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Old Rotwilah feat,Ping'n"Fuck it" @ 08-14-2002, 06:12 PM
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This song is by me and my friend from school.We all called him pinguin cuz he look like one when he run,but now everyone just call him Ping'n.I like it better too.

Chorus
(Ping'n)
You try to stop me?(fuck it)
You try an maul me?(fuck it)
You can't touch me(EVER)
You can't budge me(EVER)

Verse 1
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Yall little motherfuckers can't say shit to me,
I'll turn around slap yo ass just like a G,
Try and rap better than we?
It wont work,cuz we aint got to try to make them hoes twurk,
They call Ping'n cuz I'm a little big,
least I don't go around tryin ta fuck a pig,
Yo I'm the baddest nigga ya ever laid eyes on,
I'll whoop ya ass with tires from 'Auto Zone'
You can't touch this flow,
you just a little ho,
I'm a let me homey Rot bust on you next,
cuz when I finish,you feelin like you just had sex,

Chorus X2

Verse 2
(Rotwilah)
Like my little homey said,
ya can't fuck with us cuz we'll shoot ya in the head,
make sure ya ass is dead,
You want some of me bitch?(yeah)
Bring ya little ass over and I'll whoop ya like a snitch(UH!)
I'll light you up like Tyson with one punch,
this is ain't no mystery no don't give me a hunch,
cuz 90 percent of yall bitches won't do shit,
so we'll just walk up and get you pistol whipped!
We bout as ill as they come,
when you see us better run,
even if we ain't got beef I might start swingin',
like Mike Tyson when he see three women,
I wont never go to jail,
cuz if I do I won't have a chance for bail
with all the shit I do,
I'll leave dead in cold blood without even touchin you!

Chrous X2

Verse 3:
Ping'n:Bring it on nigga,
think I'm scared to pull the tigga?
Rot:Cuz trust me yall we aint
We'll fuck you up worse than Ann Frank
Ping'n:And dont think we playin cuz I swear to fuck we not
Rot:I spit,hit,kick, then throw on you my snot

Chorus X4

Outro

Ping'non't fuck around NIGGA!
Rot:We got dis shit all out.We dont play!We dont kid!Fuck around and you'll find out,BITCH!
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Sad Old 08-14-2002, 09:43 PM
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Damn Dis is nice
some West Coast
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Old 08-15-2002, 04:48 PM
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Thanks.I have several songs with many othre of my friends.They include Slick Nick,Ping'n,Tank,Roach,and J-Style.We got our own little group and a mix-tape.But we ain't got no music.All we got is our producer doin freestyle shit.It sounds pretty good tho'.We got some solo songs,and some group songs too.Around 18 songs altogether I beleive.
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Old 08-17-2002, 09:27 PM
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This was real good.The only part that was bad was the length of the third verse.You and Ping'n do much better than you and everyone else I think.This was some good shit.An 8 out of 10
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Old 08-18-2002, 04:54 AM
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6/10

Because... I felt the rhymes were a lil' basic, at some points it shined but parts of it seemed like you was rhyming for the sake of it.. Rotwilah did this a lot less than Ping'N tho.. Verses were a little too short in my opinion.. And a lot of the punches/topics have been majorly played out.. Not bad though..

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Old 08-18-2002, 07:19 AM
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I thought this was horrible. Rot wasn't as bad as Ping', but even your verse wasn't very good.

"Try and rap better than we?"

Tell Ping'n to not force rhymes and try and make it sound as natural as possible.
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