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Old I Hope She's Happy @ 09-15-2005, 01:16 AM
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Verse 1
There was once a time
I'd lay my love on the line
For the truth in her eyes
For another day of smiles
I guess I didn't work hard enough
I guess I wasn't what she had in mind
But whenever she was down
I'd try to help her through the bind

Chorus
I can't help but love her
When I just want to hate her
And she should know it's true
I was more than certain
It was more than worth it
But I guess it was different in her eyes
But there's one hope left
Even when she's with him
I hope she's happy

Verse 2
The love came on strong
But the speed made it come undone
First french kiss on our first date
Not gonna tell ya
When we made it to second base
It's just a matter of time
Our flame of love was to die
But if she ever wanted to try
Again I'll gladly hang my head and cry
Through my broken heart until I learn to smile

Chorus
I can't help but love her
When I just want to hate her
And she should know it's true
I was more than certain
It was more than worth it
But I guess it was different in her eyes
But there's one hope left
Even when she's with him
I hope she's happy
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Old Re: I Hope She's Happy @ 09-16-2005, 12:03 PM
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Thats very good like always
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A sick song to retaliate to, and it's called..
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Old Re: I Hope She's Happy @ 09-17-2005, 02:13 AM
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Thanks babe. Appreciate it.
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Old Re: I Hope She's Happy @ 09-17-2005, 10:42 AM
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No probs
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Watch me, cause you thinkin you got me in this hot seat
You motherfuckers wanna JUDGE me cause you're NOT me
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Old Re: I Hope She's Happy @ 09-19-2005, 05:31 PM
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awwwwwwwwwwww jonnny

*hugs*

love it as always sick ass shit
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Old Re: I Hope She's Happy @ 09-19-2005, 11:41 PM
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Much Respect............................awesome work...sorry for your predicament in the song though but awesome work ......................................Mad props>>>>>>>>>
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Old Re: I Hope She's Happy @ 09-20-2005, 02:51 PM
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Good Jon for some effin reason I couldn't help but sing that!!! I dunno... my brain is working overtime grrrr..
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Old Re: I Hope She's Happy @ 09-20-2005, 03:58 PM
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thanks hun and the rest of you. Actually I have another version that I'll post up later.
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Nicknack paddywack meet my friend your head.
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