgive the pessemistic, it'll work for the best

This is from me to you
I believe it's true
Forgiveness may seem inconcievable
but it's what you need to do
You need to let go
before the echo of life is bleedin through
Are you so sinless?
We have to reach within us and seek anew
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But when it came to the grave, no one could climb out
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And donít be mislead- I got a level head
No resurrection, Christianity would have never spread
The disciples werenít stupid guys who would ruin their lives
And then choose to die for what they knew was a lie
That would be beyond ridiculous- Nah, the issue is
The risen Christ seen by 500 eye-witnesses
Imagine 500 people in a court of law
Each of them taking the stand reporting what they saw
If their stories lined up and made sense
The evidence would have to leave you convinced
But still itís by faith that we trust and praise the Son
Who was raised for our justification

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Old Re: I forgive @ 02-28-2006, 02:40 AM
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Didn't read it but i bet it's really good
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Old Re: I forgive @ 02-28-2006, 12:07 PM
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That's beautiful...I like the part about forgiving yourself...hard to do.
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Old Re: I forgive @ 02-28-2006, 06:55 PM
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this reminds me of what I had to do for myself in my early twenties.
My heart hurt when I read this as I could understand .
Josh it is a long road to forgiveness but it seems u r heading in the right direction.
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Old Re: I forgive @ 02-28-2006, 10:59 PM
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lol...Thaaanks.
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And then choose to die for what they knew was a lie
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The risen Christ seen by 500 eye-witnesses
Imagine 500 people in a court of law
Each of them taking the stand reporting what they saw
If their stories lined up and made sense
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Old Re: I forgive @ 03-01-2006, 03:58 PM
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that was really good man fo poetry id have to give it a ten a fuckin ten
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Old Re: I forgive @ 03-07-2006, 11:35 AM
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I swear I've read this one before? Yeah, it's good.
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If I could capture the rage of today's youth and bottle it
Crush the glass from my bare hands and swallow it
Then spit it back in the faces of you racists
and hypocrites who think the same shit but don't say shit
You Liberace's, Versace's, and you nazis
Watch me, cause you thinkin you got me in this hot seat
You motherfuckers wanna JUDGE me cause you're NOT me
You'll never STOP me, I'm TOP speed as you POP me
I came to save these new generations of babies
from parents who failed to raise 'em cause they're lazy
to grow to praise me I'm makin 'em go crazy
That's how I got this whole nation to embrace me
And you fugazi if you think I'ma admit wrong
I cripple any hypocritic critic I'm sic'd on
And this song is for any kid who gets picked on
A sick song to retaliate to, and it's called..
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Old Re: I forgive @ 03-08-2006, 02:52 AM
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Word. I like it, like all of your work. The concept of this piece of so touching. Forgiveness. Not many have the ability and inner-power to actually be able to forgive. It takes strength and great understanding.

Mad props.
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Old Re: I forgive @ 03-13-2006, 10:57 PM
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*thinks

forgiveness has give in it so would you forgive that much to right a whole
page on it ,your view is saying you were stuck on the word love lady killer
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Old Re: I forgive @ 03-14-2006, 12:43 AM
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Forgiveness is an integral part of me world view...mayble even the most important.
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But when it came to the grave, no one could climb out
Thatís where Jesus stands alone like taking a Ďtimeoutí
And donít be mislead- I got a level head
No resurrection, Christianity would have never spread
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And then choose to die for what they knew was a lie
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Imagine 500 people in a court of law
Each of them taking the stand reporting what they saw
If their stories lined up and made sense
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Old Re: I forgive @ 03-16-2006, 03:17 PM
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actually read it for the second time nice accomplishment
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Old Re: I forgive @ 03-20-2006, 02:42 AM
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That was bad ass, It actually hepled me in a way...I'm sure you dont know what i'm talkin about but thanks
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Old Re: I forgive @ 03-25-2006, 01:45 AM
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forgiveness.

i can't do it.

your a mad writer joshy babe.
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