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theoneandonly04
04-07-2003, 12:39 PM
you spit first 20 bars
recycle reuse
do anything that you think will help earn you votes

slim_hata
04-07-2003, 01:17 PM
come on cook x post for this thread and the one againest me!
i wanna see and put in votez

theoneandonly04
04-07-2003, 03:33 PM
wheres cook x
whats takeing him so long

slim_hata
04-07-2003, 04:24 PM
he is a she !!!!

cook x is a she and shes already got her piece ready for ya
i bet----she probably aint home till later

slim_hata
04-07-2003, 04:26 PM
u should vote on cook x vs suppa-man

theoneandonly04
04-07-2003, 05:02 PM
slim hata
do you really think cook x is gonna beat me
are you seriusly saying that her shit is better then mine
ha ha ha ha
well i geuss we will have to wait and see

cook x
04-07-2003, 05:03 PM
aiight dawg/
shit,i waz hopin' for us to battle/
you know why?/
because i've never played cattle/
yo,you may idolise and fantasise 'theoneandonly zero four style'/
but this is gonna take a while for you to come to terms with/
my verse is tighter than the humber-bridge-connected/
your piece will be like mummy,bum chum,groupie thing/
crowd'll have you up for section 78,you know what i mean?/
damn,i just fell/
my body went down but my soul deflected and my shit went and hit the underground/
now its in your face/
boy or girl with or without a race/
you see i'm god/
part of the religious team/
if i want'd to i could could turn off your pain like permanant-morphein/
but i aint gonna/
i'ma leave ya to ditch yourself/
like when monkey agreed yo shit waz wack in 'bust a rhyme'/
oh shit-i'm outa lines/



sorry i waz 1 or 2 hrs late at postin'----not that there waz a time limit! hurry to drop your shit thankz peaze dawg

cook x
04-07-2003, 05:07 PM
YO TO ANYONE WHO KNOWZ MY PREVIOUS 'WACK' SHIT
PLEAZE SAY IF I'VE IMPROVED
THANKZ

VOTE NOW

CHEERZ

theoneandonly04
04-07-2003, 05:14 PM
aight that was nice
my shits rated r
so all 12 year olds close your eyes
and dont try to bite
im beating you without haveing to try
im not even bustin a sweat
after i finish with you
im going after slim hata next
im doing this shit called rappin
for the satisfaction
the passin of rappin
your finished
like your lincon
and im his assasin
his killer
a lyrical blood spiller
no ones iller then me
i cant decide are you a he or a she
dont take your period out on me
geeze
by the way i wrote this while i was asleep

cook x
04-07-2003, 05:20 PM
FUCK! THAT HAD QUITE A CATCH! (mainly to the end)
BUT THE LINES WERE s---h----o----r----t

theoneandonly04
04-07-2003, 05:23 PM
what you tring to say
fuck it
alright people come on vote

haydude
04-07-2003, 08:21 PM
aight...obviously u fuckers arent understandin shit
u're like comedy acts, but i'm laughin at you...
u both talkin such smack and shit, i'd thought
this battle would atleast b kinda good, especailly
when theoneandonly was bein all cocky and shit...

this battle just discovered a new level of wackness,
but thats about all it did-both of u should be ashamed
cuz u insulted urselves in ur own spits more than ur opponent

vote - weak battle
neither of u should want to win

i'm serious though, u both sucked so much i cant vote for n e one..
sorry...

peace

cook x
04-08-2003, 03:11 AM
UPPIN FOR VOTEZ

cook x
04-08-2003, 10:50 AM
Originally posted by haydude
aight...obviously u fuckers arent understandin shit
u're like comedy acts, but i'm laughin at you...
u both talkin such smack and shit, i'd thought
this battle would atleast b kinda good, especailly
when theoneandonly was bein all cocky and shit...

this battle just discovered a new level of wackness,
but thats about all it did-both of u should be ashamed
cuz u insulted urselves in ur own spits more than ur opponent

vote - weak battle
neither of u should want to win

i'm serious though, u both sucked so much i cant vote for n e one..
sorry...

peace

JUST FUCKIN CHOOSE ----- VOTE!

Crazee
04-08-2003, 11:19 AM
vote = cook x

At least I could pick up some decent limes in there

cook x
04-08-2003, 11:22 AM
THANKZ FOR VOTIN' SEXORCIST

UPPIN FOR VOTES

1-0 3-0 KO OR 1ST TO FIVE

Punk
04-08-2003, 03:30 PM
*smacks both of these two peeps* damn lol tat was one fucked up battle!
ok theoneandonly you gotta improve with your battlin skills man. too short of lines get some multis and more vocab into it and you will get betta.
vote= cook X nice job for a youngin'.

cook x
04-08-2003, 03:38 PM
thankz for the vote 'punk' peaze

i need one more vote on me and i win by ko

UPPIN FOR VOTEZ

gangstalita
04-08-2003, 03:59 PM
my vote goes to.....(*thinking*)..

it`ll have to go with cook...even though we seem to be beefin(i dont know how that started)..cook had a few better lines in there..content was alot better than theoneandonly...theoneandonly needs to lengthin his lines,and put in some better punches...thats all i got to say..

cook x
04-08-2003, 04:06 PM
THANKZ FOR THE VOTE GANGSTALITA -CANCELL OUT ANY BEEF THERE WAZ BETWEEN US.

I WIN !!! KO TO ME NICE BATTLE 'THEONEANDONLY'

THANKZ TO ALL WHO VOTED

kinks
04-08-2003, 06:08 PM
hahahaha. wack shyt no doubt. What was going on here? oh well, my vote: Cook-X....
the one and only, no wonder you lonely, those lines are small, I bet you are too! lol. j/k...peaz.

theoneandonly04
04-08-2003, 06:30 PM
nice battle cook
peace

I'm_Pissed
04-09-2003, 01:00 AM
vote - cook x

cook x,
you had a couple of alright lines, good vocab and creativity but i didnt see a lot of hard hitting punches. the flow was off too most of the way throughout. try to avoid going from medium lenght bars to short ones, keep it more consistent. for a 12 year old....not bad at all i guess, try to channel that creativity and vocab into something a bit more offensive which flows.
and try rhyming more than one sylabble


theoneandonly,

flow was better, only coz it was more consistent, bars were waaay to short though. vocab wasnt as good.

my shits rated r
so all 12 year olds close your eyes

that almost won you my vote, but you lost it because you went off on a bit of a tangent talking about slim hater or something....if the bar lengths were longer maybe there would have been more content and then more punches.....but that and the abraham lincoln one were the only ones i saw.
fix up the bar lengths and get more of where that ^^ punch came from and youll be right.

cook x
04-09-2003, 03:51 AM
5-0 TO ME EVEN THOUGH I WON ON 3-0
THIS IS THE SECOND BATTLE I'VE WON ON 'KO'
I THINK I'VE IMPROVED A LITTLE
THANKZ TO EVERYONE WHO VOTED PEAZE