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gangstalita
02-28-2003, 02:13 PM
Ive been abandoned by you for reasons “unknown”/
Why is it that your love for me was never “shown”/
You told me I would be someone you`d never “disown”/
Now im standin at your grave,minds been “blown”/
Cant seem to understand why you had to “die”/
I cared so much for you,why you wanna make me “cry”/
I swore to you I didn’t “lie”,but I cant help but wonder “why”/
You had to leave that cold,dark “night”/
N end up in the cross fire durin that gun “fight”/
You moved towards the “light”,leavin me in a state of “fright”/
Cuz now im left to run this emotional “race”,in this cold dark “place”/
Where the people are just names without a “face”/
Who feed on their loved ones “soul”/
Eatin through their heart n leavin a “hole”, Cuz theirs was evidently “stole”/
They came to spit on your “grave”,after turnin you into their eternal “slave”/
Telling me I should learn to “behave”/
Or I`ll lose “another”,n end up like a ghost in “the-other”/
Loosin the next one I love like my big “brother”/
Havin the death cycle “repeat”,till theirs one they cant “defeat”/
N ends up becoming a normal cycle that’s clean n “neat”/
No more gun “fire”,no more slit throats wit a “wire”/
No more run over bodies from a car “tire”/
Just family bein “together”,fightin the stormy “weather”/
Bein happy no matter “whatever”/
But those evil people are my family,n you were my “dad”/
Takin off this earth leavin me lonely n “sad”, Why did I treat you so “bad”/
Shouldve believed everything you “said”, But now your breathless n “dead”/

feed plz..it somethin that just started poppin in to my head while thinkin bout my family...so i need to know if this was any good...thanks..
:)

gangstalita
03-04-2003, 01:55 PM
uppin on some feed.....anyone???

JIZM
03-04-2003, 02:30 PM
nice post...i see youve brushed up on your skills....keep elevatin...1

gangstalita
03-04-2003, 02:34 PM
thanks jizm..i appreciate it...anyone else???