to understand me,
is to find the link thats missin
i pic it up, and the crowds just start trippin
now listen
to what i have to say
these lyrics im droppin is like heroshima on D'day
in my way
is a bad place to be
its a bird, its a plane, NO its JT
dont get the wrong idea, and think im dissin
but i know bout mamas and script pills in the kitchen
im ya typical, mystical, disturbed white kid
livin the urban life like my name was EMinem
this aint even the best stuff,
cuz i dont want it bit
but even the worst stuff just ROCKS like im KID
so ima put it down,
before i put the keys ta blazin
go against me, automatic second placin



IF you want me,,,,,come get me

well tha rap went down hill from tha beginning....
and you talked about that emiemm thing an dall

\you did have sum analogies which is good, but work on your scheme a lil bit more

word ^

Didnt really have a whole lot of High points in it.

The reference to Em was a big blow to it.

work on the lyricism some.