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**no rap allowed on this thread**

**from don_juan**Boiling blood incidious lies
Destructive forces of the institutionalized
Everything falls apart
Tearing at mankind's heart
To make the unholy man
Sinister power plays
Manipulation of the people for nothing they pay
Sought after peace
But peace left as contractual release
Marching on into oblivion
Learning to live through nothing but devastation

Free. Free me from this life of misery
Wounds that never heal for all to see
My black heart falling through the cracks
Of this man who once was
Marching on into nothingness
Darkness drags me back to helplessness
Lost in my will
Nothing to do
I guess to survive I might as well kill

I look to see the skeletons of a weak society
Never lived because I never knew me
Always running from the truth
To kill off my forgotten youth
For the power is no one's and nothing
Left swimming to sink
Sinking to swim
As the current tears me limb from limb
March on through those seas of blood that surround
Raining blood to soak the ground

I Call This "Little Things" about a girl I know. It's soon gonna become a song.

I know…… I may have
Said you were a bitch
Even though you are one //
So….. I could care less
Cuz if you are one,
You need to be called one //
Hoe… I ain’t intimidated
By your moms, ain’t scared of ya father //
Whoa…. I think we need to talk
Cuz me and you got this little problem //

Little things
Little Things
The little things
And it’s all on you //

Those little things
Little things
The little things
That you always do //

Listen…
In a relationship, I don’t always have to strut like I wear the pants
But I’m ante-up, I go pee-pee standing up, which makes me the man //
Sometimes you’re kinda rude, so why the hizzel are you looking’ mean
You suck, I ain’t never once begged you to cook and clean //
I hate girls who don’t work, don’t braid hair, don’t wash no dishes
Snot-nosed, but then they flip-out when you call them bitches //
But if you call me that, then it’s no big
Trick you better lea me lone for a split yo wig //

Little things
Little Things
The little things
And it’s all on you //

Those little things
Little things
The little things
That you always do //

So lea me loooooOOOOOoooone
Bitch woman lea me lone (Girl ya better lea me lone)
So lea me loooooOOOOOoooone
Bitch woman lea me lone (I just need to be alone)

Verse 2: (Slow Voice)
These days, all these women do is nag
But if you put up with that shit, then you’s the fag //
This one goes out to a special girl
Who’s broken my heart, you know who you are //
Get mad when I say you don’t smoke in the car
You lucky I’m not a girl, I woulda broken your jaw //
Heartless… Ain’t that a mother fucker
Scratched up my hood, stuck a banana in my muffler //
You evil, one of the baddest in the city
Playing games, I outta stab you in the tittie //
But I wont, so you can go and whine on the phone
I can’t help it if my dick has a mind of its own //
You say that’s just how them boys is
I think you’re fulla shit, go sit on the toilet //
Damn you selfish, but you ain’t my master
So you can go to hell you inconsiderate bastard //

that was dope as hell vile

vile that was tight man i qwuite liked hoe well it wuz written now its time to show everyone WHY i'm really ILL at poetry an have gotten lil awards for em... ;)

Life As It Stays
Ever since birth, The hearts been compromised;
The minds been disfunctional and depressed,
With nothing but constant thoughts of suicides,
I Tried every drug to rid the feelings in my chest..

More than once a knifes slid along these wrists,
Multiple pills have murdered the heart and eased wits,
Nuthin but blood has poured out of these fists,
But still, i went and screwed my life just to please kids..

The taste of tears; is the only thing i've ever known,
Gang wars, agony and pain, consumed all my thoughts;
Maybe once have I felt what it means to be loved at home,
It NOW seems that joy may only exist when I wrought..

Buried deep in the earth will I eventually lay happily,
That's the ONLY way I see anything good happening;
The vision of my optic is covered over with pain,
My depresssion always wins, like a feind and cocaine...

Life has simply been one way and only one way,
Crossed somewhere between slumping an death;
Still now the heart wishes to feel good someday,
And the mind wants other things than some meth..

Only IF things could change and actually be so simple,
Life wouldn't be rotten engulfed with pure gore.
Everything in its entirety, never flips around;
Where As..
I don't fear death. But really, fear itself; I fear more..

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Carving Of A Death Pt.I(Collab)

-FocuS-
With a brush of sorrow my mind begins to collapse,
For that moment, I felt as if it was all my fault;
It's like I see blood and lock into some sort of relapse,
As my veigns're shootin pain like a catapault..

I stand alone, burnin prolific thoughts of the devil,
While my bodies feeling cold like canadian winters,
I didn't do it but; but still i feel as if dropped to their level
Leavin the pain visible to the world like splinters..

Some how I've gotta break out from this abnormality,
I only did it because, living on the streets is all Desperation
The pressure emerges but it never ends with formality,
Cause ya can't fight whats only in your imagination..!!

