Part 1:


hope yall know who up on da mic/
Da coldest nigga to mix some damn Gen with his Sprite/
I dont need no hoe to tell me how to flow/
When da bitch makin money by workin at a convened stoe/
Im not from Houston but I still can make you hop/
Im do coldest nigga to make everybody da damn body rock/
Dey call me co co cuz im smooth like butter/
Bitches alwayz talkin down but them boyz gone stutta/
Im da #1 stunna straight out da South/
And you dont want me to put my dick in yo mouth/
Chopper be hot like a damn BBQ pit/
And if you flow with me you might as well quit/
Cuz Im alwayz da shit and it's gone stay dat way/
From da Month of June to da Month of May/
I ride on 20's cuz im throwed like dat/
I like cheese so I guess im a damn rat/
But I aint gone get trapped/
Like I said before when if you talk bad on my click you gone get capped/
We ride to da Kappa on some big Chrome sliderz/
My boyz like to ride so you can call dem Riderz/
It aint easy being me cuz im a throwed ass pimp/
While yall boyz some punk ass whimps
i got the stop sign confused cause my rims dont stop//
to much ice on my neck so my glands freeze when i talk//
nokia phone with pop up screen//
breathe always clean with lean mixed with listerine//
im on the scene got cops watching my move//
girls wanting my jewels say that im cruel//
like tim allen using my tools, mad cause i got them more wetter than the pool//
im a fool, one of potential knowledge//
i got a degree and i aint even been to college//

hataz get demolished when they dont heed the warning//
didnt know i had more heat than alonzo mournen//
chain bright like morning with more chips than bingo//
roll down the window money packed like casino's//
more attraction than ringo's, they like potential
put away the chain there's another rainbow//
i got too much green, like a nigga wit rotten teeth/
catch me in sumthin big bodied every day of the week/
i teach the weak,that it's better for the piece to speak/
than be caught in the street, head down without a heat/
u can call me a geek, but i bet you will learn ya lesson/
brang it on my dawg without that murda weapon/
these haters like a stop watch,they stop,pause and watch,
when we crawl in drops dat look like we lost the top//
its cost alot-is dat while yall hoez follow the drop?,
or cause ya saw my trunk open up and swallow ya block?//
wrist got so much snow they nicknamed me Aspen,
im like heroin-hoez get a-dick-ted then they start relapsin//
When I beat down tha block you betta move out the way/
I'm livin laid and gettin paid even though it's not payday
I got mo ice around my neck then hail that drop from the sky
everytime you see me you say damn that boy stay high
I Got Ice Like An Icecycle, Or Even A Snowball
My Rims Do A Fast Spin, Or Maybe A Slow Crawl
Mad Cus I Wreck Swiftly, And Y'all Blow Balls
I'm Throwed Y'all, Like A Pass From Jo Montana
With More Toys Then Santa, Swangin Through Indiana
Ballin Like Tha Pacers, And Eliminatin All Hators
Built A Three Story House, Equipped Wit Escalators
Big Navigators Sittin On Twenty Two Inches
Got More Green Then 20 Shreks, And 50 Grinches
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Part 2:

Color Changin Like A Mood Ring
Wit Mo Green Than Swampthing
Make Registers Go Ching, Ching
And My Charms Go Bling, Bling
This Disaster That I'll Bring
Mean Like Pink On A Mood Swing
If I'm Gunna Jack Sum Green
Den My Face Is Painted Like Sting
Candy Drippin Wetta Then Crisco
Trunk Pop And Do Tha Disco
Shot, But Ya Missed Though
Wit Shane O'Mac And Gerald Brisco
Hit Tha Club Wit Cindy Crawford
Shakin Her Ass In Them Dockers
Mo Digits Den A Hall Fulla Lockers
Wit Sexxy Italians In Silk Boxers
Ain't Got My Money, I'll Choke Her
Need Mo Cash Den A Stock Brocher
Tight Like Wranglers On A Roper
I'm Da Ace, Highest Card In Poker
Have No Fear Of Facing Defeat
Chopper Lacin Yaeyo Off In Tha Sweet
I Gotta Iced Crushed Piece
Like I Put It Under Dumbo's Feet
Ya Wig, I'll Soon Split That
Ya Gal's pussy, I'll Hit That
I Advise That You Get Back
Break Boys Like A Kit-Kat
Smoked A Sweet Durin My Delivery
Now I'm Pushin A Black Bentley
Get Head From Either Mindy Or Cindy
Sittin Mo Swole Then Mark Henry
Playin These Hoes Like Pictionary
Got My Wurds Then A Dictionary
Mo Fly Then Tha Tooth Fairy
Her Tongue Tie A Knot In A Cherry
She Also Swallow And Slurp
Smells Like Dick When She Burp
Ya Fake Like Artificial Turf
Shootin Boys Like Wyatt Eurp
its tha boy fom made man
sprayin haters wit hater raid
bitch im the frestyle ace
fucka dictonary i freestyle and niggaz brains bust over the place
turn heads ina jag when im talkin down on gentry
girls see me an the always tryin to get me
more hoes tha cosmotalogy
my trunk look like a light show of astrology
i go off my dome so i dont need to write
my style so hard its liek graphite
turn down an make yo girl look twice
i got my name on a blimp an i be rolin liek some dice
nigga i aint nothin nice im tha throwdest to ever reck it
niggas be hatin so i gots they girls naked
i out rap none rappin rappers ride wit 4 screens an adapters
the only nigga out hre thats rollin lacs an platinum trackters
u want to go head to head i make yo mama want to flow
i gots an lexus a jag an a stretch tahoe
an i dotn need to get on stage an rap at the apollo
but i get onstage an when i reck niggas and get aplaused yo
its BC from texas born an raised
gots more frestyles than a show wit super dave
am im stil playa made im a ceo baby
i got a shd for slappin hoes daliy
i aitn bitting a hoe im the freestyle ace
but i got my own style an im the original free style ace
nigga i go hard like im shaq
an i make yo girl bouce her ass back
cuss she cant get plesure from you so she went to tha best
i make nigga sick cuz my ass is set to digest
i can go al day long if i wanted to make a statment
going one on one wit me i have u lying on the pavment
i go hard like some old hard cookies
in this rap game al yal soem rookies
yo girl saw my car she liek i wanna take a lookie
then she didnt go to schol she was at my house she played hookie
i dont have to use big words to get my mesage heard
yo freestyles are garbage its all absurd
i gots one more thing to say im on from mmr click
pimp out freestyles coming u better go get it

it was goood... long as fuck tho... took me like half an hour 2 read it..

im not feelin your style but i could hense sum ill activity goin down in your rhyme....

thats all i have, tha only thing wrong was tha lack of multiples syllables

I got through about half of it, way too long for text. and yea it could have used some Multiples in there but its good in that way.



"took me like half an hour 2 read it"

ahahaha, you freakin retard

the first one was okay,..kinda long,..sope rhyming schem nice usge of word's and metas...

the second one i didnt feel at all,..kinda bling bling shit tht drew me off,..o-well

like tek said,..use multies and shit iight peace