Yo, I dont need help, I'll take my own out for assistance
Fuck Chasin infinite, I'm zoned out an Against it
So try to test me an I'll blow your dome outta positions
Hand-Crafted Skill to have you Blown out of Existance
Great Topic emcees are born, at least every thousand fuckers
But i Rap around pure shit, like Nellys Album Cover
I come with a short fuse, so if you light it then run
Find me in the wrong place, Like Iversons Gun
I'm white an I'm dumb but I'm as tight as they come
Dont have a place to kill a cat, got the right to graze one
I'm sick of these dumb fucks, not afraid to admit it
But fuck it most yall want listen to what i say for a minute
But If you do decide to come at me and attack at every angle
Just remember i Hold up more shit than nellys ankles

ey yo, tyte drop dawg, u wanna collab ??

what tha deal wit that shit BOY.. ill as fuck
people dont sleep on this candidate...
wanna do a colla?

nice multis and word play...



"But i Rap around pure shit, like Nellys Album Cover"
made tha rhyme 10 tymes more dope

what are u up to

yah kid this was sick...

But If you do decide to come at me and attack at every angle
Just remember i Hold up more shit than nellys ankles

Great Topic emcees are born, at least every thousand fuckers
But i Rap around pure shit, like Nellys Album Cover

I come with a short fuse, so if you light it then run
Find me in the wrong place, Like Iversons Gun

made me laugh...

hot shit kid.....

put THAT in your bowl and smoke it.... haha

i dunno, i didnt like it as much as everyone else i guess
it was aight though...

too many weak rhymes...

Thanks for the Feedback, I'll collab with anybody who wants too.

Haydude ^ Hahahaha, did you even read the rhyme.

Weak rhymes, hahahaha


........hahahahaha, HA HA HA

it is funny, but your "rap"(if thats what you call it) wasnt that funny...

actually, yeah it was, hehehehe...

actually haydude is a shittalkin prick, he pissed off dat he cant get it up wit gurls coz of his 2 inch dick so he's ryding in here dat fuckin homo

Originally posted by haydude
i dunno, i didnt like it as much as everyone else i guess
it was aight though...

too many weak rhymes...

I don't usually wild out on people when people state something I disagree with... I just argue it, but for real... this HAS to be said.

*You're a fucking moron*

Paramount flipped a fluid and constant rhyme scheme of triples every line without sacrficing cohesive, clever content or flow even slightly. As far as battle rap goes - No word or statements were awkward, and no conveyance of thought was interrupted to shit out a "hot" rhyme.

Not one thing about this piece was less than solid. It cannot be objectively considered weak.

...back to the subject though. Nice piece... one of the better ones I've read in awhile, and your writing style is very well done. Didn't have any of those little novice flaws I can't stand.

^^word^^
fuck this kid tryin 2 start beef

Hhahahaha hayfruit, your just a loser

and i appreciate the replies