This is some shit Ninja and i dropped on them bitch ass niggas at hiphopcentral....peep it....


JIZM:

Enter the Realm of a sick and twisted lyric bigot
You sit and fidget with shit as earth becomes more frigid/
Step through the bog where the fog is thicker than blood
Trip through the crud, and end up stuck stiff in the mud/
JIZMs pet vultures strip off your flesh, visions of death
Evil scriptures chiselled in heads, fire limits your breath/
Victims shredded and limbless at best, triple 6 on my crest
The devils sibling instead just sits there in jest/
People say this kid is a mess, shit id have to agree
and happily treat their words with a gesture of apathy/
Fear surrounds me and just kneels at my feet, feel defeat
Get sheared by the beast and then smeared on the street/
No cheers for the weak, for they operate in oblique ways
ive repaid my debt to society, im free so be afraid/
You should have written your will cause i itch to kill,trick
My shield of allegiance is seated under my screename BITCH/
Got a Lyrical Surgeon in my corner ready to slice you
ill entice you into a pit where NINJA is ready to strike you.....


.....Ninja let these niggas know.........

NinjaMic:

...I come through like head~on~collisions - whiplash'll perforate-'em
my superb-verbatim's like dead~on~precision in vertabrae-abrasion
drink the venom of a tarantula-spider/spit~straight vernacular-fire
& get my dick~ate by bitch~made niggas... in ANY calibre-of-cypher
I could FLATTEN-you-like-tires ~ make the FAT-in-you-perspire
//bring out the FAG-in-you~... just 'cause the FACT-is-you-a-liar!
the Gattica-Inspired, flow's~advanced/my foe's hoes~romance
knowin' I'll pass the bone... and get 'em open like a Moses~staff
your chrome~can~flash, but I won't even give yo' soul~a~chance
/a bullet wound... can only leave my adamantium BONES~enhanced
~ I'm prone-to-berzerk/my slugs'll put a fuckin'... hole-in-the-earth
get close-to-the-burst & lose most of what composes-your-girth
...when I'm stoned-the-flow-hurts & when I'm sober-it's-worse
//when I diss, it's like findin' your mom's body... rolled-in-the-dirt
dead//holdin'-her-skirt - evidence shows they ripped open-her-shirt/
every hole exposed, her throat so broke... there's no hope-it'd-work ~
even IF she survived//so basically my jokes-can-crush (you)
from the emotions-up, and thus... your very soul-gets-touched (true)
rip-em-divine/flip posthumous scripts-in-the-sky :: spit-in-your-eye
IF-you-try to see the JIZM-an'-I//it's like fuckin' with Ninja-... you-DIE


PEACE 2 MY NIGGA NINJAMIC.....1 yall

well i liked this spit
this is a thowed collab
i would like to see more from yall

I like this part best:


JIZMs pet vultures strip off your flesh, visions of death
Evil scriptures chiselled in heads, fire limits your breath/
Victims shredded and limbless at best, triple 6 on my crest
The devils sibling instead just sits there in jest/

lol... they closed the post at the other site. Flame quoted that 'whered you get the name JIZM//backshots in prison' line like it was hot... I spit that a year ago with more multi's.

Wow, this was tizight. I never realy sample nunna Jizm's stuff, I don't recall. But this was tight, like every single line from the boff uh' yaz.

OK, enough of that keyboard slang. But here's the line I was most feeling:
"I could FLATTEN-you-like-tires ~ make the FAT-in-you-perspire
//bring out the FAG-in-you~... just 'cause the FACT-is-you-a-liar!"

And from JIZM:
Step through the bog where the fog is thicker than blood
Trip through the crud, and end up stuck stiff in the mud/

I give this collabo a 9.5/10. Ninja, what's up with all the ( /, //, ~, and -'s)? Seems a bit much. I'd just stick with the double slashes, and the hiphen(sp?) (-). But overall, a good peace.

Please, listen to my track "Luv Struck" and reply to it. It would be GREATLY appreciated.

Yeah... I noticed that when I saw it posted... I think it's cluttered and I didn't even map out ALL of the syllable work and flow steps, just the bulk of it. If I could make the lamen catch all of it without the symbols, it'd be nice... 'cause it makes the text look ugly and takes too damn long to key in.

I already listened to Luv Struck when I peeped "I Luh Deas Hoes"... but I'll reply to the thread tomorrow, after I get home.

thanks for the feedback yall, i appreciate it...hopefully yall will see more collabs from us....yo ninja, them dudes are so fuckin gay...i HATE that kid flames...id like to put some metal in him...lol he got me heated.

lol This reminds me of that "Lyrical Surgery" verse I did about a year and a half back

This shit was sick. I was flowin this and it came out raw. Every line was dope.

Sheeeet, my collabo with Ninja is gonna be so fuckin ill. Yo JIZM, we should do somethin. Holla back

lol @ if there was a line from JIZM about it being oral surgery

Hell if u wanna pop dat nigga yall both come to paris texas and u shoot him and u wont get locked up cuz down here if someone got shot
the law cant solve the case and find out who did it

yo goodlookin out diabolical but ill pop that nigga with one of my 4 pistols in broad daylight, i just dont give a fuck doggy...nahmean?.......yo sexorcist goodlookin on the feedback if u wanna collab hit me.....diabolical u too.....imma only respect niggas on this site from now on cause yall show me love....fuck them other site, imma hit em just to disrupt em wit vocab......peace yall

yea that beef we had in the past im over it

wow... this is hot for real
jizm... love the multies man for real.. real hot rhyme scheme
ill flow (even for te><t)
alot of qoutes
"Step through the bog where the fog is thicker than blood
Trip through the crud, and end up stuck stiff in the mud/"

fowed hot on this

ninja
damn very nice ish man...
you an jizm really done well
ill verse's from both of ya'll

diabolical, no doubt, its all good doggY, peace..


Mentol, thanks for he feedback yo...ive been tightening up my rhymes as much as i can, i hope yall enjoy em, peace.