www.soundclick.com/t1req

Go to "Music" and it's the third one down. Sit through two minutes of me to get to Ninja, I must congratulate on a stellar verse :D

Also, I'm cutting off one song to make my page 30 songs- a nice round number. Name which one you think I should delete, motherfucker.

it was a aight track
didnt really care for the lyrics
just interested in the beat
what beat is that

Tight overall... Req's last to lines didn't seem to fit or something...Ninja's vocab is just insane as usaul lol...Nothing else to say really....

Peep my version? lol

http://www.eminemweb.com/board/showthread.php?s=&threadid=5244

you sounded like you was just talking most of the time. had a good beat and nice theme with interesting words. Liked Ninja's bit.

I think u tried to flow to tha beat.. but at times it came out like u were talkin.Second guys lyrics were good and flow was tight too. Overall it was a good drop.

I know, I suck. lol. Proper audio to follow soon.

I can't listen to audios...blew my speakers last week.
I did read the text though.

It seems like this was written as an afterthought, but I really liked this alot:

if art imitated life, then art would be life
art is a part of life, it was a part of life that fathered the strife
but if life imitated art, then it's life that is art
and in either case that's life… and life is at fault


Wow.

The same idea, I felt this line from Req:

Art Imitates Life, fact is that the world is ailing
And I'm just thinking; if the ghetto kids had been helped from birth they wouldn't have had to have drug slinging as an upbringing
But you all just slam the tracks, hate the guns and gangsta rap


Good writing- flow and content. It would be nice to listen to one day.

No offence Req, but Ninja "murdered you on your own shit". lol

lol for real??

Thanks 'belle- I'm glad you couldn't hear it lol;)
I liked those lines of Ninja's as well, that's why I put him after me when I mixed it. Best till last, ya?

lyrically, this is very very ill for both of you. I like Req's take on the art with use of music and I like how Ninja got really deep with imagery and experience as a way of life imitating art. My only complaints was, Req lol ya you did kinda sound like you were just talking for a bit and the volume in your voice kept going up and down a couple times. Flow was a lil off but overall good. Ninja, what can I say, nice flow and great lyrics. Overall good song. Adorabella pretty much stole my quotes

Yeah, I heard that volume thing but I thought it was just my schizophrenic brain...thanks a lot for the props, Whirliez.

PM from Ayane...
i jus wanted to say that i thought you an ninja did really well on this song...it had lotz of imagery

ie: And, yeah, I'm really sure that it was "Fuck The Police" which first caused a cop to beat a black man up in the street

i thought ur flow waz okay, it seemed a bit slow in some partz, but i really liked the content in this...i also liked

Art Imitates Life, fact is that the world is ailing

i dunno, i jus thought it sounded really good lol...well propz, i really liked it...

~oNe~
Ayane
:D

Originally posted by T1 Req
lol for real??

lol, nah, I just thought I just wanted to say that line. Although, I do think Ninja was better than you, I don't think he murdered you.

:\ @ you rapped a bit too slow for my liking.
:D @ Ninja's voice reminds me a bit of Aesop Rock's.
D:< @ "NinjasIronMic (23:03:31): if art imitated life, then art would be life"