Drug abuse
Self-induced horrors
Bringing habitiual use
As I take in more
Suicidal death pact
God sent in for the smack

It tears away
Like the razor at the walls of life
Time for life to pay
Stabbing through with dull knife
Homocidal rage of the death riding whore
Leaving you dead as you scream out for more

Soul incision
Deathly precision
Doped up body with intentions of destruction
Lying in the dirt as you die
Opposition to the world as you fry

Deathly timed
Body count climbed
Satanic verses rhymed
Saves the dead from their tomb
Takes unborn from life and womb
Smashes the last thread of life as it comes undone

hmmm I can't give good advice for a rock song seeing as Im not really too good with melodies and all that bullshit but I gotta say that this was pretty tight. I like the lyrics, for a rock song they're pretty damn good. Very interesting, I just hope this isn't one of those Slipknot screaming songs, as that would really detract from your lyrics. Pretty good, I likes. As for a title......hmmmmmmm.....how about something Like "Rusted Razorblade" or w/e you might like, think "Cannibal Corpse type of title".

thanks man