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kinks
02-20-2003, 01:52 AM
I just had this one pop into my head....
hows it going???

------Abandoned------
Back in eighty-six my birth mom left "me" "be"/ Abandonned since birth, I became government "property"/ Many people felt sorry cause I was all alone you "see"/ No father or mother, it was just "me"/ Now I look back on the crazy thought, it's "disgusting"/ I couldn't picture doing that to no one, not in my wildest "dreams"......

la la la la
I don't know what else I'm gonna put here....
peace. :p

Jenial
02-20-2003, 11:22 AM
this is a good solid start to sometin. Just keep writin on it
Peace

gangstalita
02-20-2003, 01:23 PM
its an ok start..good content goin to it so far..keep it goin and it should turn out ill...holla

kinks
02-25-2003, 06:04 PM
sure, thanx for the input. I'll take it to mind. When I finish it I'll post the 'full' version. peace.

Griff
02-26-2003, 05:16 PM
I like this a lot so far kinks...I like personal stories, instead of bullshit....can't wait to see the rest -Peace