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Old Silence @ 04-20-2006, 08:55 PM
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I HAD TO WRITE THIS ONE FOR HISTORY....IT'S ABOUT THE HOLOCAUST...DO YOU THINK IT'S OKAY TO TURN IN??

A series of abysmal images
Observed through parted fingers
Horrified eyes and gaping mouths
On the faces surrounding me in the dark ...

Systematic starvation of
A raped generation
Has left stench of death lingering
Across pristine German countryside

Sallow skin draped across protruding hip bones
Bodies infested with typhus-laden lice
Hollow shallow eyes gazing longingly at death
Corpses naked prostrated in endless fields

Callous executioners forced to bear the executed
Flaccid bodies tumbling to join their brothers
Innumerable
Mass graves of anonymity

Bathhouses become death chambers
The unsuspecting breathe the toxic vapor
Bodies consolidated
By means of mass conflagration

... Images lingering
Haunted visages in the hallway
No dialogue
For there are no words
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Old Re: Silence @ 04-24-2006, 06:31 PM
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I think its good to turn in..Very good imagery
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Old Re: Silence @ 04-25-2006, 03:10 AM
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Riiiiight.. I'm sure you wrote this. Unless your name is Shannon and you're from MA... you stole this piece of writing..

Proof: http://www.teenink.com/Past/2006/March/19954.html
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Old Re: Silence @ 04-25-2006, 03:13 AM
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BITER!! Props to laa for exposing a faker
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Old Re: Silence @ 04-25-2006, 03:16 PM
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Someone Ban the BITER
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Old Re: Silence @ 04-25-2006, 11:34 PM
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no no go ahead turn it in so you'll get an F
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Old Re: Silence @ 04-28-2006, 10:01 PM
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ozmfgsh's okay so i didn't write it {{sue}}...i'm not smart in history...and how can i write about something i don't get....

LET ME REPHRASE THIS [[WE HAD TO DO A POEM FOR HISTORY ON THE HOLOCAUST...THIS IS ONE I FOUND do you think it could sound like i did write it??]]

better?
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Old Re: Silence @ 04-28-2006, 10:05 PM
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Hahahahhaaa..
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Old Re: Silence @ 04-28-2006, 10:12 PM
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^^ totally stupid of me right??.....oh well i guess....i'm a stupid person
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Old Re: Silence @ 04-28-2006, 10:26 PM
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Aren't we all.
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Old Re: Silence @ 04-28-2006, 10:32 PM
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ozmfgsh's okay so i didn't write it {{sue}}...i'm not smart in history...and how can i write about something i don't get....

LET ME REPHRASE THIS [[WE HAD TO DO A POEM FOR HISTORY ON THE HOLOCAUST...THIS IS ONE I FOUND do you think it could sound like i did write it??]]

better?

You don't get the concept of the Holocaust or what the poem is stating? The poem isn't even "famous" where it could be used as a piece of writing reflecting on such a historical event...

You know what could've been better? If you could've wrote one yourself and posted it. It would've saved you the embarassment and then you wouldn't have had to make up a lie about wanting to "find" a poem. Right.

I do hope when you turned it in, you let the teacher know you didn't write it, someone else did and named her at the least. But then, I do doubt you'd do such a thing.
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Old Re: Silence @ 04-28-2006, 10:55 PM
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The poem isn't even "famous" where it could be used as a piece of writing reflecting on such a historical event...
i didn't get it so finding an unknown poem about it...was sort of the point


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I do hope when you turned it in, you let the teacher know you didn't write it, someone else did and named her at the least.
Not a Chance...it's not that i'm some "crazy liar"...i do give credit where it's due..but not if it's going to ruin my grade...this thing was worth 190 points....which is almost enough for me to actually pass the class....with a D+....and i'm so not going to summer school....OVER A POEM...w/e..bLAH
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Old Re: Silence @ 04-28-2006, 10:56 PM
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Oh okay. So I want to pass a class, I'll just steal essays, assignments, and poems from the net. How convenient.
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Old Re: Silence @ 04-28-2006, 11:09 PM
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^^ not like that at all
it's more like::
"oh i so totally don't get this holocaust crap...maybe i can find a poem on the net.....see if some people think i wrote it...if they do i can turn it in and not have to go to summer school how convenient"

....i'm a good student {{sort of}} who was overwhelmed with the S.T.A.R and C.A.H.S.E.E.....and needed an easy way out....it's not like your'e above me...because everyone has once in thier life cheated on something...and if anyone says they haven't they're lying their asses off


mmkay whatever...bLAH this is lame...i so don't care what you guys think
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Old Re: Silence @ 04-28-2006, 11:35 PM
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bleh.

whoever wrote it needs props.
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