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Cut Old 7. just freestyling @ 04-11-2009, 11:41 AM
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A 20 minute track made by CRP, pure freestyling lol!!
On my mixtape. 7. just freestyling


It was never my intentions to hurt anyone,
i wanted to get down writing, express myself Here i'll show how it's done, how i do it
All i know is when my tracks run i'm in shit, people cant handle it and thats me coming up
Always staying with calligraphy, no grip, on lifes obsticles for me i had to step
up or be stepped on You see this world nowadays is getting worse,
un-answered questions Going to the end of the earth to find hope, we choke and question
why we deserve to live in sin, why's it have to be this curse,
put the chance on the table I'd take it and have myself killed at birth,
i'm getting people tell me to watch my back, telling me they gonna come to my house,
they see me in the street but sacred to say shit 'cause they'd know i wouldn't hesitate to
punch one in the mouth, i stand my ground, acting like you all hard me and my crew would
tear muscles out,
you don't smoke out You got low grade,
why you acting like you getting paid, bitch You know your low paid,
don't write against me cause i'll tell ya now and that's your writing will fade,
how you gonna feel when you loose a freestyle battle on the stage,
go home, take more time revising your strategy across the page, there's no point in stepping
up if you ain't got the bottle to win,
you saying you good But when i hear no-ones "listening" when you try to "sing",
you'd know if it's me when i get on the mic,
i'd be like why can't we stand and fight for our rights, you got no autority to stand
be God and try to judge my life, fuck Like you know any better,
my style changes as much as the weather so come along it's hailing bricks, stick together,
grab your pillow's and rubber bands to tie 'em around your head,
freestyle battle's over, just to be funny i'd throw the fuckin' mic at your head,
don't even say you'll blow a mic 'cause you couldn't do it if you strapped C4 to it
and i told you how to do it right,
the energy force around me is so dark it'd evaparate the light, i'm in court in two days,
i'm being prosecuted for jumping the wife, i kicked her ass,
she suffered more still when i shoved glass in her throat, then fucked her whilst waring
a smiley mask, i'm going off my rocker, that like when i walked out of class before
smacking a teacher in the face, she was in pain Shit her teeth were all over the place,
i won't be remember today but i'll always remember yesterday?
oh you thinking i'm here, guess you wrong again 'cause i'm in space,
i needed to go hell and left my body behind just in case,
grabbed Donald's duck voice and kept wiping away the swet whilst rapping about doing a job,
leaving my body was insurance, i had to kill god,
i'd always remain, i'm out to get mine so if you get in my way i'll take yours,
die with no fame, i'd rather just stop now and live with no pain
but giving up just prooves that you got no game,
this ain't me, i always said that it's wizardy that i work in poetry look i'm going beserk,
if you want a bitch slap i'll slap you out your shirt,
i'ma soldier, one of which would risk his life to expose ya Out-grind and out-time ya,
c'mon you telling me that you can really do it like this,
i aim high with a expectiations like a bullet, not a "low" but a "high" that's impossible to miss,
jesus christ So many subliminal messages these mother fuckers thinkin' i'm taking the piss,
i guess i'm just different cause i start my anger on paper and some start at the wrist,
thinking i'm crazy That's a blatent diss, like anyone is normal i just write what i feel
and in a way it's no different to anyone else, we live in the same world,
the difference is you don't let like me your emotions un-furl,
if i really could explain what i'm going through i'd have to just say that i'm beyond
getting writer's block, this is it, i always put myself on the spot The centre of attention
'cause half of what you see is a freedom writer demanding action,
look at brown's administration, i said people were blinded from their own reality and this wasn't
me being crazy, 2pac predicted his own death? i'd say maybe but if in the true sense of the word
"truth" if this is real,
Then half of what i conceal is a realm i found i never thought i would off,
there's only so much i can take Ignore, swallow and then brake
and then it's me on a tape having to explain that fuckin' with me was a mistake,
you out your mind, must be to try and see a way of beating me cause your blind,
i'd always have a story to tell,
would it be about a demon that fell out of hell or a boy who came around
to say you sit and dwell, why you fucking around,
your so weak it'd not be hard to bury you so you no where to be fuckin' found,
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Old Re: 7. just freestyling @ 04-11-2009, 07:27 PM
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^nice, in many places you seem like eminem in Infinite hehe.. raw talent, keep developin, you might jus get too hard-to-get someday..
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Old Re: 7. just freestyling @ 04-11-2009, 08:03 PM
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^nice, in many places you seem like eminem in Infinite hehe.. raw talent, keep developin, you might jus get too hard-to-get someday..
that means alot ! lol =) ..
yeah i know, one day ay
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Old Re: 7. just freestyling @ 05-25-2009, 04:45 PM
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^ Best feedback I've heard in a while ijkl933 great advice!!!!!!
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Old Re: 7. just freestyling @ 05-27-2009, 03:49 PM
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^ Best feedback I've heard in a while ijkl933 great advice!!!!!!
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Old 7 just freestyling @ 06-22-2009, 06:33 AM
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rnYo dopefiend so I was just sitting here after a session and I came up with an idea for your website. I was just thinking it would be nice if there was a calendar on your website that showed which new shows are coming out when. Anyways Im blazed haharn
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Old Re: 7. just freestyling @ 06-22-2009, 01:06 PM
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^heya there Spikeville, welcome on board mayne, bring on peeps..
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Old Re: 7. just freestyling @ 06-22-2009, 03:11 PM
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yeah if i had denz is power to the site....shit would be a lot diferent around here!!!...in a good way!
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Old Re: 7. just freestyling @ 06-22-2009, 05:36 PM
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Old Re: 7. just freestyling @ 06-22-2009, 05:52 PM
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Woah, you guys need some e-dope??

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Old Re: 7. just freestyling @ 01-01-2010, 06:19 PM
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