havent done it in a while

back again, time to unrust the rusted/
your girl trusted me to hold it but yo i busted/
im whack as can be, unbeliveable like greek mythology/
dress up like a freak everyday, fuck hallowen/
i rap on pills and dont pay half the bills/
everyday in the neighboprhood a kats been killed/
hat trick still, time to improve, gotta gotta groove/
and soothe whoever boobs with glue start from the tube/
no point to this rhyme, but smoke a joint to this rhyme/
be smiling goin wild and and have police files filed/
my rhymes stick in your head, like a suiciadal mans knife/
im homicidal and white, ill tie your hands tight/
to the bumper of a car, drivin to the graveyard/
no matter how many softgels i drop, ima alaways stay hard/

well not as whack as i thought but ill get back in the groove
pz

not bad... coulda used less random
im not a fan of your style.. but tha rhymes were nice and you had a nice direction of tha multiple
you know what 2 do
1

welcum back

dope, btter then what i can bring to the tale after a while abcents in rhyming,..nice flow, good schem, nice style...good sturcture,..dope piece,.welcome back

not too bad, i do like to see the multies tho

thanx u 3 ill be back to myself before we know it

uppin for any last co0mments if not o well this jiust a 10 minute keystyle to help me get back into it

Not feelin this
u needa improve

check out my Shit feat My Older Brothers Dre La Quik and Lil Youngsta called"Half Steppin"