View Full Version : [Semi's] Razzda P VS. Punk
Ghetto Ninja 05-12-2003, 01:12 AM 1. 4 Bar(8 Lines) Min, 12 Bar(24 Lines) Max
2. No Herb, D/R, Hate, Gay Votes
3. Use Proper Voting Criteria
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5. TKO=3-0 , First Person to 5 Votes Wins...
6. This Verse is Due Soon as You Get IT Done..Do Not Ask Who Goes FIRST.
Must Check In BY Wednesday @ 11:59pm(Eastern)
AND The Deadline FOr Verses Is Friday @ 11:59pm
7. Good Luck....Do Your Best..This is to elevate.....
Acclaimed 05-12-2003, 02:25 PM checkin in
checkin in. I'll have my verse by tomorrow.
Peace!
Thanx MCD. but he's the one that needs it cuz heres my drop. Had it set scnece monday but got suspended form school for a couple days....well yeah here it is.
Yo this shits "comin for ya" man you gotta go, cuz Im "runnin for ya" ready to knock you out with this flow/
Get yourself "figured out" before you start against me, remove your hand form your ass from gettin "fingered out" then jus choke B/
man your still "new to this game" and your givin me a migrane, <bitch better run!> cuz I
"flew pass this shame" <whats my name?> and started off sane/
now my minds in a haze, which mean s these binds are about to blaze/
Bringin' my "fist to your face" and watch you crumble-ova, yeah I "dissed to your face" Im not goin to stumble-ova/
Your jus another kid talkin shit and "tryin to strut", you cant even speak when Im around so your "tryin to cut"/
Afraid Im goin to "mangle your body" so harshly, that I wont leave you breathin jus "dangle your body" and take your life parshly/
Your always tryin but bitch you be dien' when my mutha fuckin fist is flyin', now quit cryin' cuz Im the one shinen'/
Always will be and you be the "dirt I walk on", now stop in your footsteps of thinkin cuz its "hurt I talk on"/
Dont diss your reputation by tryin to "take me out", stop your exaduration and quit tryin to "stake me out"/
Now laugh at you and your compromise of drug-atics, cuz blood boils and curtles when I exercise my thug-tactics/
Slittin your throught watchin you make movements to "catch your breath", sittin in drought with no soothments for you jus "match your death"//
Ok your turn to drop Razzda P. Good luck man. Your next MCD lol.
PEACE!
cook x 05-15-2003, 04:03 PM nice verse---- cant wait to see what razzda puts to it
Ghetto Ninja 05-15-2003, 04:39 PM *lmmao i KNOW i'm mod.. BUt that was a WEAK verse... REAL WEAK multi's an flow don't make a verse good especially when the lack punches especially a single one that hits hard
where the fuck is Razzda or whatever..it takes 10 minutes to key up a battle verse...not 3 or 4 days.!!
ObLiViOn 05-16-2003, 11:31 AM hes taking time on it so he has a good chance man
PZ>
Bernard 05-16-2003, 11:39 AM That's why these battles suck. People who draw this out as long as they possibly can. Then all the suspense ends with disappointment. I guess there's not too much we can do about that though.
HypeMyk 05-16-2003, 11:43 AM Originally posted by []v[]CD
it takes 10 minutes to key up a battle verse...not 3 or 4 days.!!
not for these battlers, dog
lol I know my verse was weak man jus not tryin on it. My last two were better.{ against sexorcist and haydude verses were better}
I am jus givin this kid a chance let him drop and stop free postin.
Peace!
cook x 05-17-2003, 09:38 AM I SEE RAZZDA DIDNT POST WITHIN THE DEADLINE - PUNK WINS,,,RAZZDA DIDNT CHECKIN BEFORE THE DEADLINE WITH ME BUT FOCUS LET HIM OFF CAUSE HE WAS ONLY 24 HOURS LATE
Acclaimed 05-17-2003, 02:06 PM Hey,that can't be right...Emweb was down last night ans I was gonna drop, not my fault man, so I'm gonna drop now. Please let me stay in it, not my fault as I said.
