Deadly Love......yes it is a rock song/poem so if you don't like rock then FUCK YOU!!

Cain · Cain

Hey you girl
I'm sorry I didn't talk that much
Just smile and show me what I've been missing
Show me your feel and your soft touch
Give me your kissing
The kissing I been missing

I'm sorry that I never showed I really cared
With everything that ran through me
It's amazing that I even thought to dare
If you don't care for me the I do for you
Pain would be unbearable
Still thoughts of suicide wouldn't be something new

I want to feel your lips finally brush against mine
I need something new to stop my old addictions
Because of them I'm dying
Just bring your heart over to mine
With love new life
Everything is fine

Just give me one chance
Everyone deserves a chance at a little romance

If life is love babe I've been flatlining for a while
Love me back into my life
And start with your beautiful smile
If I could then I would
I'd have faith of love inside
Maybe then everything would work as it should
And not feel as if everything's been dying

gangstalita · gangstalita

don you a very romantic typa guy..every piece of yours ive read is dealin with love..we need more guys like you in the world...not all violence just enough love..

Cain · Cain

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Originally posted by gangstalita
don you a very romantic typa guy..every piece of yours ive read is dealin with love..we need more guys like you in the world...not all violence just enough love..

thank god you didn't read my last one. lol.
thank you. much appreciation for that.

Ayane · Ayane

Just smile and show me what I've been missing
Show me your feel and your soft touch
Give me your kissing
The kissing I been missing

^^ aww thas so cute :o...

I'm sorry that I never showed I really cared
With everything that ran through me

^^ jus thinkin wha you'd like like with thoughtz racing through ur head lol...

Pain would be unbearable
Still thoughts of suicide wouldn't be something new

^^ thas really sad :(...i waz jus thinkin like, someone sitting next to their window lookin out at tha starz an crying, jus wantin to die...like that night after being around her...

I want to feel your lips finally brush against mine
I need something new to stop my old addictions
Because of them I'm dying
Just bring your heart over to mine

^^ nice imagery, :-| @ the image of a heart like, wilting like a flower does...i told you, tonightz not my night lol...

Maybe then everything would work as it should
And not feel as if everything's been dying

^^ i jus randomly liked that line...

this one waz really good, ur so romantic jon :p...:-| @ people who don't see it, ho'z lol...~oNe~.......