Essence™
Constantly witnessing insecurity, I'm the prey?
I feel my own skin pores from my bones; abandoned
Nothing to gain, nothing to lose - Feelings frozen
My own entrails detect the horror; I stand idle as targets

The appearence of many left, but I could not ascend from this entity
How could I wake from this burden? now left forever in hell's grasp
I drown in the negativity, but could not confront the fear
I wish to stop a child from falling, a woman from dying, or even tears

Constantly searching for the key to escape, it flashed before me to see cowards run
My consciousness left locked in the picture, forever framed, I stood guiilty in
The reflection of death, not one could break it
For A Death Is A Death Is A Death....

Slowly die within
Bury me in sin
I don't know where I begin
And my pain ends
Secret to myself
Destruction through no wealth
Broken man taken down
Where the world is sent

See into my mind
Am I truly blind
Losing my only thing that stays
Yet my demons can't keep away
I need to see something other than darkness
Without you I feel so helpless
Save me from the voices within
As the decay of my soul begins

Lost my soul
Finding my heart down in a hole
Can't even free my eyes
From the lies
Within my mind
Redemption can't be lost
But there is only one cost

Death of the one thing that keeps my demons at bay
But still the pain stays
As true as the needles as they leave my veins
And only in a dream do I have peace
Must find a way
To stop the pain I pay
Numbing the flesh and bones
But truly left all alone

Take one shot to fall
Take one to destroy it all
Another needle in vein
Curing me of pain
Taking away fear
Not to find but oh so clear

Finding faith in my fear
Stealing my feeling to remain clear
Give me just another reason to die
Instead of life I'm just given a lie
I stay away from myself
It's not good for me or my health
But it's kept me alive for long enough
Soldier out to die seeming so tough

I try to find my way to heaven
But nothing's found
Won't even make me born again
I ask what's so amazing
I try to find out why
My only friend misery always lies
I just wish it would give up and die

Slow madness through decay
Insanity is all that stays
I try to keep away from the pain
But it keeps from lying slain
Try to look inside
But even the soul has died
Finding faith
Finding fear in the faith of my destiny

Ahh might as well put something here, this is old but oh well...
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Realize that as you stand there
In a sea of blood and tears
The manifestation before you
Is the construction
Of torn flesh for years
Ripped pains and fears
Death Gains
From Death Games
On Stressed Frames
That Bear!
I am the construction
Of my destruction
As I make the fact
That the End is destruction
So Clear!
Rise forces
In mental forrest
As solemn mountains
Break silence
With removal
So fierce!
Off yonder
Think. Ponder.
Once calmer
Still quiet
Ripples,
Surges,
Speak
Reveal all fears.
Solid track
With no distract-
-ion,
I keep it flat
You leap attack
I strike it back
With all death it lands.
With none left it strands!
All life that lives...
I’ve talked it quiet
I’ve kept it silent
As you crept on by it
WHILE YOU KNEW!!!
“Don’t Try It!”
The masses fueling
The Solids Churning
Explosions into nothing
As if the unused
Vanished!?!?!?
Spent on foolish cares...
Building,
Dying,
It was once all trying...
But now arising
New freshly polished wares!
All mortals
Made mortal
All actions
Made pure
No connections to lives
Only motions decide
So from it,
You divide.
In the comfort of
Cutting, Calcified,
Solidified,
Iron like
Bone!
Inside
Confide
Inside I find
The Construct
Was Me!
I am dead you see.

Goodbye...

only poem I've ever written pieced back together from fragmented memories:

God talks to me when I'm high
He whispers secrets in my ear that no one else can hear
Yeah man, God talks to me when I'm high
His words make me tremble, and though I might not remember
God talks to me when I'm high
I've seen places that don't exist,
Spent hours lost on trips thinking thoughts like this
God talks to me when I'm high
Now, you may see me as a pothead in denial
But sometimes we see the most when our eyes are closed
So spark a bowl, take a peak at your soul
And let God talk to you for a while

"Look Around"
By: me

Look around
Look around at a nation born in sin
Ruin through rebirth
Trying to destroy this earth
Looking at the pain people are in
Sometimes all you can do is sit back and look around again

Look around
Look to see the hatred in man
Taking life with their own hand
Never knowing when their time will end
Look around at the flaws in what we are
No one's perfect but violence isn't who we are
Look around for the breaks in society
Look around for what means most to you and me

Look at the rebirth of the country I once knew
Look at the things we knew
Look at how much we grew
Look at the things we know
We still have more to grow
Look around for the peace to come around
Looking for a calm before the storm and hope it lasts
But we still know that it'll pass way too fast

Very good stuff here, very real. I read it all.
What is the difference between poem and rap? Am I dense?
Reason I am asking is I've got something I've written that is all text with no underlining verse that goes through it but could be a rap. (I do not have sound equip where I am at. I travel alot. Otherwise I'd have it on CD already.)
Eminem's rap contains vulgarity (just part of the language not for the sake of it), humor, a story, names names occassionally, violence...basically anything goes as long as it is good.
Does the same apply here?
Just asking, don't want to get 'banned for life' or offend the sensitive.
Anyway, I've got one in the chamber and ready to go. Just give me the word and I'll pull the trigger.
P.S. Sometimes it hard to carry a suitcase full of replies just so you can post. We are kind of inbetween albums and little news is made. I am sure if anyone had anything to say they would post or reply to posted posts.
P.P.S. I hated rap until E, now I am broadening my horizons and branching out/keeping an open mind and open ears.

