->5 bar minimum(10lines)-15 bars(30lines) *quality OVER quantity!
-Votes MUST be explained in order to count
-NO DICKRIDIN/CREW/BEEF votes allowed (Me Or Mentol will know when this happens)
-The emcee with who get's 5 votes first WINS
-OR, if one emcee get's 3 votes in a row, then it's a TKO meaning somebody got KNOCKED THE FUCK OUT!! (KO'S will be recorded)
-The voting is eleigable to any1 with over 25 posts or in tha tournament or not as long its explained-
-aswell, no creating new sn's to vote fer urself that will cause immediate loss, an i will do what i can to get u banned

Check In By Friday 13th, Verses due by sunday the 15th @ 11:59 pm (eastern)

checking in like an imate

i'll check-in like at a classy hotel...hey punk will you park my car please?...and dont steal my change from the ashtray!

ok here it is....


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bitch is bawlin' (ballin') even though he can't even palm-the-ball/
fuck, he'd only be 'off the hook' if his phone fell from-the-wall/
his spits will be 'pick-up' lines cuz my verse has his ass floored/
This Mod claims to be (h)Elm but is lacking-roots in this rap board/
Im losing my patience (patients) faster than a SARS infected doctor/
This bitch was cocky until I pulled out my piece and cocked-her/
Your spits leave semen(seamen) on your lips like you ate some crews/(cruise)
I called for -Guerilla- warfare and you hold that banana all confused/ (gorilla warfare...ha)
All night I torture you on the brink of death until you beg for morning/ (mourning)
My punches strike like a hurricane and come at you without fair warning/
Im the prince of this throne and I'll leave no prints when you get thrown/
Yur sheepish ways make it impossible to match my verse even if I had a clone/
We've come to our census(senses) and your the awed (odd) man out in this battle/
Your verse is elementary---Even Cook thinks we should grab this baby his rattle/
My wordplay twists you up and trips you up faster than having your shoes undone
You can post your desperate chants* for help but you'll only be left without one/ (*a chance)

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the only time i'm feeling a 'floe' is when taking a 'piss',
this nigga doesnt 'throw-punches' just 'recives-them'/
than get's 'herbed-out' quicker than 'pot-smokers-conventions',
leave you breathless with-out lungs to inhale with/
go ahead an try to flip on my name but it's a sin,
when the truth is your 'mentol' thinking you'll win/
i'm only feeling your pain because i'm killing you,
this battle is boring, cuz to win there's nothing you can do/
a 'dam' is not the only thing to stop a 'floe',
i'm in your way, so you say ''DAM(n) that mentol''/
you 'try-to-flow' like reversing yo' name and switching the E,
thinking floe is 'dope' but he really is 'green tea'/
floetry is always a 'loser' cuz he keeps the 'L' an no 'W',
imma make you 'flow' by killing you an throwing the body into a river pool/
i aint saying that your not popular, you got 'dick ryders',
but it's sad they all love to 'stick it in' an make ya voice higher/
so get on your knees an bite the pillow,
cause you taken it up the ass an left your rectum scorn/
floe will never see 'green' just 'dirt covering' you,
too bad i seen a better 'flow' when 'babies-drools'/

ahhh fuck it.. whos my next oppnet??

ehhhh wasnt exactly feelin either verse, but then again why would mentol waste a good verse, anyway

Flw:helm
punches:helm
pretty much every category:helm

vote- mentol

Mentol exp down there.

vote=floetry

i was feelin floe's verse at the beginning but not as much towards the end and i didnt feel mentols at all really.this seemed kind of equal...but my votes with floetry.

creativity=~tie~
punchs=~tie~ (?*)
flow=floetry
vote=floetry


these spits were both ok but i expected you two to do better ,not saying that your a let down or anything..Peace

Floe:

fuck, he'd only be 'off the hook' if his phone fell from-the-wall/
his spits will be 'pick-up' lines cuz my verse has his ass floored/

I called for -Guerilla- warfare and you hold that banana all confused/

^lines were good

Didn't get lines:
Your spits leave semen(seamen) on your lips like you ate some crews/(cruise)

All night I torture you on the brink of death until you beg for morning/ (mourning)
^^hardly a punch now, a person begging to mourn?

We've come to our census(senses) and your the awed (odd) man out in this battle/


Basically good start but whack ending.


