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Sad Old A Verse thats gonna be on a song on my album @ 10-17-2002, 10:41 PM
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My time to grind im parlaying outside,
inside of my new ride,
ass up on buck hide,
smoking a camel wide,
Sliding front back side to side.
Hatas see me on the scene talking whos this lil nig,
ice so frozen to get in my jewelry box i need an ice pick,
oh no stop the flow im bout to get sick here it goes
how it goes is friends or foes catch bows
and bloody nose hoes get dirty dildos
kicked in with steel toes
for dissing mah flows
im a crack my trunk now system crack the ground for being so loud
now im so high i almost hit that cloud.
Screens fall from the sky so many screens in the ride
it looks like best buy,
taking your girls draws off listening to luther Vandross
on second though switch it to Al Green
mugg on mean got yo shit on lean,
freestyle with endurance,
get your eardrum some insurance,
and I'll keep my dogs behind the fence.
To a skezzer i teaser pleaser and leave her
i got more ice then a damp iceberg shirt in the freezer,
gun in the drawer you want more i got more guns then Gun's Galore
freestyles taking a tour and im just a starter
when i take a shit my dick hits the water,
not plexing yet just pushing for yall to try harder,
Im getting throwed and plan to go further
im thinkin throwed like the what chamillionaire
its da nigga Chop wit his name in his hair
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Old 10-17-2002, 11:46 PM
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good rhymes, couldnt really catch the flow,

hot verse!...later
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Old 10-18-2002, 12:17 PM
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same
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Old 10-18-2002, 12:42 PM
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same here!!!
peace
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Old 10-18-2002, 05:45 PM
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yo i'm not feelin ya flow.....it might just be me....but i think it needs some work
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Sad Old 10-18-2002, 07:01 PM
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How come it needs work when i built it like that
u just need to die already mr im depressed
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Old 10-18-2002, 07:38 PM
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dude, i'm goin through some hard times......like i said...it's just me....i'm havin a hard time feelin alot of things right now...didn't mean to sound harsh...peace dawg....
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Sad Old 10-18-2002, 08:12 PM
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dude, i'm goin through some hard times......like i said...it's just me....i'm havin a hard time feelin alot of things right now...didn't mean to sound harsh...peace dawg.... my ass
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Old 10-18-2002, 08:20 PM
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uggg.....nevermind....i'm tryin to keep from dissing....can we at least get on the same page? forget it.....we never spoke
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Old ^^^ @ 10-19-2002, 07:43 PM
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fuck you Stuntastic or whatever tha fuck you call yaself now.

If you were going through hard times you wouldn't want some racist piece of shit messing with you - he gave you honest feedback.... be appreciative. Not everyones gonna like ya rhymes...

Just leave tha peeps that actually give feedback alone..

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Old 10-20-2002, 10:52 AM
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Stunt...ya new name basically describes ya rhymes and ya attitude...."DIRE-BOLLOCKS-ALL"........you whack faggot.
Have you ever given a single piece of constructive feedback in your life?...The fact is you cant handle it that a lot of people dont like your shit..live with it you ignorant cunt.
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Weed Old 10-20-2002, 11:19 PM
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This shit is phat. I'd love to hear another verse.
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Old 10-20-2002, 11:51 PM
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That verse was ill. I'd like to see how ill you'd be if you developed with multi's, but this reminds me of Lil Wayne circa 2000, or Ludacris lately.

That said, I think you should construct constructive criticism.

Y'all should get off his back though.
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Happy Old 10-21-2002, 05:22 PM
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it was okay nothing too gr8 or over the top,.. but good
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Old 10-21-2002, 05:32 PM
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I don't think you even tried, I've seen soldier write better than this, this is skillless

"freestyles taking a tour and im just a starter
when i take a shit my dick hits the water"


"oh no stop the flow im bout to get sick here it goes
how it goes is friends or foes catch bows
and bloody nose hoes get dirty dildos
kicked in with steel toes
for dissing mah flows"- great flow on this one....

"To a skezzer i teaser pleaser and leave her
i got more ice then a damp iceberg shirt in the freezer,"

Come on Dejaun your better than this
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