This is the time when you just about to em"bark" me//
"sniffin arses" to higher yourself in the hierarchy//
"jesus" couldnt "save" you now, I'm the the "messiah" causing anarchy//
You be the type who needs "money", you be applauding a felony//
I can throw out lyrical "spices" from my left and right pockets//
so stop with the faggy frolics and reach for the "lockets"//
but hell, it doesn't matter cuz you couldnt rap anyway//
My rhymes provide bullets so you be gettin capped in a "kenny"-way//
but We all know you still a fan like "stan", rolling your "cart" as if you were a poor "man"//
your punches "missed" me completely, like your "diego forlan"//
So I'm gonna "tear" you into "pieces" like im a "wolf man"//
but reach for the door man cuz i'll fight you like conan//
and i'll pounce on you asif i'm that fat bitch "rosan"//
you were so confident goin into this battle it was unreal//
but with fate on my side the floor is all you'll feel//
when you talk it has no meaning, born in a pool of spiel//
your so hurt by my words, don't expect a fast-heal//
so prepare for the end, this shit is the last-meal//
N.B-Lockets=throast soothing sweet if you hav a sore throat
Diego Forlan=soccer player who misses alot of goal scoring opportunities.
Please keep me in it!!!
horridmeta4 05-17-2003, 02:31 PM well if razz. is still in this, its obvious who won. Im not sayin its awsome but the other cat's verse couldnt phase dr. suess
VOTE:Razz
horridmeta4 05-17-2003, 03:18 PM hey yo, Emweb website wasn't working all day yesterday, you should give this guy a chance, especially since he blew punk outa the water.
snare 05-17-2003, 03:41 PM first of all,
punk nice flow but wheres the punches? in a battle ya gotta punches orv theres no point.
razzda p i didn't know you were so good, plenty of punches and still managed to flow.
VOTE: Razzda P
second point, the site was done last nite, everytime i clicked on the forum it tryed to download it, so i'll vouch for that.
Acclaimed 05-17-2003, 03:43 PM thanks snare, well now you kno, lol.
lol damn I didnt think he was goin to drop that well so I barely put any thought into mine. oh well if I lose I'll still be in the next tourny and show ya how it goes then cuz MCD is goin to tear razzda a new ass hole lmao no beef razzda nice drop.
Peace!
ObLiViOn 05-17-2003, 03:54 PM Yeah, i think Razzda took this....
just generally better - neither was Warbux like lol but few are - but i think Razzda took this with relative ease.
Put more effort in next time Punk!!
I can throw out lyrical "spices" from my left and right pockets//
so stop with the faggy frolics and reach for the "lockets"//
^^ liked that - made me giggle...
So, i vote for Razzda
PZ>
cook x 05-17-2003, 06:00 PM vote=razzda
Do i gotta explain?
His verse knocked punk the fuck out
i think em' web board went down at 9:00 last night cause i was on it till then i think
Acclaimed 05-17-2003, 06:32 PM nah, it was earlier than that I think. I tried gettin on about 8. Any way, i still aint won, I gotta wait for the verdict off Focus.
Prime 05-17-2003, 09:35 PM yea seriosly, i downloaded that shit more than 20 times!
Vote:Razzda
nothing to say really, punk got slayed cuz he prolly didn't think strait thru his stuff.
well done Razzda....and g'luck in the final.
Prime 05-18-2003, 06:25 PM yea good luck ta both of ya
garzac100 05-18-2003, 07:01 PM yo i dont even realy come to this chat so hit me up on biggiesmallsill if i didnt battle you hit me up or e-mail me at biggiesmallsill@aol.com dont be talking shit cuz i'll tare your ass up 1
Prime 05-18-2003, 07:03 PM post that in the lounge, wtf are you saying that here fo?
Ghetto Ninja 05-19-2003, 01:53 PM Razzda P wins an goes on to face []\/[]CD in the final sof this tourney.... |locked|
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