I've got verses to flood the hearses
Cloud the day with my curses
Observe the furnerals of raped casualties
Abused ladies those robbed men
Acting like babies when I snatch their purses
Automatic collapse on the first hit
The worst get
Severed off discarded in loss
Harsh rejected discharged and tossed
When I flow off my art
Clear off and spark, fire
To the crowds of bodies now fleeing my start

20 lines 5 votes challenge to anyone who can take this apart.

^ that shouldn't set the bar too high

Ah forget that, aggressive attack
Manifest the tragic act with a jagged hack
Forrests collapse because the peace crossed
A hazardous path
After this last blast of energy surging
The earth will in shambles lie disheveled like your mind state
When I change it, with my rhyme flow forever to you serving
Never will I be urging the soft to gentle land
When I raise and stand with internal pain
Vigorously churning heavy past continually unearthing
Crashing and burning comets
Will never match the rage
Of my attacks on life spans
Seeking to be shortened
Seeking is me calls for caution
Attacking me result problems
Cardiac, cranial, circulatory or otherwise vital
Exicte you with my verses recital
Deny you when I serve out reprisal
And note this before your arrival

battles go in the mine feilds thread, the lounge is just to set up who your battling with and what rules etc.
pm cook x for a battle, im sure shed do it....and the skills would be well matched hehehe