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Cut Old Wish you had listened @ 04-24-2006, 11:19 PM
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I see her walk in the front door
Only to see my motionless body lying on the floor
Covered in my blood
I have had enough
I tried to tell her
I was trying to let her know
What happened to me
Whats been happening to me
For the past year and a half
If only she had listened
Then I would have taken a different path
I could have been helped
I could have been saved
But by her not listening, she dug my own grave
But if I stuck around without telling her
Then it would of carried on and on and on
But now that Im dead the pain, suffering and look on his face at night will all be gone
If only she had listened to me
When i went down on my hands and knees
And I cried and begged
just to TRY tell her what hes been doing to me
Then she could have stopped him
And I could have been free
But no..she told me to shut the fuck up
Now the only freedom I will get
Will be at the bottom of my grave
As I watch her eternal regret
On how I could have been saved
But what the fuck are sisters for
If they refuse to help and listen no more.
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Old Re: Wish you had listened @ 04-25-2006, 02:18 AM
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Its great, i already told you that tho,lol
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Old Re: Wish you had listened @ 04-25-2006, 03:43 AM
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LOL yeah i know and thank you.
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Old Re: Wish you had listened @ 04-25-2006, 04:29 AM
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It's good.
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If I could capture the rage of today's youth and bottle it
Crush the glass from my bare hands and swallow it
Then spit it back in the faces of you racists
and hypocrites who think the same shit but don't say shit
You Liberace's, Versace's, and you nazis
Watch me, cause you thinkin you got me in this hot seat
You motherfuckers wanna JUDGE me cause you're NOT me
You'll never STOP me, I'm TOP speed as you POP me
I came to save these new generations of babies
from parents who failed to raise 'em cause they're lazy
to grow to praise me I'm makin 'em go crazy
That's how I got this whole nation to embrace me
And you fugazi if you think I'ma admit wrong
I cripple any hypocritic critic I'm sic'd on
And this song is for any kid who gets picked on
A sick song to retaliate to, and it's called..
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Old Re: Wish you had listened @ 04-25-2006, 05:54 AM
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Lol thank you
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Old Re: Wish you had listened @ 04-25-2006, 06:10 AM
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already told ya skinny white ass i like it.

edit: love it.
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Old Re: Wish you had listened @ 04-27-2006, 10:42 PM
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HarHar true
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