This one's a bit long...but I couldn't stop writing. It's been lying around for a while....

What is a dream? Just a figment of reality?/
What does it mean? When I dreamt last night of you and me?
I know what you'll say, just let things go, just let things be./
but I'm sick of that now, why can't you see?/
I don't want to 'get naked' right on the spot/
Damn. you're so boring, and you expect me to get it hot?/
No, I'm not doing this with your mom in the next room!/
She could just walk in, it's bound to happen soon./
Go ahead, lock me outside./
See if I care, I know that you lie/
You keep secrets from me twenty-four seven/
You're gonna go to hell, cause you're locked out of heaven/
Look what you did! now, you've pissed me off aight!/
Stop calling me immature, I don't care, you're not right/
Suck it up and pretend to enjoy it/
That's what you told me to do. What, can't handle it?/
Cause I'm on strike for suckin your dick/
Until you make me realize why you enjoy feelin it/
You think I'm gonna let it slip past when you piss me off by 'testing' me/
I get bored in the weight room when your always trying to impress me/
I'm not your bitch toy so don't try pushing me around/
Why you think I've been refusing to always go down?/
Asshole, got my hopes up, saying he was gonna run away with me/
This is a perfect example of how things with him will always be/
His way or the highway, when you're not with him, you too will see/
He'll treat you like you're everything when you're around/
As soon as you're out of his face, he'll knock you to the ground/
He's good at one thing for sure, running away/
He left so much shit lieing out over here, one day he'll pay/
Even if I never see him again, I'll haunt him when I'm deceiced/
That's how much he hurt me, he's still got a piece/
of my heart, my body, my soul, and my mind/
At some point everyday I think of him from time to time/
He was my first for so many things, he introduced me to the world/
At the time we were together, he was proud I was his girl/
But as soon as he moved to the other side/
I guess I was bad for his ego or pride/
So, he tossed his emotions away, and forgot/
I didn't know till it was too late, now my hearts all in knots/
Just like the saying, love hurts, oh it's true/
I won't let it happen again, I'm stronger now, from you.

please please please please tell me what you think!!!! peace. :p

I like it. Flow is simple, but effective. Good lyrics, except for a couple of lines. It was expressive though, I liked it.

thanx. I'll work on it, fix it up, get some better vocab and lines. It is sorta dull, I just thought I'd see what people have to say.

dope.