Mentol:
All your lines were good
best?
a 'dam' is not the only thing to stop a 'floe',
i'm in your way, so you say ''DAM(n) that mentol''/

Didn't get lines:
floetry is always a 'loser' cuz he keeps the 'L' an no 'W',
floe will never see 'green' just 'dirt covering' you,

Eeverything was good for you Mentol..
Flow:same
Punches:mentol
Wordplay: Same

VOTE:MENTOL

I had to review this shit cuz i just quickly read it, I hate goin back on my word, sorry.

yo Raz...those lines were really dope that you didnt get....

seamen on a cruise...and semen from sucking cocks of crews...see hot it works...its a damn good punch...

beg for mourning means begging for death...and the play with night/morning

the other one was good too...so edit your vote again now that you know I won this battle.

I got that sucking crews dicks, but the fact you put seamen and cruise, it's not really a punch, he spits seamen? coz he ate a cruise ship?

mourning is when someone dies or something happens and you cry and sob over it, correct?

other: awed man? census and senses sound differently-peace.

Originally posted by Razzda P


Didn't get lines:

floetry is always a 'loser' cuz he keeps the 'L' an no 'W',
floe will never see 'green' just 'dirt covering' you,


iight let me explain it a lil

FLOETRY - name
FLOWETRY - way to spell it

ight he kept the L - Lose
an has no W - Win

Green is consider - money.... in this case i'ma saying he'll never see money (or above ground) hence why i said he'llbe seeing dirt
(underground)

ah well uppin 2-1

OMG Vote OR Die....

first i dont think razzda's vote should count,
cuz he changed some shit afterwards, so he's
prob dick rydin hard...no count

but im'a brake it down fairly right now:

flo - "bitch is bawlin' (ballin') even though he can't even palm-the-ball/"

-^kinda weak, kinda rhymes well with next...
"fuck, he'd only be 'off the hook' if his phone fell from-the-wall/"

-^good wordplay, but could have been done better...punch 1

"his spits will be 'pick-up' lines cuz my verse has his ass floored/2 This Mod claims to be (h)Elm but is lacking-roots in this rap board/"3
-^weak punch start, but nice personal on the second one
and a punch...not bad

"Im losing my patience (patients) faster than a SARS infected doctor/
This bitch was cocky until I pulled out my piece and cocked-her/4

-^first is too weak to be a punch...very basic
liked how the next one flowed - hit nice, punch

"Your spits leave semen(seamen) on your lips like you ate some crews/(cruise)
I called for -Guerilla- warfare and you hold that banana all confused/ (gorilla warfare...ha)
All night I torture you on the brink of death until you beg for morning/ (mourning)
My punches strike like a hurricane and come at you without fair warning/"5

-kinda ^weak lines...basic wordplay, just didnt hit,
but the last was aight...flowed well, punch

"Im the prince of this throne and I'll leave no prints when you get thrown/"6

-liked^how this flowed, good rhyme, nice punch, plus...

"Yur sheepish ways make it impossible to match my verse even if I had a clone/"7

^nice line, ok wordplay, funny and hit...

"We've come to our census(senses) and your the awed (odd) man out in this battle/
Your verse is elementary---Even Cook thinks we should grab this baby his rattle/"

-first^ is the worst like ever - helped out mentol...boo
-second is weak attempt at personal, no flo, hehehe...no punch

"My wordplay twists you up and trips you up faster than having your shoes undone"8

-^nice line, liked it, went well and sick enough line to count...

"You can post your desperate chants* for help but you'll only be left without one/ (*a chance)"

-^played...plus weak...
overall nice performance....

mentol - "the only time i'm feeling a 'floe' is when taking a 'piss',1

-nice flip on name, good start, funny,....punch

"this nigga doesnt 'throw-punches' just 'recives-them'/2
than get's 'herbed-out' quicker than 'pot-smokers-conventions',
leave you breathless with-out lungs to inhale with/"

-^man, u lose alot of points for not knowin how to rhyme,
i can never understand when u're tryin to rhyme and where
shit ends....poor on flow, but first ones a nice punch....

"go ahead an try to flip on my name but it's a sin,
when the truth is your 'mentol' thinking you'll win/"3

-^hehehe...great line, nice rhyme....sick punch, funny, but prob played?

