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View Full Version : Gotta be Grimey Snippet Josh 08-04-2002, 08:45 PM Gotta Be Grimey Audio Snippet! Rough Copy of snippet from mine and Phrozens track "Gotta Be Grimey" www.d-eliteworld.com/josh/grimeysnippet.mp3 Check it leave me feedback Shout outs to Rosco and Dirty Lee lol Josh 08-05-2002, 04:37 PM Sleep on my threads and die Josh 08-05-2002, 09:35 PM I SAID!!! SLEEP ON MY THREAD AND DIE! Josh 08-06-2002, 07:55 PM I SUPPOSE U ARE ALL GOING TO DIE THEN! Spike 08-06-2002, 08:05 PM I don't do audio's so my opinion probably don't mean much but to be honest your voice is pretty rough/harsh and the music sample you used is very soft so your voice sounded outta place. The lyrics didnt seem to flow with the music either. Basically I don't find any good points on this other than I can tell you probably can rap alot better if you speed it up and get a rougher sample. Josh 08-06-2002, 08:11 PM Very good point The Flow was on beat But.... with my deep rough Voice it sounds fucked up like Proofs verse on Purple Hills The lyrics are a bit soft for my Voice same for beat Thanks for feedback man Spike 08-07-2002, 07:29 AM Originally posted by Josh Very good point The Flow was on beat But.... with my deep rough Voice it sounds fucked up like Proofs verse on Purple Hills The lyrics are a bit soft for my Voice same for beat Thanks for feedback man n/p but I'd say you need to do a few tracks like "sticky fingaz". Your voice reminds me of him (that's a compliment) Josh 08-07-2002, 04:53 PM Thanks man seeing your the only person that has left feedback the rest of you are lazy bastards here http://joshuamartin.dmusic.com/music/stream/lofi/12376 ^^ LOFI http://joshuamartin.dmusic.com/music/stream/hifi/12376 ^^ HIFI http://www.d-eliteworld.com/josh/grimeysnippet.mp3 ^^ MP3 Now you aint even gotta download it just stream it :) Josh 08-08-2002, 04:14 PM U lazy bastards quit sleeping on my threads i madep opular threads such as Amber so atleast leave me feedback you whores Reflection 08-08-2002, 08:31 PM Cool beat. I liked it. T1 Req 08-08-2002, 08:58 PM That'd be you in the first verse...quality's better than that other one but your flow and delivery still suffer. Flow was on beat but pretty dull, all the bars were the same length and it sounded kind of static...shit sounded like that in the 80s, I think flows tend to be smoother and more fluid nowadays. Keep it up though, you're probably better than me already lol. By the way, do you spend a lot of time masturbating? Only you still seem unable to see the MC forums where things like this go. Josh 08-09-2002, 12:39 AM Thanks for advice feedback ect Yes thats rough copy Quality is Ass ive mixxed up the flow a bit i post link when track is complete |