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DISScontent
04-30-2003, 08:07 PM
Yo
I am new too so this should be pretty even. Not many rules. Come hard no ill feelings. first to 5 wins 3-0 is a ko. No real limit on lines but no need to go crazy.

I will post sometime tonight or tommorow depending on how much time I have. You can have as long as you need but try to make it quick. COOL????

DISScontent
05-01-2003, 03:52 AM
Well I guess I will go ahead and post. Like I said you can take as long as you need to post but lets try to make it quick.

HypMyk you say your a rookie waitin 4 your rhymes to be tested
Well here I am steppin up your worst nightmare manifested
your the same as the rest
so go ahead spit your best
But you best wear a vest
Cuz I'll bust two in your chest
But just like your freinds a vest can't protect you
When I'm done in here they will mock and reject you

I'ma rip your voice box out, cut off your right arm for good measure
I'll be nice and leave your left so you can give your self some pleasure
and don't try to say you'll get your girl to do it yo!
You couldn't buy a blow job from a nasty crack head hoe!

Check my multis check um twice
I never ever sacrifice gramatical precision my method of execution is precise
The lyrical storm I bring will leave your body packed in ice
and all who witness my mental fitness will be sayin "Damn this Brotha's NICE"

Check your cerebral son I snatched it and I ate that shit for lunch
I loved the sound it made when I snapped your spine " snap crackle CRUNCH"
You can leave the POP for brittney christina and Nsync
Where have I heard that style before? OH wait now let me think
It was you. you should consider crossing over cuz you weak
After this it's safe to say you can start your losing streak.

well There it is. I hope I came a little harder then I did against haydude, more punches not as much poetry.

HypeMyk
05-01-2003, 10:13 AM
i'm not a rookie, just new to this site, you missed da hint/
and i'm "pleased to rip you up" cause my "diss-content"/
if you was "slippen with burnt lines" you "still couldnt "drop a hot verse"/
like a "Bitch before your-in(urine) you gotta "cop-a-squat first"/
diss....you can try to bite or sequel my lines/
but even your "4-5" still couldnt equal my nine"/(4+5=9)
i kill emcees like "drugs" cause i'm known to "shoot or smoke ya"/
my guns got more "pump action" than a "super soaker"/
i know you cant write so i guess you cant go off of the brain/
you couldnt "drop a DISS" if you took the "first four letters off of ya name"/
theres no use in alarmin cause my drama is bombin'/
all your shit is "lost rap(wrap)" like "osama bin ladin"/
if this was a song and not a battle you get the hook next/
but i just made this guy sound wacker than that kid cook x/

nice verse dog..lets get the votes going...1

DISScontent
05-02-2003, 12:48 AM
Damn! not bad kid! See I hate droppin first. I got nothing to work off of. But Oh well I just can't wait to get in a tourney.

I'm_Pissed
05-02-2003, 02:42 AM
^^^actually working off verses is a strict no-no....just telling you.

anyway,

flow:hypmyk
multis:disscontent
wordplay:hypemyk
punches:hypmyk

diss, ya definately improved since haydude....still, some of its just to poetic and fillerish....but some of ya lines were good.

I'ma rip your voice box out, cut off your right arm for good measure
I'll be nice and leave your left so you can give your self some pleasure

that wasnt bad

and the snap crackle pop line was aight too....need more wordplay like that.

ya flow was inconsistent..but i can see itll get there...^^the two lines i quoted flowed quite well, so stay with that. ya had some multis aswell but they wont really work well until ya get ya flow sorted out so work wit that first. better than the average newb...good work.

hypemyk...nice verse dog, i didnt know ya had skills like that.

flow was decent...didnt see too many multis. the wordplay and punches were real good tho...good rhymes, multisylabic

if you was "slippen with burnt lines" you "still couldnt "drop a hot verse"/
like a "Bitch before your-in(urine) you gotta "cop-a-squat first"/
diss....you can try to bite or sequel my lines/
but even your "4-5" still couldnt equal my nine"/(4+5=9)
i kill emcees like "drugs" cause i'm known to "shoot or smoke ya"/


tight^^ particularly liked the 4-5 line....the urine line had me laughing.

so my votes for hypemyk

peace

HypeMyk
05-02-2003, 09:57 AM
Originally posted by I'm_Pissed
^^^actually working off verses is a strict no-no....just telling you.

my fault...i wasnt aware we were supposed to use opponents verse to feed off of...any wayz...uppin for votes

Da Dirty Crook
05-02-2003, 09:23 PM
anyway this battle was coo...Diss I wasnt feeling your verse much dogg...you had some aight shit but it wasnt no match for HypeMyks shit...Myk you had some nice shit tho you had a few played punches tho...and your structure needs some work...work on mulits and a bigger vocab...lil too much filler and your verse also....you got skills tho...

Vote-HypeMyk

HypeMyk
05-03-2003, 02:54 PM
2-0 uppin

HypeMyk
05-04-2003, 11:41 AM
c'mon votes...

HypeMyk
05-05-2003, 02:08 PM
come on a vote peeps

HypeMyk
05-06-2003, 09:53 AM
damn.....one more freakin vote peeps....why is this site so slack on voters

HypeMyk
05-07-2003, 09:54 AM
yo what the fuck do i have to do to get a vote in this mother fucka.....

Bernard
05-08-2003, 09:48 PM
Ok, DISScontent lacked flow, punch and multies soo...
Vote = HypeMyk

HypeMyk
05-09-2003, 09:54 AM
3-0 knockout....good battle dog...