-just felt like rappin, so...


Im introducin my fuckin self
Here I am with all of my wealth
Im about to take over
Red rover, I call yo fuckin ass over
You think youre the fuckin ace
Im the leader of the race
You just the followers of the chase
Cant keep up to my fuckin pace
Then Im leavin you behind
Time after time
Take the fuckin hint
You never gonna beat me in a sprint
All you ever wanted was the money and the fame
But Im the king of this game
We aint the fuckin same
Ive sacrificed everythin I ever had
Just to make others feel happier than glad
Even if I made myself alittle mad
So when I go out
And all I wanna do is shout
Take the fuckin nigga route
Cuz Im always tryin to succeed
Im never gonna let this game make me bleed
Im plantin a seed
In the minds of the younger generations...

Welcome to my introduction
Can you feel the suction
Im pullin you all in
Forgive me for Ive lived a life of nothin but sin
But aparently you already forgave me
Cuz you read all about my controversy
And you still on my side
Boostin up my fuckin pride
Touchin me deep down inside
So, Im thankin you for doin what you do
As long as you around, Im never gonna be through
So now you know who I am
Im the next fuckin eminem...

tha flow was decent
hmm... didnt have anything that popped out, rap is more than just rhymin words at tha end of each line..
try usin sum metaphors or sum analogies
keep it up son

aight guy, thank...

it was just a freestyle though,
but yeah...coo...

glad u enjoyed...