Round Two: Cullision Vs. Eleven 24

Advo©ate™ · Advo©ate™

RULES:
+8 bars.
+No feeding.
+Must mention opponents name.
+First to 3 votes.
+Check in within 24 hours, drop within 24 hours after checking in. (48 hours in total to have your verse posted.)
+Votes within 48 hours of the last verse being posted. (If 48 hours is up and no one has reached 3 votes, the person with the most votes will win.)
+Blind spit.
+If any rules are broken, you will be disqualified.
+GOOD LUCK!

Eleven · Eleven

check..i got a driving lesson today but i got till tommorow to post anyway right??

Advo©ate™ · Advo©ate™

yeah man it's all cool

Cullision · Cullision

check

Eleven · Eleven

goodluck cullision

btw this is probaly my last battle on this site(possibly)

there is some things people might overlook...like the double meaning in lesson and the difference between lesson and lessen etc etc....theres at least one piece of wordplay in each bar so if you dont see any in certain parts check the expos..i know people hate expos..but fuck it

Your lyrics are anything but abusive, krazy you must be
didn’t your “dawgs”(dogs) warn you im a “vet” you shouldn’t trust me
your failing to achieve you cunt il leave you burnt when I begin to blaze
punches so hard, smack you at “night” and send you into “daze” (days)

people don’t sleep on your rhymes, they snore, mate your dull
your “crews(cruise)”going nowhere when I break ya “skull(scull)”*
Its like “swallowing faeces” the way il have you “eating your words” guy (talk shit)
Win never you’ll still and backwards shit my write could i**

No profile or pic its like a “bad hairday” the way your “hiding your roots”
You’ll never be rich and famous you couldn’t reach “high notes” playing a “flute”***
you don’t know me they’ll be no second round bitch this aint obie
blast 40kal leave you 6ft below me rename you “jesus” your just that “holy”****

you wouldn’t be in this battle if you were clever theres no head on cullision(collision)
leave red on ya vision your dead like excision try “adding” skill instead of “division”*****

the best in rap cullisions less than that you don’t make “sense(cents)”so don’t “invest in rap”
stop suppressing facts you suck its simple aint no “teacher” but you “learnt your lessen” jack******

Expos:

*a scull is something that makes a boat go forward or side to side(something like that)..its wordplay bitches!!! lol

**its written backwards lol read it from right to left

*** theres no profile and no pic..wtf am I suppose to do for personals lol, and roots as in on your scalp…the line after that, “high notes”, as in big bills(money) the flute parts easy if you get that…

**** kal(cal) …the crew name, jesus, holy, easy to get

***** basically, try elevating instead of getting worse “try adding instead of division”..and it relates to the teacher line after it

****** lessen, it’s a word used when somethings dying off ..”hes learnt hes dying off”… “you learnt ya lessen”

Cullision · Cullision

my winnin-streak is flippin-deep like rigid-steeps off cliffs-and-peaks/
im spitin-heat so hard your "bacon" the way it 'strips-ya-meat'/1 bacon=bakin
got ya heart skippin-beats, got multies with more syllables than ya verse-could-store/
i'll murk-this-whore with verbal-gore worse-than-yours, punch? what do i need 'em to hurt-you-for/2
im callin this verse the wack album cuz its the end-of-your-career/ his last battle
fear-in-off-me-send gonna not still your but, however rhymes ya write/3(backwords)
have you left-in-dams-and-creeks, you could "jump on a track" and still "never-land-a-beat"/
you should be called jesus the way my sharp bars shred-ya-hands-and-feet, call me obie cuz the "second-rounds-on-me"/4
you aint scarin-me, you dissed so its time-to-get-killed/
what you wearin-g? you prolly write rhymes-in-a-kilt/5
you could take "eleven 24" hour days to write a verse and not match-my-skills/
you could bring gats-and-steel and a baseball glove and still couldnt "catch-a-kill"/6
i've just finished-this-wack-kid with minimal-tactics/
subliminally-smashin this lyrically-wack-bitch/7

your prolly wonderin why my lines-aint-crowed-with-a-great-punch/
cuz you aint even worth the mind-power-it-takes-to-make-one/8

explanations
1. bacon is strips of meat and bakin and bacon...get it
2. self explanatory
3. its his last battle he said and jay-z's album he retired on was the black album and eleven is quitin his wack career cuz he has barely any battles, and he wrote a line backwords so i did to lol read from left to right
4. obie trices new cd is called second rounds on me and land a beat means to flow right you know...
5. he was talkin about guns and hes in the uk
6. alotta people call wins kills, get it
7. self explanatory
8. didnt even have a punch, just a straight up diss lol

Advo©ate™ · Advo©ate™

Opener: Eleven 24
Punches: Eleven 24
Multi's: Eleven 24
Personals: Eleven 24
Wordplay: Eleven 24
Meta's/Similes: Eleven 24
Closer: Eleven 24

Vote: Eleven 24

Cullision, you're fuckin' lucky I'm not disqualifying you for feeding.

DeA†h · DeA†h

^I Will Agree With Him Except Multies I Give It To Cullision.

So My Vote-1124.

@1124-You Could've Used More Complex Wordplay To Make Your Verse Better. If This Is Your Last Battle U Might Aswell Make A Hot Verse, U Get Me?

@Cullision-Dude, Stop With The Feeding.

Flawless · Flawless

Quote:

Originally Posted by ~Advo~

Opener: Eleven 24
Punches: Eleven 24
Multi's: Eleven 24
Personals: Eleven 24
Wordplay: Eleven 24
Meta's/Similes: Eleven 24
Closer: Eleven 24

Vote: Eleven 24

Cullision, you're fuckin' lucky I'm not disqualifying you for feeding.

um can i ask how did eleven get multies?????

Flawless · Flawless

ma cullision that sucked that you had to feed lol. kuz rule two is no feeding so its only fair that i follow the rules and give my vote to eleven since he followed rules.

although i gotta say feeding has to be the gayest rule i dont know why its no aloowed

so ya my vote is for

eleven24

Dia · Dia

where did he feed I dont see it honestly

Flawless · Flawless

the backwords part i guess they mean

Darkness · Darkness

i would of voted for cullision,lol

Advo©ate™ · Advo©ate™

Eleven 24 is through to the Final Round.

Feeding puts a disadvantage on the person who goes first, that is why it isn't allowed.