aight hea it is....

Rulez

First to 5 Votes
Must Include Opponents Name
20 Bars

Aight Hea It Is.. It's Been Awhile Gotta Get Back In Tha Swing A Thangs'---

Yo.. Yo... Yo...

Exodus what?; you think you are a REAL emcee?/
hence why u even tryin ta walk in an battle~me/
ur "whack" shit can't even mentally rattle-me/
your like "Tyson" while i'm like "Lewis" & "Holyfield" combined/
can't even handle tha way ma "text" comes out strongly defined/
i'm totally sublimed ma style changes; your jus locked on rewind/
ya stuck back in the 80's style; while i'm totally~ravenous/
spit linguistic combinations; your jus totally~talentless/
i'm always winning; your always losing; its like ur stuck in abstinance/ (SP?)
subordinate is tha only word thats explains u an "your~shit!/
subtropical doesn;'t even explain me an ma toal "motion"~rips/
u jus ride; damn i guess i should try to take ma dick from your "open~lips"/
try an actually "come hard"; stop ridin' "dick"; those are ma "open"~tips/
ah, well; tha "truth~hurts" an u must b addicted to losing/
its not ma fault ur weak an this "epedemic" is causin pure bruising/
i hit hard!; whys that?; it's cause your "whole life" is a walkin punch~line/
from what i've seen it's like ur hulusinating on shrooms; what, d'ya go munch~mine?/
I'm a cannibal; eatin' ya "whole"; this is jus tha beginnin' its jus' ma lunch~time/
damn, now it cums down ta crunch~time; can u handle this "TRU" subliminal~rhyme?/
vatos~lacos holmes; fuck! see i'll hit ya multiple ways. Now I end it. When it's bilingual~time//

Not ma best but there it is.....

~eZ~

Complex concepts in context too intricate shock ya optics bitch
Your basic(bay sick) like San Fransisco citizens in doctors offices/
Drop your gossip shit, i plot the rawest scripts, ya bars suck
I'll bitch smack Focus, literally leave him star struck/
I scar shmucks watch their hearts bust, i pity coward flocks
Focus's power's stopped his 'time is up' like city tower clocks/
Rip these counter shots? You cant amount my pun showers
You couldnt succeed(suck seed) with yer mouth in sun flowers/
One round or two im liable to drop kids with rifles n glock clips
My objective is to wipe evil away like bibles n crosses/
Rival my raw shit? Im ya idol the prophet who leaves yer spine riled
To test you must be a 'basket case' like Easter crime trials/
I'll beat your rhyme style consisting of choppy flow n meek threats
I defeat your mind child, half assed audios and weak text/
Im elite, divine now, the versitile type to murder you right
Every song of yours exposes your pitiful personal life/
I'll leave you with a vertical slice, from shoulder to cervix bitch
Claiming you won the fight, "But, my face hurt his fists!"/
Pathetic verbalist, i'll sacrafice ya raps n mics to satisfy my appetite
Im fast to slice ya double lengthed text thats only half as nice.../




not my best either, but thats all i need

wtf???
not one vote???

UPPIN HEA!! DON'T SLEEP!!!!

~eZ~

hello.. not 2 bad of a battle.. shouldnt be gettin slept on..hmm

FOCUS
*had sum nice use of vocab
*disses were not 2 bad
*you lines were 2 long and your rhymes were stretched out 2 much.....
*try 2 focus more on your wordplay

exodus
not 2 bad wit tha disses at all
*good use of multiples and flow was nice
*had sum punches :)
*i like tah suck seed line

my vote is exodus
peace

LMAO styles p. bit agian,..

focus,..you were bitting by styles p....i belive..i'll come back to vote on this later

I would vote for exodus, his flows better

yo focus u my bro and shit but exodus got you on this... ur verse was ok but definitly seen better from you

exodus had some clever multies and a few good punchers that won it for him


vote-exodus

wrdplay- exodus
punchlines- exodus
flow- both
multies-exodus
vocab- focus

vote exodus

felt he am beter with the diss an flow wise,..
nthing taken away from focus yu done good for the fact you havent writen a rhyme in a while

This was a nice battle a real good read, good vocab and punchs!!!
but i gotta vote Exodus

Exodus wins i love intersting rhymes