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Josh
08-04-2002, 08:45 PM
Gotta Be Grimey Audio Snippet!
Rough Copy of snippet from mine and Phrozens track "Gotta Be Grimey" www.d-eliteworld.com/josh/grimeysnippet.mp3 Check it leave me feedback Shout outs to Rosco and Dirty Lee lol

Josh
08-05-2002, 04:37 PM
Sleep on my threads and die

Josh
08-05-2002, 09:35 PM
I SAID!!! SLEEP ON MY THREAD AND DIE!

Josh
08-06-2002, 07:55 PM
I SUPPOSE U ARE ALL GOING TO DIE THEN!

Spike
08-06-2002, 08:05 PM
I don't do audio's so my opinion probably don't mean much but to be honest your voice is pretty rough/harsh and the music sample you used is very soft so your voice sounded outta place. The lyrics didnt seem to flow with the music either. Basically I don't find any good points on this other than I can tell you probably can rap alot better if you speed it up and get a rougher sample.

Josh
08-06-2002, 08:11 PM
Very good point
The Flow was on beat
But.... with my deep rough Voice it sounds fucked up like Proofs verse on Purple Hills
The lyrics are a bit soft for my Voice same for beat
Thanks for feedback man

Spike
08-07-2002, 07:29 AM
Originally posted by Josh
Very good point
The Flow was on beat
But.... with my deep rough Voice it sounds fucked up like Proofs verse on Purple Hills
The lyrics are a bit soft for my Voice same for beat
Thanks for feedback man n/p but I'd say you need to do a few tracks like "sticky fingaz". Your voice reminds me of him (that's a compliment)

Josh
08-07-2002, 04:53 PM
Thanks man seeing your the only person that has left feedback the rest of you are lazy bastards here

http://joshuamartin.dmusic.com/music/stream/lofi/12376
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LOFI

http://joshuamartin.dmusic.com/music/stream/hifi/12376
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HIFI

http://www.d-eliteworld.com/josh/grimeysnippet.mp3
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MP3

Now you aint even gotta download it just stream it :)

Josh
08-08-2002, 04:14 PM
U lazy bastards quit sleeping on my threads i madep opular threads such as Amber so atleast leave me feedback you whores

Reflection
08-08-2002, 08:31 PM
Cool beat. I liked it.

T1 Req
08-08-2002, 08:58 PM
That'd be you in the first verse...quality's better than that other one but your flow and delivery still suffer. Flow was on beat but pretty dull, all the bars were the same length and it sounded kind of static...shit sounded like that in the 80s, I think flows tend to be smoother and more fluid nowadays. Keep it up though, you're probably better than me already lol.

By the way, do you spend a lot of time masturbating? Only you still seem unable to see the MC forums where things like this go.

Josh
08-09-2002, 12:39 AM
Thanks for advice feedback ect
Yes thats rough copy Quality is Ass
ive mixxed up the flow a bit i post link when track is complete