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Old Round 2 vs. Ill~licyt @ 05-31-2003, 12:58 AM
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Yo, yo, yo……

I’m easily defeating-his-thesis, the only “head he could beat”-here’s-his-penis
He “doesn’t know how to be Ill” (Ill~licyt), so this geezer must be-an-amnesic//
Exceeding-ingenious in rhyme-so-hold-tight, like flat tires your lines-“don’t-roll-right”
You don’t just em-body whackness, you take it to a “mind-and-soul-height”//
I might-dissolve-lines with acid, just to neutralise your “basic”-verses
When I maim-this-herb-it’s “far from fair”, cuz the clown escaped-the-circus!//
deflate-your-purpose when I cork-this-bitch, all your doing is talking-shit
And your “flow is more inconsistent” than……a menopausal-bitch!!!//
Call-in-sick again kid(*), cuz you don’t got-nuff-talent to cop-the-ballots
This kid’ll “drop off tight lines” like a rope walker that lost-his-balance//
Stop-the-battle contorting-your-neck, battling me is a calling-for-death
Anyone who says you can rap well must be “pulling” much more-than-your-leg//
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Old 05-31-2003, 12:59 AM
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impissed thats really dope bro....same with the one before this with the FUCK BITERS shit....now do me a favour and vote on Flo vs. Hype...thanks...
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Old 05-31-2003, 10:54 PM
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I'm not fuckin' with that site anymore. Shit's gay, but nice verse, man... could use a little work on the multi's and the wording, but the punches have good content. The amnesia punch on his name was an ill as fuck concept, just needed to be written better. Same for the pulling your leg line... maybe somethin' like "ya dickrider's are jokes... sayin' you're ill they must be pullin' your 3rd leg" - makes the concept real clear, with less words but with tighter wordplay. Not tryin' to change your style though... that's just me.

"I might-dissolve-lines with acid, just to neutralise your “basic”-verses
When I maim-this-herb-it’s “far from fair”, cuz the clown escaped-the-circus!//
deflate-your-purpose when I cork-this-bitch, all your doing is talking-shit
And your “flow is more inconsistent” than……a menopausal-bitch!!!//
Call-in-sick again kid(*), cuz you don’t got-nuff-talent to cop-the-ballots
This kid’ll “drop off tight lines” like a rope walker that lost-his-balance//"

This portion was solid.
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Old 05-31-2003, 11:36 PM
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thanks^^, appreciate the constructive feedback
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Old 06-08-2003, 09:13 AM
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deflate-your-purpose when I cork-this-bitch, all your doing is talking-shit
And your “flow is more inconsistent” than……a menopausal-bitch!!!//


^^that bit was good....
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Old 06-08-2003, 12:49 PM
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That was a decent drop, not as solid as the 'fuck biters' one though. This had some nice wordplay and multi's 2, but they kinda sound a touch out (think I Love That described it best). The other verse was a very natural sounding verse, if you get me. Still pretty dope though.

" Call-in-sick again kid(*), cuz you don’t got-nuff-talent to cop-the-ballots
This kid’ll “drop off tight lines” like a rope walker that lost-his-balance//"

that was tight
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