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Sad Old Hope EM Reads this @ 01-11-2003, 12:18 AM
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look at you yall
usin size 72 font and double spancing
But this ryhme is gonna need its own speacial casing
Of couse it looks long
But you don't know what you doing cuz you smokin a bong
This song is about to linger
My lifes been hell
It take 10 jerry springers to hook me up
Don't believe me
Then I'll fuck you up
oh Shit my dogs havin a heart attack
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Devil Old hmmm...only an opinion @ 01-11-2003, 01:51 PM
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that was okay. but it was really choppy. Other than that, I liked it. keep up the flows cause whether or not everyone else likes them does not matter. it's what you think about them that matters. I see it this way, if everyone did what everyone else wanted, no one would be original. Peace.
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Old 01-11-2003, 01:56 PM
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i'm just givin you my opinion......it was aight....some of it didn't rhyme.....choppy.....hmmm.....work at it and keep the style that works for u....just work on word play....
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Smoke Old 01-11-2003, 04:06 PM
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.... hmmmm-K. It's alright. Very short, and choppy. But whatever's cleaver, Trever.

And who the hell is EM?
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Old didnt like it... @ 01-11-2003, 10:06 PM
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thought all ur shit was pretty wack so far,
but thats ok, cuz accordin to kinks, it only matters what u think...
ur bein original i guess though, which i guess is good,
but theres good original and bad original...
this has gotta be bad original, hehehhehe
so dont listen to kinks, cuz on this site...
alls that matters is if others like it, hehehe

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Old 01-11-2003, 11:44 PM
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dude, please stop posting these short ass rhymes...you need to put some more effort into your shit
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Old 01-12-2003, 06:21 AM
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u need to stop followin me, hehehe...

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Old 01-12-2003, 07:10 PM
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i hope em reads this to becuz my shit would seem like gold compared to this
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