Blah I don't really like dropping text, as I prefer to just do audios. But I found this verse lying around and depending on feedback I might record it sometime. My flow is very much fast but it also slows in areas, with that in consideration hopefully you'll get an idea how it'll sound:

Have you ever seen a man in crutches who just snorted an 8ball and jumped off the empire state twice in 2 plummets?//
Who took a shotgun and pumped it and tested a new vest by taking buck shot straight in the stomach?//
Who said fuck it like he lost all his functions, and just started to beat down munchkins wit a dozen sucker punches//
Well, here's yer introduction, shit I spit fucking acid till every single weak emcee disolves//
Don't like it? Suck my dick, kiss my fucking ass, and tongue lap my bizalls//
I put old women in chokeholds and break their shoulders, both bones, till I crush their larynxes destroying screaming vocals//
Sick isn't it? This twisted shit. You can't get the point, yer missing it, I'm just fucking wit yall I'm not really wicked bitch!//
I continue to scratch the surface like I continually miss an itch//
Throw yer ass on top of a picket fence and then splash you in the face wit infant piss//
I can tell yer body's sending out distress signals, cuz I'm pointing barrels in each ear since I'm fucking obsessed wit pistols//
Blow yer brains out till they start raining till yer testicles! Hah what up Rainman! Lifeless like that mathmatic retarded ass vegetable//
Shit best believe when I'm angered, whirlwind can be scarier than any nuclear war//
Got my boys confused asking me, "Dave what the hell you shooting me for?!!?//
My sanity's vanished in thin air-and-missing and my judgement's impared-and-shifting into a conscience switching to terrorism//
And fuck it, I don't give a shit bout subliminal or apparent-dissing, I don't care-I'm-spitting till every doubter's hair-is-twitching//
That's cuz I spit electricity, or bullets, whatever, cuz already my tech's-spitting-3//
My might's greater, shit I'll rip the fucking hot end off of a curling iron and jam it up a bitch's pussy like it was a vibrator//
A violater, sick in the head//
Light a spliff in my bead, then grab a notebook to jot down all the shits in my head//
Rap's a part of me, I'll spit so fucking hard into that mic that I'll burst every single one of my fucking arteries//
After I'm done sparking weed, I'll go ballistic performing a robbery, strangling a desk clerk wit nothing but her fucking garter string//
I'm drinking a pint of gin wit vicadin and puffing on exhaust pipes taking in nitrogen//
Here I go on a tangent twice again, but I think that's the E, 1? 2? 3?! Falling over myself backwards in till my damn spine will bend//

Shit man, you've improved alot since the old days of ESE

Shit was fuckin sick. I didn't like the beginning, but then it got dope. Especially;

"Sick isn't it? This twisted shit. You can't get the point, yer missing it, I'm just fucking wit yall I'm not really wicked bitch!//
I continue to scratch the surface like I continually miss an itch//
Throw yer ass on top of a picket fence and then splash you in the face wit infant piss//"

"My sanity's vanished in thin air-and-missing and my judgement's impared-and-shifting into a conscience switching to terrorism//
And fuck it, I don't give a shit bout subliminal or apparent-dissing, I don't care-I'm-spitting till every doubter's hair-is-twitching//"

lol, sick multi's

thanks man
uppin'

fucking nice vocab, great multis, couldnt get it to flow in my head in places but im sure it would on audio. Was a nice drop, i say record it, with a good beat itd be pretty dope.

After I'm done sparking weed, I'll go ballistic performing a robbery, strangling a desk clerk wit nothing but her fucking garter string//
I'm drinking a pint of gin wit vicadin and puffing on exhaust pipes taking in nitrogen//


Liked that bit, but the last bar just didnt fit in....like, it was good but the preceding bars were better so it wasnt like a big wowing finish.

but nice work,

peace

thanks for the feedback
uppin'

sleeping bastards!!! LOL, but seriously, uppin for a lil more feedback.

I liked that. I got the point of it really well, and to me it was pretty humurous. I defiently think you should put it into audio. peace.