View Full Version : Rhyme bout lovin'....tell me what you think...


kinks
02-18-2003, 09:42 PM
I've never posted my verses before, but I'm curious as to what other people think....tell me! I"m listening. thanx. peace.:p

~this part is spoken~

Love. Your love, the object of your affection. Your obsession. The piece of our lives that take us away from reality. Any less, and it's just not real.

~this part is sung~

All day all night. All night all day.
You run through my mind, constantly
You make everything alright, okay

~the verse~
Cap off the 'bottle'// I'm the cork, you've left me 'screwed'// Jam pack full 'throttle'// Babe you're great but who woulda' 'knew'// Under the covers the heat's outa 'control'// Close your eyes to up your other senses 'rolls'// Lust is wonderful when you're my main 'goal'// "Venga aquí atractiva", come here sexy, in 'espanol'// Turn me over, no surprises, get it in the right 'hole'// My name's "kinks", bitch, so why you yellin' 'Nicole'// Put your 'whole' body into the act, not your heart or soul'// When it's over, I'm sorry babe, but I've gotta 'roll'// You think I'm a perfect sin so to the pope you go to 'console'// Clean your thoughts from being dirty so you go for a 'stroll'// Don't call me back 'tomorrow' it was just a one night 'stand'// Smackin my ass and kissin my neck the whole night was 'grand'// then the finallie. I tell ya that was sure 'unplanned'// You made every wish come true at my very 'command'// But you're too much to handle when you get 'out of hand'//

so yeah, tell me what you think. I haven't finished this verse yet, I just sorta got busy. I'd like to collab with a guy, and maybe do an audio......check back. peace.