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Old i dont. @ 04-04-2006, 03:24 AM
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You feel such love for me,
But I feel nothing but hate,
Tweaking all your emotions,
Youíll never think to retaliate,

Youíre so goddamn weak,
Never want to be a rebel,
Canít realize to hit back,
Youíre not joining me in hell,

I love to hate you,
I love to use you,
I love to play you,
I love to abuse you,


I donít care for someone like you,
Someone who cares for me,
I donít need someone like you,
Someone who needs me,
I donít want someone like you,
Someone who wants me,
I donít love someone like you,
Someone who loves me,
I donít love you.
I donít.

I love to hate you,
I love to use you,
I love to play you,
I love to abuse you,


You rely on one person,
Who canít be enough,
Grow a freaking backbone,
You need to get tough,

You need to leave me,
Give me back that sacred silence,
Freedom in my life again,
I canít stand this committed violence.

I donít love you.
I donít.




too many emotions, and heck, its easier to write them than cut them outta my skin. i had some manson and static x playing in the background.....lol....

i think i will leave him.
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Old Re: i dont. @ 04-04-2006, 12:02 PM
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Static-X,huh? Koool.......and yer poem has some pretty strong emotions....i'm feelin' all that.....good shit...keep it up!
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Old Re: i dont. @ 04-04-2006, 12:22 PM
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I love it. Raw.
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And this song is for any kid who gets picked on
A sick song to retaliate to, and it's called..
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Old Re: i dont. @ 04-04-2006, 08:43 PM
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its ill
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Old Re: i dont. @ 04-05-2006, 03:46 AM
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thankyou people.

i wish the two people whos opinions mean much too me would post. no offence guys , but the two people are like.......i respect them above most others.
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Old Re: i dont. @ 04-05-2006, 03:47 AM
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Its kool, very nice
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Old Re: i dont. @ 04-05-2006, 04:37 AM
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That's one of those ones where you've always thought it, but then someone else writes it,
and you're like, "YEAH. I KNOW". "Someone else feels the same". That's awesome
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Old Re: i dont. @ 04-05-2006, 04:43 AM
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why thanks, new hubby-personage.
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Old Re: i dont. @ 04-05-2006, 01:58 PM
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^ Hey, no problem

I've been waiting on your comment on mine, but I guess you've never seen it. Here it is:

http://www.eminemweb.com/board/showthread.php?t=24059
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Old Re: i dont. @ 04-06-2006, 08:18 PM
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it was good but i didnt like it because it sounds like somethin that my ex would write to me
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Old Re: i dont. @ 04-07-2006, 09:16 PM
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gee thanks tom .
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Old Re: i dont. @ 04-24-2006, 10:59 PM
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Aight this was ill a hell.Very nice drop and i'll b checkin up on your peaces 4 now on cuz you been gettin feed for mine.Great peace
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Old Re: i dont. @ 04-24-2006, 11:07 PM
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check out the poetic bloods thread if you want see more of her stuff and mine as well
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Old Re: i dont. @ 04-24-2006, 11:30 PM
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Yea i'll b gettin at u 2 a lot more.I read both of uall peaces and they both r hot.
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Old Re: i dont. @ 04-24-2006, 11:37 PM
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Thanks tech
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