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Ghetto Ninja
06-11-2003, 11:55 PM
->5 bar minimum(10lines)-15 bars(30lines) *quality OVER quantity!
-Votes MUST be explained in order to count
-NO DICKRIDIN/CREW/BEEF votes allowed (Me Or Mentol will know when this happens)
-The emcee with who get's 5 votes first WINS
-OR, if one emcee get's 3 votes in a row, then it's a TKO meaning somebody got KNOCKED THE FUCK OUT!! (KO'S will be recorded)
-The voting is eleigable to any1 with over 25 posts or in tha tournament or not as long its explained-
-aswell, no creating new sn's to vote fer urself that will cause immediate loss, an i will do what i can to get u banned

Check In By Friday 13th, Verses due by sunday the 15th @ 11:59 pm (eastern)

Acclaimed
06-12-2003, 12:57 PM
checking in.

Floetry
06-14-2003, 01:34 AM
im checking-in Haydude he'll post a verse by sunday...

haydude
06-15-2003, 12:57 AM
drppassed-by-me in the first round of this-tourney/
true story, bitch'll show u when he posts the worst sound in history/
stoppin his-journey, cuz i'm poppin this bitch early like a new pimple/
its simple to see he's left dismal - my punches leavin indents on your face like a few dimples/
my lines got this chimp-full, cuz i made like a banana and split him half whole/
he's a laugh show when he's on full, so now how will he flow? do the math-bro/
fuck it...i'll kill faggots for fun/
i'm so above this punk, i'm shining down on him like theSUN/
oblivion thinks i got experience on my side, when all's i need is my two fists/
you cant rap bitch like you were spittin on the mic with two lisps/
u should sue-bitch, cuz ur the victim after taken this beating/
some things are too good to be true like you winnin is cheating/
i already cut u in half, so after your last leg(verse) its-only-"defeat"/
havent battled in a while, but u just reminded me why victory's so sweet//

pea[e

Acclaimed
06-16-2003, 01:30 PM
droppin, board was down last night, sorry for lateness...here goes..

Your verse was "yellow"(weak) that's why they named you "hay"/
I've "molded" a new style that's why they call me "clay"/
I "grassed" on your "green" demeanor so your "envious" of mine/(grass~hay)
This boy's bent, with a ruler couldn't draw a staight line/
Debate time, why is this dude the worst?
thinks it's cool to not reimburse the boy who wrote his verse/
A "killer's" instinct is somethig that you lack/
My rhymes are like "dead"-a-nation(detanation)-an "explosive" attack/
You Argon(are-gone), that's how you chose to "react"*
and so you relegate, minus figures yor level be at/
Me losing to you is like so nar(Nah)ly dude/
I'll be eating you like the horses do/(hay)
i be squeezing triggers like your corsets do/
"Scary" bender dressed up for his boyfriend "boo"/
i pack heat that's why you threw away your hot water bottle/
your verse failed to move me regardless of your full throttle/

*argon doesn't react with any substance.

Floetry
06-16-2003, 01:39 PM
Good battle....

Razzda P:

You Argon(are-gone), that's how you chose to "react"*
...Thanks for explaining Argon...tight line

Your verse was "yellow"(weak) that's why they named you "hay"/
I've "molded" a new style that's why they call me "clay"/
....ok start...but should we call you "CLAY" now?...wack line

I "grassed" on your "green" demeanor so your "envious" of mine
...decent line...

I thought the flow was so-so....


Haydude:

razzdaP just got passed-by-me in the first round of this-tourney/
true story, bitch'll show u when he posts the worst sound in history/
....text has sound?...good first line though

should sue-bitch, cuz ur the victim after taken this beating/
some things are too good to be true like you winnin is cheating/
i already cut u in half, so after your last leg(verse) its-only-"defeat"/
havent battled in a while, but u just reminded me why victory's so sweet//
....this is good....the 'last leg' line was real tight....


Flow: Tied (both were just OK)
Punches: Raz
Creativity: Haydude
Overall: Hay

Vote: Hay....but only by a tiny bit...nice drop Razzda that was the best ive seen of ya....Hay that last-leg/defeat line was fucking ill...it won you this battle....peace

and go vote on Flo vs. Mentol...thanks

Acclaimed
06-16-2003, 01:45 PM
don't have to call me clay, just made it up, don't have to take it literally, e.g haydude is not a peice of hay.

thanks for the feedback anyway floe.

haydude
06-17-2003, 01:34 AM
uppin...

Bernard
06-17-2003, 02:14 AM
Yea, this was a pretty close battle. Some of Razzda's stuff fell flat, like that "Argon" thing, even after I understood it, it didn't quite work right. It could have been worked in better. Haydude wasn't that much better, but his stuff worked more consitently. More importantly, it had a few nice lines...

"i'm so above this punk, i'm shining down on him like theSUN/" (nice)

"some things are too good to be true like you winnin is cheating/" (the Illest line in this battle)

keep elevating

vote - Haydude

MCD
06-17-2003, 07:38 AM
sorry to finish this battle off but haydude got it...just about..
i've seen him come tonnes iller than this..but i was very impressed by Razzda's attempt.

its simple to see he's left dismal - my punches leavin indents on your face like a few dimples/
my lines got this chimp-full, cuz i made like a banana and split him half whole/

the concept was there...had MORE potential though...it was still pretty nice..

This boy's bent, with a ruler couldn't draw a staight line/

that was funny...but not a very strong diss to Haydude..

err...so final categories...

Flow: Hay
Punches: Raz
Creativity: Haydude
Overall: haydude...

vote - Haydude....

Acclaimed
06-17-2003, 11:01 AM
nice drop haydude- good luck in th later stages.
I'll be in the next tourny, and try not to get knocked out in the 1st.

L8

Ghetto Ninja
06-17-2003, 04:35 PM
haydude wins via KO an moves on...