I don't have much computer time so, if I'm going to get banned or whatever it's gonna happen. So be it.
Take into account my rhyming is weak and I am new to this. I wrote this a few days ago before I knew about the forum.
It's all true and that is why I don't have much online time now.
Busy doing other things... Here goes.
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This girl would be different, there would be no pain. One hundred degrees under a mid west sun and left standing in the rain. Watching the girl I fell for get into some hick’s pick up. This place is all twisted and royally fucked up. Little money, a shitty job, and alone all night. So angry inside, wanted to pick more than a fight. I was very provoked. Violent, insanely jealous, and choked. Jilted, packing a Taurus 9mm. This pissed off toad wanted to murder them both by the side of the road. I wasn’t nice anymore, rotten to the core. I could not take much more. Women playing games better stay away. I’m Jack the Ripper; not your boyfriend some Sling blade/Jack Tripper.

Long, curly, jet black hair; I couldn’t help but stare. A smile that would make your knees melt. Warmth that could be felt. Doe like eyes with heart shaped thighs. A+ cushions topped with chocolate chip nips. Crimson lips. She even had Jay-Lo’s hips. A latina Barbie doll, she could even give Ken a super sized boner. If Sandra Wheeler was a drug I’d deal her. Do not pass ‘Go‘, ‘Go Directly to Hell‘. Tried to resist but couldn’t, so (woody woodpecker noise) oh well. I asked her out. She was leaving her drunken, deadbeat, husband. Steven wasn’t much of a male, he spends most his time in jail.

What was I thinking getting excited for this skank bitch? Should have just tossed my heart in a ditch. Even tried to get in good with Shelley Clayton; her crazy bitch friend. I think they were just seeing how far I would bend. That’s where I thought it would end. Ain’t life a bitch! That’s when Sandra returned to him.

Steven brought home more 'Lucky Strikes' than North Carolina. Hey! Your husband confuses men’s assholes with vaginas. So, that’s why they call it the slammer. Oh dear, Steve’s queer. No wonder he drinks so much beer. Sandra best get an HIV test. Oh, I see, I’m the “prick”? Excuse me now while I go out and get sick.

I’m mad! Feel bad! Stabbed in the heart. What does it mean, when I can’t love someone that means so much to me? Better to die than to hurt inside. If she knows she doesn’t show. Helen Keller could see how I felt. Sandra treated me like dirt then pretended to be hurt. London, Spain, Phuket, Aberdeen, and all the places I have been. This place I never should have seen. The way US women treat men makes me ill. If you want a fight you are looking to get killed.

Disappear. Leave no trace. Leave here. Leave this job! Earn money, move where it’s sunny. Stomach is turning, chest tightening, acid burning my throat. Drowning in sorrow! Pressure is building, I’m going to explode! Will this constant pain ever go? Would sell my soul to get out of this hole. God knows I’d love her but he never answers my calls for help.

Got to get the Hell out of Redneck Heaven. I even thought of robbing banks or Seven Eleven's. Hijack a plane out to Europe or Asia. Why not? I didn't have a girlfriend, wife or any kind of a life. Then came Nine Eleven!

The world changed overnight. I met the woman of my dreams, at home, online. (modem noise) She invited me to her island palm. Her words made me calm. I don’t know what Sawitri saw in me but I had to meet this living dream. We had fun under a Far East Sun. She too had jet black hair, I couldn’t help but stare. Air brushed tan, 4 foot 10, oh man! She was all I ever asked for; straight forward and smart. Award winning Reuter’s artist stole my heart. Asked if she would be my wife. She jumped up off the floor. Threw her arms around me; she saved my life. Never would have guessed it the way I'd been treated before.

Hired by a 'Roughneck' crew. I’m talented. Who would have knew? I’m an I.T. Mercenary; field Intel my other specialty. Paid like a Doctor. Tax free 'Dog of War'. Even had to hire an Auditor. After the honeymoon escaped Redneck-Ville bound for the desert. Old frustration makes it easy to send Arab murders to oblivion. 'Plausible Deniability'. Out sourcing with ability. Better hide if you picked the wrong side. Let's ride! Grab a handful of magazines and the Swedish K. Lock and load! It’s time to play.