"i'm only feeling your pain because i'm killing you,
this battle is boring, cuz to win there's nothing you can do/"4

-dont like the fi^rst, cant count...
but second is kinda funny and hits nicely, plus rhymes

"a 'dam' is not the only thing to stop a 'floe',
i'm in your way, so you say ''DAM(n) that mentol''/

-nice ^line...clever wordplay...together they're a punch, so 5...
ill thinkin though...rhyme was...ah...c^

"you 'try-to-flow' like reversing yo' name and switching the E,
thinking floe is 'dope' but he really is 'green tea'/
floetry is always a 'loser' cuz he keeps the 'L' an no 'W',
imma make you 'flow' by killing you an throwing the body into a river pool/"6

-really is grean tea? really? -i dunno guy...no hits, missin...
-kinda like his name, didnt understand wordplay at first either,
but second was aight...u like to kill, ill...tight line

"i aint saying that your not popular, you got 'dick ryders',
but it's sad they all love to 'stick it in' an make ya voice higher/"7

-funny shit...first is nice line, but seconds hits him hard.nice^

"so get on your knees an bite the pillow,
cause you taken it up the ass an left your rectum scorn/
floe will never see 'green' just 'dirt covering' you,
too bad i seen a better 'flow' when 'babies-drools'/"8

-heres^ the off rhymin again...no punch at first.
but i like the ending, last line was funny and hit...

-overall, funny, kinda clever, hurtin on flow...little bit better punches...

punches - tied^, maybe a little on mentol
flow - flo...
creativity - pretty close i think mentol...
wordplay - flo's
multies - i forgot to count multies, so i reread the verses...
think flo took it, more and some iller ones...


so...there ya go^

vote - flo

pea[e...

don't count my vote, wasn't dickryding tho....when do i get my money mentol?

ok so its 2-1 for me....uppin' ....

ummm nah it's 2-2

2-2.... VOTE OR DIE

vote - Floetry..

why? cuz he elevated on this one and Mentol lowered his level of skill(probably thinking it was gonna be an easy win)

I was suprised by Floetry's verse cuz i thought he raised his game to a whole new level.


Im the prince of this throne and I'll leave no prints when you get thrown/
Yur sheepish ways make it impossible to match my verse even if I had a clone

this was nice..."sheepish"(Dolly the sheep) and "clone"..get it??..it was a nice line..


the only time i'm feeling a 'floe' is when taking a 'piss',

that just wasn't original...

Mentol..what happened?? never underestimate your opponent..i've seen you come WAY Iller than this...you let yourself down here..

creativity= Floetry
punches= Floetry
flow= Mentol
vote= Floetry

pz..

Mentol's verse did seem kind of sleepy, my first impression was that Foetry had this. Then I reread Mentol's verse and saw some nice word play. The whole name stuff (Mentol) seemed a little corny, although Floetry's word play seemed less effective. Then again, I didn't get that clone thing. More importantly, Floetry was more consitent he didn't get corny. Good work Floetry.

flow - Mentol (definately)
creativity - Floetry (definately)
punches - Floetry (by a little)
vote - Floetry

ok 4-2 for me....uppin'

a sheep became famous because it was cloned, the animal in the world to be cloned, i think.

Yea, I understand it now "Dolly", I overlooked it at first though.

i just think a battle shoudn't be voted according to elevation

i just think it should continued to be voted on....

4-2 Floetry....

regardless of elevation...i still think i had a better verse Raz....

as much as you love to revel in ur self-evaluation, it's votes from other ppl that count, so come one!

true^...so lets get some more votes

Originally posted by Razzda P
i just think a battle shoudn't be voted according to elevation
Mentol didn't elevate. Floetry certainly did.

(mentol took it easy on floe)

I'm not sure if I'm able to vote, but eh, whatever. If it don't count, I hope yall will at least lsiten to what I have to say.

This cat Zen sent me a personal message, asking me some tips on battling and shit, so I hit him back up with some pointers. Those pointers were Ballance, Organization, and Originality. Floetry had all of that.
Floetry: He ballanced out all angles to attack his oponent. His shit was well organized, mixing the lines that were "funny" in with the lines that were just plain "illness." And talk about Originality!
Your spits leave semen(seamen) on your lips like you ate some crews/(cruise)
I called for -Guerilla- warfare and you hold that banana all confused/ (gorilla warfare...ha)
^^^ Just plain tight, and funny. Original.

Now Mental... Man, you shit was kinda cliche. I mean, I know you my dog and all, but I gotta be honest. It looks like a 12 year old wrote your shit. For example...
"so get on your knees an bite the pillow,
cause you taken it up the ass an left your rectum scorn"/
That don't even rhyme. You should practice making more sylables rhyme in a pattern.

Vote: Floetry. And yall a damn fool if ya don't think so.

Mentol you can say whatever you want...5-2 win for me...

exactly^....

lets get on with the next round already...

uppin

Floetry wins 5-2.... an moves on...