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just a rough draft... gonna tweak it all up... maybe re-write the whole thing.. an defenitly the third verse... (reason why it's not up there)

it was..ok..i wasnt feelin the hook,the flow was off,the lyrics were alright..(*slaps mentol*)but vocab was good..lol..it was an ok drop but not ya best..

I thought this was coo'... the speech is kinda slurred, but 50 Cent runs with it, so who can complain? The beat is TIGHT... you sound genuine on this track...

it was fine...flow was good,lyrics were tight..you get the idea..lol

lol - i'm here now man....

super quiet. chorus is a little weird man - could do with filling up tha space a bit better... but hw you say it with tha change in voice pitch.. dope

i like ya voice on this a lot... suits tha beat... (dope beat - sho-down. it flows how i reckoned it would when you told me tha beat...

dope lyrics..... i liked ya delivery.... needs to be louder and could do with an outro..... some of tha chorus should be changed i reckon but tha premise and beginning of it is dope...

great content. When this is "tweaked" i reckon i'll d/l

got it! its tha way you say "mine" in tha chorus... fucking sick!

PZ> man

thanks for the fee.. an yea imma tweak this alot

whats tweak

Originally posted by Mr. Diabolical
whats tweak

fi>< up a bit or alot.. just to change shit around