“Hey!, Hajji, take a look down this barrel. Before your brains exit stage left, give us your best impression of Will Ferrell.” (Moan) “Think that hurts? One more time for laughs. Who planted the fucking bomb?” (Arabic) “Convention? Geneva is a lake in Switzerland. Rules are for dead fools. Do I look Army to you? You see a uniform? Officially, I’m not here and neither are you. You should have stayed in Syria. You aren't going to Cuba. Sandra makes Iraq look like Bavaria.” (Arabic) “Don’t look at me like you’re stupid! No, not your camel, Osama. Okay, sort of, but with a twat and not quite as smart. Silly whore, tricks are for kids.” (Arabic) “For real, your camel likes Ricky Martin too. Camels are sick creatures. I always wondered who listened to that shit besides her!” (Arabic) “Him and Oday did what?” (Arabic) “I got it. I could have lived without the visual! You aren’t telling me anything I don't already know. Smiling won’t stop me from killing you. Say hello to Allah, you sick, degenerate, fuck! Better wail and get spiritual! It’s Buckwheat’s time! Get ready to die! Say bye, bye!” (Gunshot)

If I hadn’t found my wife; wouldn’t have a life. Would’ve put a gun to my head; almost certainly been dead. How many times did I have to fall before I fell for the right woman? Too fucking many! American women really aren’t all that. Sure they have pussies and can fuck. So what if trying to be with one of them sucks. Pack away the pies, part their thighs, and attract men like flies. Settle for less then cry when their lives are a mess. Sorry for the dis’sin but I’ve seen what you’ve been kissin‘.

Understand, there are billions of cuties that would kick your booties to have a decent man. I'm not the best but I do the best that I can. Walked on a tropical beach lately? Found your dignity? Accident I never should have made. An entire bottle of perfume couldn’t disguise what Sandra laid. Isn't the truth hard to swallow. Bitches like you are kind of shallow. I’m tired of being angry at all the whores that thought I was just trying to score when all I wanted was someone to love and adore.

I love my wife!

that was a pretty dope poem Oracle

I wanna kill the world/'specially all these stuck-up girls/layin on this cold flo'/waitin fo' him to knock on my do'/so we can kill together/like he said/are you afraid of a blade/I made/to chop off your head/and a gun to fill you up wit' lead/I'm gonna kill my mama/she put me through all this drama/I made her feel like i feel/cuz she got me/poppin' pills/I'm done wit' this shit/these wack lyr-ics are so past me... written 11/16/2003 (not today)

every-day/i think and say/this is gay/what i try to do/if you only knew/what i have to go through/every-day/poppin' pill after pill/cuz i aint got no deal/my best/friend left/stabbed me in the back/don't go to school n'more/i got kicked out...there/i fin'lly opened my mouth...hehe...

Somedays,
I'm just afraid-of-this-world/afraid-of-these-girls/dark forces are after-me/i'm thinkin', I could not have a-thee/all these people/laughin'-at-me,i'm the laughin' stock of- the-town/the gun in my hand/holdin'-the-round/but still ima shoot/not at the ground, but at the sky –KILL GOD/HE DID NOTHIN’ FO’ YOU, RAP FO’ THE SICK AND TWISTED- That’s what I’m thinkin’/’hear this ringin’/people ringin’ my neck, and I'm wishin' you would, just kill me/all these people, WANTIN' TO KILL ME, i know that/people have told me/people have tried/people do owe me/people will die...

well........that was nice mystery it really lite up my day (really)

thanks... -really-

Sometimes feeling slips away
Only pain and hate will stay
I try to find out what I have left
But only try to turn toward death
Nothing to fall back on
No mind left, since birth it's been gone
Scream into the darkness but not even an echo answers me
Left dead in the shell the world sees

Rejected for what I am
Born to be the sacrificial lamb
Die to say myself from my pain
But it keeps coming back again
Kill me once with words and again with blades
Either way I wish my pains to lie slayed
Deathly walls keep in boy
Never let him grow but allowing him to die
Living hell can't be found
Unless you look into my eyes

Some day I will feel nothing
No pain or fear will be my freedom's ring
Slow fall into the cage of man
Left to make my final stand
Slit my wrists let the pain bubble out
Nothing left inside
Sooner or later I'll lose it all
But the hollowness will save my life
Cursed cage
Lost to rage
I'd left beaten and battered
Scorned for nothing in my eyes
Intellegence is my one flaw
Persecution is the price

Something wicked found in my words
Against moralized murder
Hell spread through death's arms
And the final peace given by the whore he keeps by his side
Locking up in a hidden cage of my rage
Death in mind
Peace in heart
Nothing left to tear into me
But still what's left of mankind tears me apart
Blackness circles my veins and heart
What's left when you're left hollow
Nothingness left only to give into sorrow

What is this feeling that stirs my soul?
What is it that makes me yearn to hold
Her hand more than burn a bowl?
Last night she haunted my thoughts
‘course this is the case more often than not
why does her face cause my heart to stop?
That smile, those eyes, the touch of her skin
How did she go where no others have been?
I know, I’ve got it, must’ve been…

Love.

