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Cut Old Self-Inflicted @ 03-08-2006, 03:10 AM
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Word by word, I let my thoughts form into shapes
Composing Poetry, so daily, as a chance of escape
It's great until I'm beggin' for care to exchange
For couple seconds of insight where one would arrange
An opinion, self-infliction, one's mind is estranged
Too strange, through my rants I admit I'm deranged...
It's a phase, something an individual must overcome
A stage, a dedicated period when I'm Crazee to some
I'm lazy and done, I can't continue on with myself
Refuting my own argument, I put my life on that shelf
I need help, I won't go on about saying it any other way
I'm astray and day by day I'm running out of things to say
I've yet to pay, a sensible soul that's been terrorized
My actions are inevitable yet they remain unjustified
I commit a crime, except it's an act with too many motives
It's reasonable to an extent, quite easy to be noticed
I'm explosive, trying to remain calm and cohesive
It's attempting enough when friends beg me "please if...
You help me out, I'll do anything for you"
Because it's humorous to know they haven't got a clue
"I'm not too fond of you," it hurts just as much
To when a stranger says "I know people like you and such"
It's a curse, and I sit here with complaints and cuts
Overdose my eyes with these tears 'cause they just won't shut
Self-Inflicted violence, my words advocate evasion
I scream out in silence as pain completes its invasion
Such sensation, self-expression limits my breath
Revealing myself to the world is pleading for death...
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Old Re: Self-Inflicted @ 03-09-2006, 01:44 AM
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Cot damn, that poem pwns.

"It's a phase, something an individual must overcome
A stage, a dedicated period when I'm Crazee to some
I'm lazy and done, I can't continue on with myself
Refuting my own argument, I put my life on that shelf
I need help, I won't go on about saying it any other way
I'm astray and day by day I'm running out of things to say"

Word
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No resurrection, Christianity would have never spread
The disciples werenít stupid guys who would ruin their lives
And then choose to die for what they knew was a lie
That would be beyond ridiculous- Nah, the issue is
The risen Christ seen by 500 eye-witnesses
Imagine 500 people in a court of law
Each of them taking the stand reporting what they saw
If their stories lined up and made sense
The evidence would have to leave you convinced
But still itís by faith that we trust and praise the Son
Who was raised for our justification

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Old Re: Self-Inflicted @ 03-09-2006, 02:01 AM
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^Word.....this one owns,...great deal of emotion.....10/10
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Old Re: Self-Inflicted @ 03-09-2006, 08:20 PM
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Thanks guys. Laa feels <3ed.
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Old Re: Self-Inflicted @ 03-09-2006, 08:41 PM
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Man, I know you use Crazee because you <3 me... but it's confused me reading your depressed poems that use it before because I was like "Is that a hint?" lmao
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Old Re: Self-Inflicted @ 03-09-2006, 10:25 PM
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lol Who knows? Maybe they are clues...? ...
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Old Re: Self-Inflicted @ 03-09-2006, 10:44 PM
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Aww

Laa, I <3 it!!

"I've yet to pay, a sensible soul that's been terrorized
My actions are inevitable yet they remain unjustified
I commit a crime, except it's an act with too many motives
It's reasonable to an extent, quite easy to be noticed
I'm explosive, trying to remain calm and cohesive....."

Laa fait le Cri de Jen..
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Old Re: Self-Inflicted @ 03-10-2006, 01:14 AM
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thats deep
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Old Re: Self-Inflicted @ 03-10-2006, 06:54 AM
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baby it rocks!!!!
that is the best rap i have evvver read!!!
you r better than Eminem himself laa!!
yo!!
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Old Re: Self-Inflicted @ 03-10-2006, 11:38 PM
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Thanks Jen and Instigator

And lol @ Chelsy.. I kind of doubt that but thanks anyways hun
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Old Re: Self-Inflicted @ 03-10-2006, 11:51 PM
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Your welcome
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Old Re: Self-Inflicted @ 03-11-2006, 07:51 AM
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haaa!!!
she meant me dork!!!!
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Old Re: Self-Inflicted @ 03-12-2006, 10:22 PM
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Damn girl, that was awsome, i loved it...



I live like 2 hours from you laa, we should party,lol
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Old Re: Self-Inflicted @ 03-12-2006, 11:19 PM
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thanks

lol really? where do you live?
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Old Re: Self-Inflicted @ 03-13-2006, 03:04 AM
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Baaack offfffff
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