Yo, whats this u tryin to play me again, aint gonna happen
gonna live this life all by myselfe no girlz just rappin
yo i know i might be white and it's gonna be hard but i try it
any fuc*in f@ggots try to stop me my nines applyin it
not even half way through the rhyme and guess what i'm British
now i Know that fuc*in infos gone attract some fuc*in critics
yo right now on this beat i'm gonna think of people to diss
but i got never endin names thats a fuc*in long list
but i aint got enough time to say so i'd better just skip it
and where i come from up in my hood we just love to sit and spit it,
but i've been stabbed in the back so many fuc*in times
i lost count after ninety and started bustin these rhymes
this is a lyrical controversy i don't know where to stop
yo my tempers got a limit and it's nearly hittin the top
don't push me anymore im really losin my patience
and when im finished with you i'll be lucky to get probation
and if i ever get out of jail i'll come and find you again
cos i'm a muthafuc*er ihold grudges right to the end
yo i don't do drugs but everyone smokes dope
and i do, do shrooms but i don't do coke
all bitches is ho's there only fuc*in trouble
they come fuc* you crazy then they steal your money doble.

yo i hope u liked it peace!

was a nice drop, flowed ppretty good, rhyme scheme wasnt n e thing fantastic

word of advice- if u want feed back, then give feedback

uppin

i didnt catch tha flow...
i liked tha scheme and all but tha multiple rhymin was not as good as i like it...
keep up tha good werk and let me see sum more
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it was decently put together...It definitely coulda used some multies and some flow work.

Keep workin on it