might as well post it here too...
its just poetry, so no one cares about it.
it sucks

Some times i lay down, in bed and just cry/
Feellin' all this pain, deep inside/
I lie to my friends...
i'm thinking "This is the end"/
No more hope/
I just slice at my wrist and throat/
I still wish for -no more pain-/
No more sadness in my life/
Nothing to gain/
So i should just stop it "right?"/
People saying i'll never reach my destony/
THEY'RE TESTING ME!!!/
I'LL NEVER REST IN PEACE!!!/
WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME?!!!/
Mystery!!/
Was something i made up/
a crazy idea, to be as another/
but it became part of me/
and now i don't know right from wrong/
SOMEONE PLEASE HELP ME!!!/
smoking a bong, to get away from this...world/
that will someday be gone/
and i'll be happy- no matter where i belong/
i wish for the end/
this is coming from my heart/
but you don't care "I BET!!!"/
i guess/
i just/
Feel like dieing wit no regrets/....

^^^^ yeah, you/it suck(s) Mystery

What It Is


Spark it like a flint, take a hint, its the government. ChromE spawn ya, conjure up the marijuna, got locked?
the courts wronged ya, to inform ya, its the former mentality of the people its the feeble, minds of holy men at steeples, got the minorities peoples resortin to the needles, just listen its about to get real'a.
Got us hooked on nicotene, caffeine, fiends feind for cream what haunts me is my dreams. Its the demon scheme's, womens screams, please people lets try to keep the scenes clean.
Its the domination of this so called powerful nation, persecution of all the races, track ya paces, seen so many faces, so many anger relations got my mind race'n.
Its hate dispersed, its girlfriends that flirt, faces in dirt its about to get worst, the earths first birth has already been cursed.
Its the crack, speed, meth, cocain, thirst for fame, acid rain, sulfur coated drains, check it im speakin from a different plane, rotted brains, claims to be insane, its still the same, just real fucking lame.
Its women claimin date rape, skins claimin straight hate, lets wipe the slate, help eachother to intergrate.
When its starts where will we turn too, who?, ya boo?, my crew?, or will ya just say "yo may...do you".
Its crews reppin, fake kids steppin, this mic I give a blessin, minds stress infection, deaths, hex flexin.
Its real sick hoes given real sick blows, commercial videos, curse of dough, desinger clothes, its tv shows, its Mayhems real sick flows.
Its theft, minds being spec checked, thugs who catch wreck, you must be deaf, aww fuck what it is, we only got 30 months left.

nice poems from all yall... we should have a poetry forum

THOSE WERE SOME REALLY GOOD POEMS. I ENJOYED READING THEM

I think about life
to ask myself why
should i even try
when all i gotta pull is a drivebye

just to think about it
life isn't shit
get high then quit
and F$% ALL the bullSH12


IS that right
N#$3a what
Choose bitch or cuz
I'm number one

wastin time today
to start bangin
i think I'm ready today
so you can press
replay
relay the message
Gangsta crip
for those that get the shit :p

Yo we can kick it
I'll kill that bitch
with some real
latin count shit :D

Once again
They have failed me
I've set myself up
Only to be let down

I should have known not to show my feelings
That they would just be thrown back in my face
I did it again
But this is the last time

From now on my heart is made of steel
And only I hold the key
I'm so sick of being fucked around
Them, they, you don't deserve me

This just shows that there is no one you can trust
In this time on this hateful planet
You think you know someone but you don't
They are evil behind a painted mask

He knew what I had been through
I told him everyhing
He acted like he actually cared
What a fool I have been

He was going to let me break my rule
That I had kept for two years
Just so he could have some fun
I'm thanking myself I didnt

Fuck him and the world he's in
Where he thinks he rules
Maybe I'll forgive him one day soon
But who really knows

© Under the copy right law. Don't Steal!

Depression, is more then an illness
It's a state of mind
It's like a fog that never lifts
It clogs your brain and
Enables you to think clear

Most of the time you wish to be alone
SO you can sit staring out the window and cry
You wonder how you sunk this low
You wonder why your still here
And you hope for the end

Why wait to die of natural causes
When you can cut decades off the clock
There is nothing left for you here
So you raise the razor to your wrist
And slice

A red river runs from your arm
Uncontrolable amounts of blood
The pain feels so good
You know thats wrong
But you can't stop now

You slice again and again
More and more blood seeps through
Your arm is stinging
And your head is spinning
You have to sit down

Look at what you've become
Weren't you once happy
Maybe, but you can't remember
You feel dizzy
Darkness engulfs you

It becomes more dark
And blood keeps seething from your arms
Your week, but this is too slow
You want to leave and quick
So you push the razor harder and further into you

Your eyes droop closed
You slump backwards
Unable to support yourself any further
Your blood has stained the white bathroom tiles
And you smile, for real, for the first time in ages
As you slip away

You hear beeping and people talking
Where are you
Your head is pounding
You open your eyes slowly and look around

