View Full Version : Verse for "Cry me a River" remix I'm doin


50 years ago
02-20-2003, 01:08 AM
When I think back, I remember how you caught my-attention...
When I tried-defendin- but you lied-to-get-in my pants and try-some-shit-and...
it worked, you're obsessed when we talk-on-the-phone...
aw-bitch-come-on, you're datin guys givin all-of-em-dome...
Fuck it, maulin-this-ho suddenly ~seems like~ ~the right~ decision-to-make...
Like bashin the chick-with-a-rake, but I don't I give-her-a-break...
And I'm bitter-but-hey, I was the only one who treated-her-right...
She was beat-and-she-cried , previous-guys defeated-her-mind...
And the worst part? She was raped from the back-in-the-kitchen ...
and it's sad-cause-the-kid-is stuck with mom for a whore and dad-that's-in-prison...
And honestly, I thought you were the one-for-me...
but even if you point the gun-and-squueze, I believe fuck your company...
so Justin-T, tell this bitch to cry-up-a-river...
cause if not, I kill this chick and fry-up-her-liver...
Then again, I shouldn't have fallen-in-love-wit'-a-ho...
when she's on the phone, she's like "I'll grab ya ball-and-just-suck-on-it-slow"...
I'm palmin-and-rubbin-her-yo, I've fuckin turned-to-a-lame...
It's burnin-my-brain, why I'm even concerned-with-the-dame...

I might write a couple more lines dependin on how it fits on the beat, and mold a couple of them, but that's the general design

Tia
02-20-2003, 01:32 AM
:D

wHiRlWiNd
02-20-2003, 01:45 AM
Dammit i actually wrote a verse to this! Haha

Nice multis man, damn near all was multis! Some parts I think should get touched upon like the "grab ya ball" line , haha I laughed my ass off with the "fry her liver" part, I dunno. My favorite part was:

"Fuck it, maulin-this-ho suddenly ~seems like~ ~the right~ decision-to-make...
Like bashin the chick-with-a-rake, but I don't I give-her-a-break...
And I'm bitter-but-hey, I was the only one who treated-her-right...
She was beat-and-she-cried , previous-guys defeated-her-mind..."

Nice drop
Bastard getting there before me!! :D

50 years ago
02-20-2003, 01:55 AM
"Thanks y'all, for always givin me love"

Thanks. Hell yeah, I spit in raw multi's. That's why I'm teachin them :D

Hell, if you want, we could spit verses on a remix, but then it'd be long as fuck.

50 years ago
02-20-2003, 11:04 PM
Stop sleepin on this. I want feedback before I record.

23 views, and 3 fuckin replies? One of which is mine? lmfao

Wake up y'all

Shady Makaveli
02-20-2003, 11:35 PM
Really good multies... Overall pretty tight seems to fit the beat from what I remeber of it...

Stop sleepin on this. I want feedback before I record.

23 views, and 3 fuckin replies? One of which is mine? lmfao

Wake up y'all

You think you got it bad... I got over 80 views for 2 audios and 4 replies including mine... Quit yer bitchin' ...lol

50 years ago
02-20-2003, 11:51 PM
Thanks dawg.... word em up

lmao, sorry about not replyin, I'll d/l them tomorrow. I've been havin trouble with audio

Ghetto Ninja
02-21-2003, 12:48 AM
:D @ this verse.. as i been contimplating droppin one over the 50 cent remix... in the middle jus a small one...

but i liked this verse over all really nice piece... the msg was put across well an i think, this'll flow really good to this track...

i liked the multi's in this really tighlty put together (as usual) none really forced and glad to see like no filler lines.... nixe piece man waitin' on hear'n this now...

50 years ago
02-21-2003, 01:32 AM
Thanks man

V i L E
02-21-2003, 10:13 PM
Tight.... My favorite part was "Fry Up Her Liver" part.

... So when're we gonna do our collabo?

Tia
02-21-2003, 10:16 PM
I can't wait to hear the audio for this

lol @ Ricky's sig

50 years ago
02-21-2003, 11:27 PM
Tia, it's comin soon. D:< @ gettin a cold

lol ViLe. You know how I said I had the verse? Well, I realized it was wack. lmao I guarentee it tomorra, or my money back

fury
02-22-2003, 12:36 AM
hey dogg let me get on the remix

V i L E
02-22-2003, 01:57 AM
^^^^^

D:?

50 years ago
02-24-2003, 04:34 AM
Hell yeah it's angry. Pent up rage is ill.

V i L E
02-24-2003, 12:08 PM
HA!!!! You owe me some money, Sexorcist.