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Mr. Meyahgee
04-27-2003, 10:40 PM
first to 5 wins
must vote on two other battles
8 lines min
24 max

no biing, recycling, or flipping

vote like this

multies:
flow:
punches:
wordplay:
creativity:


pz

Bernard
04-28-2003, 09:59 AM
Checking in, I can drop later today or whenever.

Bernard
04-28-2003, 02:12 PM
Man! I'm ready NOW!!! I hope I don't have to rewrite it.

MCD
04-28-2003, 02:16 PM
checkity check check -

yo - let me pose a rhetorical question? who the fuck-is-Oracle? -
if you lose bitch - you won't get over it - i'm too-big-an-obstacle -
shit's-impossible - like freestyling when your throat-is-seized -
Oracle better stay away from this - bitch cant come close-to-me -
you-roasted-G// i'll smash you wit pills cuz you gettin wrecked-wit-E's(ease) -
Oracle aint dumb as shit? This garbage-emcee forgets-to-breathe! - on a regular-basis -
there's so-many-places I could scatter your title and forget-what-your-name-is// -
you gettin slain-kid - at most you could tie this bout with your own entrails -
and if you could measure whackness in buckets - it would take ten-pales -
just to understand the motive behind why you write-rhymes
I'll Split Oracles Nutsack just to open his mind!
so-focus-take-time// You prayin for a miracle -
there's more chance of me losing than you producing anything Lyrical! - It's critical -
And if you thought you had a chance - Oracle, you're wrong-friend -
ya shit's like budget-books... Faggot aint got no content

yeah...

Bernard
04-28-2003, 02:28 PM
Ok, I won't even rewrite it here it goes my "no content", hey maybe the whole this is not even "personal", all together irrellevant.

Ha Ha, British rap, I take of hit of that
Short flows coming off soft like your humping the mic
She told you to get off and you’re, barely touching her mite
Correction “Mate”, for heaven’s sake a sex life of cereal rape?
Pipsqueak on the mic, couldn’t impregnate a chic if you
Romped anonymous and covered your face
Bust in your hand, that’s the only way to get a nut in
Hit a coward like all of a sudden I slapped a bitch and over done it
This cunt is cumming wet drippy crack open a window this thing is stinky
Sour in public, on your knees screwing your face
You got issues queerer than MJ sued in his case
Women just slap you, like what is the use of this mase?
Back break you in half and just laugh like yo
“Hobbled coward, I grace the track, while you’re losing the race!”
I’m improving my ace, while your useless toothpicks fueling my flames!
Like Corky from “Wonder Years” stressed just trying to finish one page
Playing doctor like a dose of your face, I administer one strange
Are you a gargoyle or a troll in this Dungeon of Dragons, I administrate one stage
So please, to me explain, because your efforts have me confused
Are your trying to get bruised, or pussy just trying to get laid?
Seriously that whole whack 2 hit style is kind of old played

MCD
04-28-2003, 02:34 PM
voting time:)

Crazee
04-28-2003, 02:34 PM
Shit nigga , T1 oracle is impressive... I don't like this voting system, but eh...

multies: tie
flow: t1
punches: MCD
wordplay: MCD
creativity: t1

hmmmm.... Ima' give it to MCD because I liked his verse as a battle rap more, but both verses were good.

MCD
04-28-2003, 02:41 PM
1-0

Bernard
04-28-2003, 02:46 PM
More votes please.

Crazee
04-28-2003, 03:01 PM
Oracle, I can't wait til I hear some audio from you. Your shit looks dope.

Ghetto Ninja
04-28-2003, 03:15 PM
multies: Tie
flow: T1
punches: MCD
wordplay: MCD
creativity: Tie... (both had creative parts an didn't really rely on their creativeness...)

T! u had an aight verse.. BUT like sex said, MCD had more aof a direct battle verse... VOte- Devlin([]\/[]CD)

2-0 Devlin...

Bernard
04-28-2003, 03:21 PM
Not to complain but, I'd like to see quotes in your votes. That way I can see what you're seeing, and figure out what you're thinking. At least one person do it. I would very much appreciate it, thanks.

cook x
04-28-2003, 04:40 PM
multies-tie
flow-t1
wordplay-mcd
creativity-mcd
punches-mcd

[[maybe muddled up (as in order),??/\/\ above]]

vote=mcd
reason=his punch's and verse was more direct.....agreeing with focus and sexorcist but in my own opinion aswell....t1-your verse was good but was kind of ''slow''---slow as in not much punch maybe...?

peace

Bernard
04-28-2003, 05:05 PM
^ that's a vote? Nothing's slow here, I was hitting by the second line, that "Short flows" thing was based on his work. I say 2-0. You have to have your own opinion, and a truthful one at that. No more of these one line explanations, this is the tornament not the mine field.

cook x
04-28-2003, 05:11 PM
SLOW AS IN YOUR VERSE WASNT DIRECT PUNCHIN'---ITS I WORD I USED AND PUT IN " FOR A REASON-THAT A SOMETHING FOR YOU TO READ NOT PART OF THE BLOODY VOTE SO JUST TAKE IT I VOTED MCD.
VOTE=MCD ,,,I THINK YOU SHOULD COUNT MY VOTE

Ghetto Ninja
04-28-2003, 05:12 PM
WTF u bitching at? shit i see what ya say'n tho....

2-0 Cook X's vote don't count he/she in a BIG way contradicted them selves

cook x
04-28-2003, 05:16 PM
OK,OK.....
PEACE

haydude
04-29-2003, 02:49 AM
just like i thought....tight battle^, but one sided..

i think mcd took it in all categories...
multis, flow, wordplay, punches, creativity:

"if you lose bitch - you won't get over it - i'm too-big-an-obstacle"

^great fuckin line...flowed nicely with other one

"Oracle better stay away from this - bitch cant come close-to-me -
you-roasted-G// i'll smash you wit pills cuz you gettin wrecked-wit-E's(ease) -
Oracle aint dumb as shit? This garbage-emcee forgets-to-breathe! - on a regular-basis -"

^nice multis...sweet rhymes and good punches = clever

"and if you could measure whackness in buckets - it would take ten-pales -
just to understand the motive behind why you write-rhymes
I'll Split Oracles Nutsack just to open his mind!
so-focus-take-time//"

^again...fuckin awesome multis and tight lines
beat him up with punches, good flow...

oracle: an aight spit...some shit was tight:

"Hit a coward like all of a sudden I slapped a bitch and over done it"

^hehehe...great line...really sick flow = clever
ur structure was a little confusin...flow was off for me some times
rhymes were hard to fine...off at times...

"Pipsqueak on the mic, couldn’t impregnate a chic if you
Romped anonymous and covered your face"

^weak...

"This cunt is cumming wet drippy crack open a window this thing is stinky"

^wack- that aint no punch, just forced filler...

"Like Corky from “Wonder Years” stressed just trying to finish one page
Playing doctor like a dose of your face, I administer one strange
Are you a gargoyle or a troll in this Dungeon of Dragons, I administrate one stage"

^ok?!?....hehehe - weak diss, very weak rhyme...

vote - mcd...

peace...theres^ ya quotes...

Ghetto Ninja
04-29-2003, 03:05 AM
[]\/[]CD wins Via tko 3-0 an moves on to the next round....

Props to Both of yah...

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