Theres tubes running in and out of you
And your surroinded by machines
Everything around you is white
Are you in heaven
No it can't be

You see your mum, your dad
Your little brother and sister
And they're all crying for you
They care about you
They didn't want you to die

But you did
And this is part of it
You never get what you want
But they silently approch you
With blood shot eyes from crying

It's okay they say
We'll be here for you now
But you don't need them now
You needed them two years ago
When you we're sexually abused, when all this started

It'll be better now they say
As they embrase you in a hug
We'll get you help they say
And all this will be better
Inside you scream

Two months later yo ustill let the blood flow
Because threapy and medicine doesn't help
You fake smile and you no longer cry
You let your wrists do that
Because it's the only way you can escape

© Under the Copy Right Law. Don't steal!

That was a really good poem. u always have a way of making me cry and im saying that in a good way.

i always make you cry in a good way? what other times?

yeah this poem is really emotional for me too, many have nearly cryed when they read it.

Some people
Are to self indulged
In there own little problems
That they don't notice
The ones around them
Are in pain

Some people
Are so stupid
To think that they're in love
When it's just a phase
And the one they're with
Is hurting them

Some people
Just don't listen
When you try to help them
They think your trying to frame them
Get angry
But it's their fault really

But

Some people
Are so kind
You wonder if they spend
Any time on themselves
Because they're always there
Just when you need them

Some people
You can spill your thoughts to
And they understand
Your point of view
And you know
You'll never be judged

Some people
When they smile
You have to smile too
Because they lift your spirits
And let them soar free
They make you happy

Why are
All people
So differnt?

© Under the Copy Right Law. Don't steal!

I forgot that this thread even existed. since its so little in all.

Never give in.

Now I know I can rhyme
That was never in question
I just want live up and not be less than
What I can be and not get there through crime

Now that the walls are nearly closed in
To this new fate that I’ve chosen
You look around there’s no way out
There’s no more hope and the fear won’t stay out

Now I’m lost without a way
Nothing left for me to say
Out of the game, now I’m too afraid
Though I wish I would have played

But when I looked into the eyes
Of my son I started to realize
I’m not alone and never was,
I can’t give up, never because
Now on me he relies…

im feelin trapped in da cell with these chains strapped
on my wrist
so hard to break free that i cant resist it
screamin to be found
and later on I
found myself bound to this world
surrounded by the enviroment so strange to me
did'nt knew the basics of reality
i barely can see
i can't get rid of this blindness
too quiet in here i hear nothing but silence
out in the world all you can here is the sirence
feeling cold breeze through the dawn of life
i can't feel ease
looking back at man's shameful memories
i pray for da better days that lies beyond my eyez
so far i barely can see hope
im tryin so hard to hold on
tryin to be bold as much as i can
let me rise and move and leave the ground of misery from which i stand

Hi Chopper, I think your poem is BEAUTIFUL

Very cool Poems in ere. :D

yo wat sup ya'll

wheres all tha rappers at

At times like these I don’t know who to believe
Im on my knees askin god “Which of my loved ones chose to deceive?”
I write about the pain I receive in hopes that Ill be able to stop and breathe
Seems when I blaze trees is the only time the pain leaves
I feel so much stress this eve and its brought me to this level I’ve achieved
Hangin wit lil Gs beggin the lord please
Everything seems hopeless and the tears got everything outta focus
There ain’t no empty beer bottles or roaches just asshole teachers and coaches
These boundaries he encroaches hurry up this anger that approaches
They judge me without knowin what’s goin on in my life
And they don’t see why its so hard knowin wrong in my life
Now that my mistrust for everyone is growin strong in my life

here is some freestyle rap I wrote

yo
I have a chode
Im in shrink mode
tore up an ass, made it bleed
ejaculated and spread my seed
banged yo' granpa
sucked his dick
raped him so hard it made him sick
anal fistings are real good
I have anal sex in the hood
im a gay gansta and I fuck small boys
I play with my man,I use anus toys
I fuck goats, with my dick
I give their shitty anus a little lick
just rememba' my name is Elton J.
im the gay messageboard member
as you can all see

another

mel gibson on the bed screaming rape
off go my pants, in goes da' kenny g tape
I move in real slow and begin the job
anus opened up, in goes eltons knob
Mel, chained to the bed... is getting sick
but it keeps pumping, my fat old dick
mel, screaming... wanting to get away
but no, eltons on a mission...mels gonna stay
I ejaculate all over the spot
Elton likes this stuff a whole lot

This is called coping, hope u like to it or maybe can relate...


