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Ghetto Ninja
05-03-2003, 01:31 AM
First to 5 wins
3-0 Is A Ko
No D/r, Hate, Crew Votes, etc…
(Blind Verses)- No playin/Feeding Off Other Verse
MUST vote on two other battles
8 lines minimum (4 Bars)
24 maximum (12 Bars)

Floetry
05-03-2003, 01:33 PM
check in and im ready to drop ASAP

MCD
05-03-2003, 02:05 PM
signin in...and droppin -

yo - I grasp-flows wit raps-that-smash-skulls-and-trap-foes with -rap-poetry -
til-you-clasp-bones-from-ya-trashed-dome-behold-the-class-about-to-smack-floetry!
haha - Its like gym-socks Floetry cuz you be feelin da-feet(defeat) -
bitch aint got cheddar - just foreskins and peelin-the-cheese -
realin-from-heat like camp-fires cuz i'm so in-tents(intence) -
wanksta-a-bum lost-all-game before MCD drop-his-2-cents -
plain-cruisin - this face-fluent in the rap-game-like-an-ace-in-ya-crew wit a string of wins like the shit you lace-shoes-wit -
i'm the truest - I hit so hard in battles i'll leave you hollowed-and-bruised
If your verse walked-into my-room you couldn't follow-it-through -
Floetry-dude- you just stepped-into-a-warzone -
bitch couldn't spit the explicit-shit if he was reppin-wit-a-porno -
it's-cool-though - cuz like babies-in-blankets - i'll rattle-ya-matress - and slap-myself-stupid cuz I just-battled-a-spastic -
you NAFF-kid - ride off my verse Floetry and you saddling-rage -
I'll put my hands-through ya chest-cavity - and rattle-ya-cage
get-slapped-wit-the-page - Floetry an angel gettin'-fellowed-by-the-Devil
and you can hear me thumpin through the roof bitch - cuz ya- below-my-level

;/

Floetry
05-03-2003, 02:19 PM
yur rhymes of the wack variety are like alcohol in the vein of society/
atleast you'll have no castration anxiety with yur lack of sobriety/
My notoriety will leave you turning tricks for chicks-with-dicks/
my composition leaves you in submission like weed in a brownie-mix/
here's a proposition, don't rap for-commission in yur poor-position/
inhibition in addition to ambition leads to a transition in yur-condition/
a lyrical magician playin' tricks on a wack MC they all call D/
in a violent flash-back, you'll see yur own death and recall me/
All fired up but you won't get hot jumpin' on a firefighters-cock/
and livin' close to Stephen King doesn't justify yur writers-block/
yur imitation of Kobe leads you into too much backdoor penetration/
and the only burning sensation you'll feel is at yur own cremation/
and with no hesitation, MCD will reveal his true orientation/
not shy to incestation, his sis's room is his next destination/
sorry for the confusion, but victory is just an illusion/
so in conclusion, you're so far below me yur in seclusion/
crooked lines ^ fit for a politician, i'll make it clearer/
you'd only be battlin' wack if you rhymed in to a mirror/
I got lines so dope its like they tryin' to stash-crack/
my smash-attack leaves you helpless, here's yur cash-back/
it's from the whore down the street, a refund for yur small-meat/
here's a paper and a pen, now it's time for you scrawl-defeat/

G'luck MCD

ObLiViOn
05-03-2003, 06:32 PM
i know i shouldn't be doing this, and spank me if i'm wrong (please... lol) but just saying this was a really good battle.

If i had to vote for someone it'd be D by a fair smack but i don't think i can/should as me and D are friends and all so it could be contested.

Well done both tho'

PZ>

Floetry
05-03-2003, 07:33 PM
^^mine as well have voted by sayin' that OB

ObLiViOn
05-03-2003, 07:36 PM
yesssssssssss i know that Flo man

But if i did i don't want tha vote to be contested as a "dickryding" vote 'cos D and i are such good friends (he'd tell you he hates me but hes lying ;)) so i don't

Its common man

PZ>

Floetry
05-03-2003, 07:39 PM
yeah but by simply sayin' he won (by a large amount) like you did, people will just go with that...i really don't think he won straight-up like that...

MCD
05-03-2003, 08:18 PM
i do...your verse was mostly non-sensical.

Floetry
05-03-2003, 08:27 PM
which lines exactly?

MCD
05-03-2003, 08:36 PM
aight maybe not sonsensical but far too latinate..

you go up on stage with that shit and you gonna get booe'd off called "point dexter"...lay off the books cuz you cant expect people to understand or relate to that shit..plus when you use big vocab..it suggests forced rhymes.

Floetry
05-04-2003, 01:25 AM
i think it's a damn good verse man

I'm_Pissed
05-04-2003, 04:10 AM
tight battle

flow:mcd
multis:.....hmmm well flo had more, but mcds worked better...but i guess thats flow not multis so ill give it to floetry
wordplay:mcd
punches:mcd.....tho flo had some pretty dope ones too...mcd just had more
creativity:mcd

yo - I grasp-flows wit raps-that-smash-skulls-and-trap-foes with -rap-poetry -
til-you-clasp-bones-from-ya-trashed-dome-behold-the-class-about-to-smack-floetry!

gawd.....fucken ill multis and flow

then after that there was a decent punch in about every line....particulary liked the foreskins line and

get-slapped-wit-the-page - Floetry an angel gettin'-fellowed-by-the-Devil
and you can hear me thumpin through the roof bitch - cuz ya- below-my-level

dope closer

flo,

thisd have ta be the best ive seen from you.....but mcd is right, if ya make your lines too booksmartish not a lot of people will understand them. anyway, nice multis...but there was a lot of filler, just concentrate more on the content of yeh verse and use multis when they fit in with it...not the other way round.

still, ya had some dope punches,

and livin' close to Stephen King doesn't justify yur writers-block/

that was fucking ill man

you'd only be battlin' wack if you rhymed in to a mirror/

and that one....highlight wordplay with ' ' or make it bold or something tho, cuz a lot of people will just read over it and not pick up on it.....especially if its complicated.

so muh votes for mcd

peace, tight battle

MCD
05-04-2003, 05:07 AM
1-0..

Floetry..you gotta be more practical with your vocabulary man..

cook x
05-04-2003, 08:33 PM
flow-MCD
punchs-MCD
multies-Floetry
wordplay-MCD
creativity-MCD
vote-MCD

every single line in MCD's verse was sharp.Floetry--nice verse but MCD flipped you up-side down

vote-MCD

peace

MCD
05-04-2003, 08:50 PM
2-0..thanks for votin..pz.

AllAboutMe
05-05-2003, 12:25 AM
vote-MCD, i gotta go with MCD on this one, god damm ill drop man, that shit is fun ta read, nice multies and real tight punches, i loved the first two lines, really gets you going into the verse

for floetry i just thought you concentrated more on using big vocabulary and making words rhymes then actually throwing punches

here's a proposition, don't rap for-commission in yur poor-position/
inhibition in addition to ambition leads to a transition in yur-condition/

^ for exemple, this is a very simple rhyme with too many words that rhyme together and dont get anywhere

i give floetry the top creativity cuz there was some good original and creative shit in there but i give the rest to MCD, nice battle

MCD
05-05-2003, 05:56 AM
3-0..thanks for voting guys - TKO.

Floetry
05-05-2003, 10:22 AM
my verse would be dope if it was audio, and i could do express shit the way I want to, but good battle anyways MCD, good luck in finals

Ghetto Ninja
05-05-2003, 03:11 PM
|Locked|

devlin wins an moves on.. an NOT necessairily will he be right to the finals...