Ghetto Ninja
01-12-2004, 03:23 PM
RULES
->5 bar minimum(10lines)-15 bars(30lines) *quality OVER quantity!
-Votes MUST be explained in order to count
-NO DICKRIDIN/CREW/BEEF votes allowed (Me Or Mentol will know when this happens)
-The emcee with who get's 5 votes first WINS
-OR, if one emcee get's 3 votes in a row, then it's a TKO meaning somebody got KNOCKED THE FUCK OUT!! (KO'S will be recorded)
-The voting is eleigable to any1 with over 25 posts or in tha tournament or not as long its explained-
-aswell, no creating new sn's to vote fer urself that will cause immediate loss, an i will do what i can to get u banned
MUST, check in BY.. FRIDAY JANUARY 16TH, VERSES DUE SUNDAY JAN. 18TH AT MIDNIGHT EASTERN!
Let's get crackin' Shall we? Haha...
I'ma Foster this Oni, Watch as C02 leave scars on this imposter//
Oni can't an will never harm me, jus' like closet monsters//
I'm leavin dis kid speechless, not usin his primary//
Cause I made this fag shut his mouth like I was a fuckin library//
I can't encriminate on the haste of this rhyme plus additional hate//
MCD is a mneumonic device used fo faggots who bite//
Trust my style as it gets ya head full-a hope like Em in 8 mile//
It's gon' be official i Murder this Oni like culprit wit bullshit as i input my initials//
I Take time in my rhymes to carefully diss you, Got you burnt back so bad-fags wanna kiss you//
You let Myst an B' hang off ya sack, Dawg you speak no truth so gimme a holla back//
I'm so tired of dissin this kids wit lyrical lashes, while C stands up an takes pandemonious bashes//
Oni steps back as I clap back at this pusilanimous wit unanimous attacks//
I spit hot dimes on a nickle piece as you spew lyrical beef as I pull the sword from the sheath//
So get on yo knees and suck dick, spend the day massagin yer knee caps//
I'm pretty sure Oni an Myst would suck dick just tah get some positive feedback//
I get back to this dude with lines that's a Mystery as we go back to Oni-legend history//
MCD's an anagram- you get blown up alphabetically, You wanna learn-Follow me-//
M is fo the Men you fucked, C is fo the cock you sucked, D is fo the dick you dangle from-kissin nuts//
I'm gonna knock off wit the fag jokes as I let this gag choke you wit a noose-tied-rope!!//
If I needed a lyricist tah drown me, i'd bound me down and crown me king//
I'm gonna finish this rhyme with one I had time to do, This murder case looks like on fo-Scooby Dooby Doo...
Damn...There. I didn't stress everything, I don't have time...Thanks.
ok ok..
I'll-blow-back-CO2's-ass like smoke-from-fagz cuz this no-hope-ho took the stage then choked-and-ran
This Pro's-flowz-are-whack and so's-his-rapz...I'll dislocate-the-bones-in-both your arms and make-ya-shoulderz-clap!
go
CO2 back for more when I'm-slappin-kidz-out-the-game - kid-ya-rapz-is-lame and you're prolly the 100th cat to make an acronym-out-my-name (MCD)
yeah ACRONYM not ANAGRAM - you got ya verbalz-wrong-again/
Shit I'll take this bitch SWIMMING and REPLACE-CO2-WIT-OXYGEN
you'z not-a-vet and still you stayin-mad-at-me? you-faggot-bring-the-cavalry..you got SO MANY KIDS ON YOUR ASS and a 'TYKE'-IN-YA-ANAL-CAVITY!
I'll-kill-you-savagely// its evident ya steez-aint-hot-yet
and I'm 'BLOWIN CO2 OFF' like i got a METHANE-PROBLEM -
damn - I'll make sure when we battle ya barz-are-wasted -it's-time-i-stated that you're verses are SLIM PICKINGS like an EMINEM-TEA-PLANTATION
you-faggot-face-it you aint hot-so-stop seeking-fame - ya-speech-is-lame and cuz CO2 IN MY LUNGS the only reason I SPEAK-YA-NAME!
Please-leave-the-game - I hit so hard I'll leave-ya-dome-thundered
and kid..we gonna BE HAVING WORDS REAL SOON..like EXCHANGING-PHONE-NUMBERZ
this-attention-seeker claims to be a true sentence-speaker - but it's Evident Oni-be-the-only Kid puttin dentz-in-speakerz
this-vet-needz-fresh-briefz - I'm-the-head-to-teach-ya
cuz at the moment you just 'PUSSY'-FOOTING around - like 'PETZ'-in-sneakerz
sonned....
Floetry
01-17-2004, 08:46 PM
Punches: MCD
Wordplay: MCD
Flow: MCD
Multis: MCD
Vote: MCD
this-vet-needz-fresh-briefz - I'm-the-head-to-teach-ya
cuz at the moment you just 'PUSSY'-FOOTING around - like 'PETZ'-in-sneakerz
^lmao
damn - I'll make sure when we battle ya barz-are-wasted -it's-time-i-stated that you're verses are SLIM PICKINGS like an EMINEM-TEA-PLANTATION
^ill
Cause I made this fag shut his mouth like I was a fuckin library//
^Co2, try some more lines like this...wordplay and such...
Bernard
01-17-2004, 08:58 PM
Ah.. CO2 dropped the ball and MCD did less than normal.
CO2 punches missed or landed softely, the multies and flow were average.
MCD had a few punches, some clever lines, poor stucture in the middle of it, but his multies were much better.
vote - MCD
slimfrikinshady
01-18-2004, 04:46 PM
CO2
MCD's an anagram- you get blown up alphabetically, You wanna learn-Follow me-//
M is fo the Men you fucked, C is fo the cock you sucked, D is fo the dick you dangle from-kissin nuts//
MCD
CO2 back for more when I'm-slappin-kidz-out-the-game - kid-ya-rapz-is-lame and you're prolly the 100th cat to make an acronym-out-my-name (MCD)
yeah ACRONYM not ANAGRAM - you got ya verbalz-wrong-again/
I thought feeding was illegal?
aint in the rules...plus it was one line..and it shows this wasn't recycled..
slimfrikinshady
01-18-2004, 06:24 PM
I know it's not technically in the rules, but everybody knows it's frowned upon.. just puts whoever goes first at a disadvantage.
whatever.. I'm sure foc ain't gonna say shit, so my votes for MCD.
better punches, multies, and all around flow.
I'll-blow-back-CO2's-ass like smoke-from-fagz cuz this no-hope-ho took the stage then choked-and-ran
This Pro's-flowz-are-whack and so's-his-rapz...I'll dislocate-the-bones-in-both your arms and make-ya-shoulderz-clap!
^ nice
Ghetto Ninja
01-18-2004, 06:54 PM
no i'm not... look i didnt make it rules that was my bad.. BUT one line aint nuthin... it happens anymore... its done wit auto loss... thats in my fault... rules r gunna change round for round n e ways.. i'm makin cats show versatility...
[]\/[]CD moves on..