The pain can’t be touched can’t be felt unless your sensing it
The people who care think they know they try to help n shit

They divert from the subject so that they don’t have to mention it
You wanna get it out but that part of the brain you can’t get to it

Hiding in the clouds of your mind so unnatural
The only way to talk don’t hide your feelings you stupid fool

Intelligence was gained coz you went to college from school
And although the anger builds up you always gotta keep your cool

Coz people look up to you for dealing with stuff they haven’t
You just tell them that courage is a gift you’ve been sent

And the only way to move forward is by moving on
But sometimes it seems like that whole concept is wrong

Hoping for a change that would help mark the future
And hiding from the past was the way it seemed so sure

But looking back has helped me become the person I am
A strong individual who just can’t give a damn

But I can, coz there’s a heart in this chest
And now I understand that I’m just taking a test

A Love To Die For

When I was with you I thought life wasn't so bad
The pain that I feel makes me so incredibly mad
I think of all the pain I just cant bear
You never loved me, you don't even care
I'm sad all the time now, all I do is cry
I don't want to be here, I might as well die

I know you wont be back, I know that we are through
I would give my life for you, and that's exactly what I'll do
I never realized how much Love could hurt
You made me feel like scum, you made me feel like dirt

What I would do for just one more kiss
You are the one that I will always miss
But you disobeyed my trust, couldn't tell em the truth
You took away my life, you destroyed my youth

You said you'd never leave me, you said you'll always stay
My world feels so lifeless, everything seems gray
You told me you loved me, this just cant be
I'd give it all for you, why cant you see?

I go to the kitchen and pick up a knife
And now for you I'll attempt to take my own life
I drag the blade across my arm
Everyone thought I could do no harm

The blood from my body begins to seep
I look into my wound and see that it's deep
I want you to know dear, my heart you'll always keep

Here on the floor a tear falls from my eyes
I just couldn't handle it, not all the lies
You shattered my heart, something you cannot mend
you said we'd never be apart, "together to the end"

Well baby the end is near
I see the light and I have nothing to fear
The floor's covered with blood now, soon I'll be leaving
Don't worry about me, I hope you're not grieving
I know you'll get over it, you'll find someone new
But never forget, I Will Always Love You

I'd Give It All


You told me you loved me, but is it true?
My heart skips beats, I'm dying for you

Sometimes you held me in your arms and made me feel so great
I thought to be with you would always be my fate
But other times you treated me like you just didn't care
I'd go home and think of things that I could no longer bear

I'm writing this to tell you, I know I did you wrong
I fucked around and played my games for entirely too long
But I also know I Love you, and this wasn't all because of me
I have needs and feelings that you could never see
I want to know you appreciate me, and you don't care what people say
I need to know you'll Love me each and every day
If we try again, I cant give you any guarantees
But I can tell you that my Love for you will never ever seize

Sometimes I wish I could just take everything back
That I could give to you all the things you seem to think I lack

You say this is hard for you, but how do you think I feel?
I'm losing much more than just a boyfriend out of this deal
There's no one I can turn to, there's nowhere I can go
I hold this all inside of me for no one else to know
They don't understand the way I feel for you
They think I'm just too young, they don't have a clue
They tell me you aren't worth it, that this is all your loss
Everything is gone, and it only took one toss

I cant sleep a wink, and I cant eat a bite
I think of you all day, I cry for you all night
I pray to GOD that you'll come back and tell me that you Love me
You'll hold me in your arms and see we were meant to be
I know that we are young, and you want to have your fun
But without you baby my whole life is done

All I ever wanted was to be a part of your heart
And for us to be together, to never be apart
We had so much more than I ever thought we would
I Love you even more than I ever thought I could

I'll promise to give you all I have to give
I'll do anything for you for as long as I shall live
I miss your Love, I miss your reassuring clutch
I miss your sweet lips and the way we used to touch
I'm refusing to accept it, I know we can't be done
If a million tears wont bring you back, I'll cry a million and one
Please look into my heart, you'll find a Love that is so true
And please read my lips when I tell you, I'd give it all to you

My Pain?


I can't deal with this shit any longer
This hatred for life just keeps growing stronger
I try to bury it deep inside
I say nothing of the feelings that I always try to hide
I need a way out of this fucking hellhole
I lock myself in my room and smoke another bowl
My escape from reality is only temporary
But then it all flows back as I grow wary
No one can imagine the extent of my pain
Outside of this depression I have nothing to remain
People see me as just a pretty face in the crowd
You don't see what's inside of me, of everything I've vowed
Sometimes I just want to run away and hide
I have nothing left, I don't even have my pride
The ache, the tears, the fears, the falls,
Yet I still go on, through it all
The broken hearts, the lying friends
So much pain that never ends
I think of this night after night
and pray that things will someday be right

