View Full Version : Luv Struck (Featuring Dr. Alfred)


V i L E
02-27-2003, 10:30 PM
OK, so there's no Dr. Alfred in the song, but it was originally written by he and I when I was like 16 (2 years ago). It's my most heart-felt track. I'm rapping fast, like Dr. Alfred writes. Not too many have heard this track (4 people), and you'll see a whole nuther side of me. Download it, for soundclick is a pain in the penis when it comes to streaming. And give your HONEST opinions also.

Luv Struck (http://www.soundclick.com/vile)

Shady Makaveli
02-28-2003, 02:20 AM
This was pretty nice. Vocals could be a little louder... Weird going from "I Luh' Deas Hoes" too this though... Nice drop...

eminemsgirl4lfe
02-28-2003, 11:55 AM
it was good..your flow was really the only thing that couldve been adjusted..

-NinjaMic-
02-28-2003, 12:21 PM
I remember when you guys posted this... I was like 2 months deep in EB. Too bad Doc isn't still around, 'cause he was on point with audio from the get go...

Anyway... nice shit, the dialogue is perfect. Pretty ill that you flowed this peice well, 'cause if I remember right this was written back when we were all suffering from screen-width bars that didn't flow half the time... keep in touch with this side of your lyrics, 'cause there's always room for a break-up-to-make-ups song on a debut album///that drop with the strings at about 3:47 in made the chorus sound sweet. Only prob is the mixing on the vocals is low... only a studio can mix them perfectly probably.

V i L E
02-28-2003, 09:13 PM
Originally posted by -NinjaMic-
......Pretty ill that you flowed this peice well, 'cause if I remember right this was written back when we were all suffering from screen-width bars that didn't flow half the time...
Yes, and I knew that Doc would have a strange way of flowing this, unless he did the double-bar thing, like I did. But yeah, the last part of the chorus really brought it out, didn't it? I'm feeling good.