MY life is like a dozen sad stories, a novel
Hurt So many times i drank a dozen forties, and kill a bottle
I try to hide my facts
but i got my best friends stabbin me in my back
All over a sack
why does this shit go my way
why cant i just chill and smoke my hay
why cant i just trust some one
why are my drugs illegal
wheres my gun
who are my friends
do i even have someone to try to believe in
I thought this was America People
this is a discrace
Elaina when i see you im kickin in your face
Gienpetrhoe

bush u sent soo many troops to iraq/led an act/yet the u.s. is still under attack/u know its a fact/lets send u to iraq/with a gun/hope u have fun/dont try n run/cause as we know it this fuckin war aint done/im tellin u son/u gotta try harder n do what u gotta do/cause i can say ppl are startin to doubt you/i might only be one voice/although i too also have a choice/cause i feel like i wont see any sign of rejoice/damn in a way u treatin da soldiers like toys.......

roses are red, violets are blue..lol

roses are red and vialences is red too lol

Wow I forgot how fun roses are red were.
Roses are red violets are blue,
fuck all the four play I came to screw,
babe dont make me get violent
beat it up red and blue like a violet
between the sheets cause a riot
your like a plain and im a piolet i can fly it
i can ride it get inside it
dont try to fight it if you want to bite it
this that hardcore real love
you can not buy it
roses are red violets are blue
I wanna screw and i know you wanna too
back in action just to see your reaction
+ i get a little off by just the face from your reaction
your fire like a box of chocolate lucky charms
im spreadin like wide open arms
fuckin like chickens in a barn
behind closed doors
cloths come off and somehow
virgins turn into whores
open like some broken pores
let me be your oil of olay
what ever you want ill say ok
roses are red and violets are blue
now rise like the sun
so i can show you
exactly how this flower blooms
damn

yo mentol keep it up guy i know talent when i c it and u got sum but yo ur all doin good alryt yo i fuking would die 4 g unit or em man they awesome anywayz keep it up peeps.

look upon it with a steadfast eye
where I had been and why
striving triumphantly with
heaven, nothing more
something lesser men deplore
the wall of this gaudy, blood-drenched tower
crumbles beneath me like flour >:/

yo im a wigger,
got my finger on the trigger,
got to kill a couple cops
and get my reputation bigger.

A yo what about Poetry Corner .......... datz not up nomoe????

im new to this site..im new but tight..i got talent..but its all good..cause im ready to fight..making movies its what i do..killing christians like lupe..put in you..something thats crazier than jews.im done..its time to fuck with this groupie..three positions on her ass while i make my movies..peace :cool:

Lyfe

U wuz takein away B 4 U had a chance 2 live, a miscarriage wuz da pain God chose 2 give/ mi mind iz blank & I wonder Y he did, its lyke a prank & Y it gotta B mi kid/ how kan I look 4ward 2 a 2morrow, if day in & day out I got dis sorrow/ its lyke sum 1 elses lyfe I jus wanna borrow, 2 get dis pain outta mi chest/ & relieve mi stress, everyday I get put 2 da test/ but I jus continue 2 prey 4 da best, & continue 2 hold mi head up in dis lyfe/ even no im fed up & dere aint no sign of a turn around, everythang I get, gets burned down/ so much bad luck its gotta pay off, & in return get sum good or maybe not/ but lyfe iz wat U make it, & sum tymes it kums along wit pain & U jus gotta take it/ even wen U thank da solution iz 2 go across ur wrist wit a knife, its not jus stick it out its all part of lyfe

Moved to poetry corner, because there are some pretty amazing poems in here...and Alex's is my favorite (not just cause he's my b/f neither)

just some random shit off the top of my head

Emotions flowin smooth like a rivers stream, sight of her beauty appears every time he has a dream, as he lays his head down, he lays down his soul, and he only wishes he could only take out his heart, and give it to her whole, but lust makes visions of love delirious, as serious as you may think it be, one day lust will be pushed away by love for all to see, the long lost emotion never appears today, drunken romps and one night stands take place just so people can say, that they have done this and that, that and this, but what really is a drunken kiss? its not a symbol of love, its not a symbol of emotion, nor is it a symbol of your loving devotion, its a mere bragging right, a mere boost to your ego, in you priorities, its apparent love is below, what you wish to achieve, what you wish to have, and for you my friend I feel sad, as love is true, and love is pure, as love today is the cure, to our problems in life, to our problems at home, to our problems that come to us anywhere we roam, open up your heart and close face, lust over love is a fuckin disgrace

drop your poems here.. since we have no poem forum..i might as well make one..

give feedback on here.. see what other have to offer..




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**no rap allowed on this thread**

does this mean that rap is not a poetry?

My Friend Tarn wrote this........

Poetry nice
Flowing spice
Feelings known
More seeds sown
Heartfelt message
To give to all
Open to everything
Opportunites Tall
Fulfilment in Essense
To carry us through
The highest of love
For me and for you
Our hearts our home
Our minds to see
Emotions to Feel
Our own reality
Gee

I want to continue
This written rhyme
And just give some more love
With this knowledge of mine
Thats Heaven and Earth
People and Animals
Dimensional One
sparkling Sun
Appreciation at it's Best
Blessings come
I'm done

And this little one

In Love

Time consuming
Overpowering
Total distraction
Human Attraction

die die die die die.

-x-